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you could take the humiliation one step further and make her a human toilet in a glory hole
you could take the humiliation one step further and make her a human toilet in a glory hole
Another awesome work, thank you!The scene I was working on for today started crashing on load, so I had to start over. I got part of it redone, I'll continue working on it and on part 4. It was no big deal, I just should have been saving scene subsets more often hahah.
I went with Hermundurii's suggestion of having Monica working in a public toilet. I decided to put a personal touch on the glory hole... it has mirrors in it, so she has to be constantly reminded of the situation she's in.
Anyway, since the weekday is starting, the pace will go down, here are a couple of Work In Progress Pictures of what I have going on for this one
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PS: Londo_Mollari, I loved your idea too. And I think we can integrate that in that little fan-story.
PPS: Sorry for the noise in the pictures. Once the final version is complete, those will be full-renders without noticeable noise.
Thanks alot, awesome work (as usual) !The scene I was working on for today started crashing on load, so I had to start over. I got part of it redone, I'll continue working on it and on part 4. It was no big deal, I just should have been saving scene subsets more often hahah.
I went with Hermundurii's suggestion of having Monica working in a public toilet. I decided to put a personal touch on the glory hole... it has mirrors in it, so she has to be constantly reminded of the situation she's in.
Anyway, since the weekday is starting, the pace will go down, here are a couple of Work In Progress Pictures of what I have going on for this one
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PS: Londo_Mollari, I loved your idea too. And I think we can integrate that in that little fan-story.
PPS: Sorry for the noise in the pictures. Once the final version is complete, those will be full-renders without noticeable noise.
Ah yes, for sure!Thanks alot, awesome work (as usual) !
I hope you could go one step further and make her a 'human toilet', if you know what I mean. With mirrors all around her it will become even more humiliating, nice touch !
This part isn't written in stone yet, would you prefer her to be enjoying the ride? Or should she still be struggling with her "new career" as public toilet?Btw, Monica is smiling ... so, she seems to enjoy what she sees and what she's doing ^^
I'm much more into humiliation (and darker stuff ). For my taste, Monica shouldn't enjoy it at all ^^ But there are different opinions.Ah yes, for sure!
That is in the plans.
This part isn't written in stone yet, would you prefer her to be enjoying the ride? Or should she still be struggling with her "new career" as public toilet?
I would love rendering this in either way.
Of course she shall not like it !!!Ah yes, for sure!
That is in the plans.
This part isn't written in stone yet, would you prefer her to be enjoying the ride? Or should she still be struggling with her "new career" as public toilet?
I would love rendering this in either way.
I think that the color of "lemonade" is a little oversaturated, and so in general it is well done.I'm open for feedback and suggestions on how to improve this.
I think that the color of "lemonade" is a little oversaturated, and so in general it is well done.
I think it's getting better. More natural)I think it looks much better now, thanks for bringing that up.
Awesome !!!Thanks for the quick feedback
I can see what you're saying, it pretty much looks like the guy has a serious kidney problem going on.
I've tweaked the colors around I'll post the same image re-rendered with the new materials for the Urine. Hopefully it will be better this time.
Here's a partial render of what I have at the moment (ignore the image noise, I just wanted to share it quickly for the conversation to flow. I will be uploading a story collection with this and other images being HD renders soon.)
I think it looks much better now, thanks for bringing that up.
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PS: As I usual, I'm happy to share what I've learned so far, so for anyone that is curious on how to achieve a similar effect in their own renders, here are some key things I've picked up so far:
(a lot of it came from looking at how other people were doing it in their works)
- The biggest contributor to the urine color in the renders will be the "Glossy Color" Parameter, and this thing will really blow up in saturation. Don't try to make your "Glossy Color" look orange/yellow in the configuration, make it a very very bright orange/yellow, to the point that it looks pretty much white to you. I've used RGB=(1, 0.97, 0.79) to get the color used in this render.
- For the urine over Monica's body I completely disabled the Volume Category by setting "Thin Walled" settings. I found that using volume values for the urine over the body was always causing the renders to look weird and unrealistic. I did leave Volume Parameters ON for a lot of other urine meshes though, for example, the jet coming out of the man's penis.
- Leave Base Color in full white.
This one is definitely a great improvement and looks fantasticThanks for the quick feedback
I can see what you're saying, it pretty much looks like the guy has a serious kidney problem going on.
I've tweaked the colors around I'll post the same image re-rendered with the new materials for the Urine. Hopefully it will be better this time.
Here's a partial render of what I have at the moment (ignore the image noise, I just wanted to share it quickly for the conversation to flow. I will be uploading a story collection with this and other images being HD renders soon.)
I think it looks much better now, thanks for bringing that up.
View attachment 1089218
PS: As I usual, I'm happy to share what I've learned so far, so for anyone that is curious on how to achieve a similar effect in their own renders, here are some key things I've picked up so far:
(a lot of it came from looking at how other people were doing it in their works)
- The biggest contributor to the urine color in the renders will be the "Glossy Color" Parameter, and this thing will really blow up in saturation. Don't try to make your "Glossy Color" look orange/yellow in the configuration, make it a very very bright orange/yellow, to the point that it looks pretty much white to you. I've used RGB=(1, 0.97, 0.79) to get the color used in this render.
- For the urine over Monica's body I completely disabled the Volume Category by setting "Thin Walled" settings. I found that using volume values for the urine over the body was always causing the renders to look weird and unrealistic. I did leave Volume Parameters ON for a lot of other urine meshes though, for example, the jet coming out of the man's penis.
- Leave Base Color in full white.
Masterpiece!Another Story - Part 2
"It's always good to see you here" - says the man.
"..." - Monica just awaits silently.
"Were you crying? If you have a problem with your role here, you should take it to HR, they can help you out."
Of course, she knew he was just joking with her, she didn't have a choice in this matter. The consequences for not accepting this role would be far worse. She has to play her part.
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"No.... don't worry... it's nothing, I.... I like what I do"
"Glad to hear! And what's the deal with you covering yourself right now?"
"I'm sorry, I was startled when you came in... " - she stops covering herself
"You look miserable right now, Piggy... where's your professionalism?"
"I'm sorry, sir, please, don't tell management I was crying"
"It's not the crying that bothers me, it actually looks good on you. My problem is that you're disgusting. You need a shower."
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"I'm sorry... I'm sorry my smell bothers you...but I need permission from another employee to use the showers, sir."
"Oh, I know... I could arrange a shower for you right now, if you want"
Monica smiles softly
"T-thank you, sir... "
The man points to the floor
"Get on your knees, Piggy"
Monica obeys without questioning the man. But now she realizes the shower she was promised is not what she was expecting.
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The man starts to unzip his pants as he says - "Open wide".
"Aren't you happy? I'm going to be giving you a shower and your breakfast for the day."
As she awaits for him to get ready, she just faintly replies with a "thank you" and holds her mouth open.
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"You're liking this, aren't you, slut?"
"mmmhmmm, mmmm"
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Once his stream stops, he continues talking.
"This was wonderful, you make a great toilet."
"Thank you, sir..."
"I believe in you. I think you could also be a great toilet paper, don't you think?"
She looks confused.
"Come here and clean up my dick with your mouth now, but don't you dare touch on my clothes... you're filthy right now and I'll have a meeting soon."
Monica puts her hands in her legs and lean forward far enough to get his penis inside her mouth and starts to caress it with her tongue.
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The man enjoys the moment until he cums in her mouth.
"Thank you, pig, I needed this boost to start my day."
Monica forces a smile but stays silent as the man waves away and goes on with his day.
Just as he's leaving the bathroom, he shouts:
"Oh, by the way, I'm coming back after my meeting. Make sure you'll clean this pee away before I'm back. Use your tongue."
"..."
"You need to keep your workspace, pristine. Remember, be professional."
The man leaves.
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PS: This is what I've put together so far. Thanks to everyone that has provided suggestions and tips on what this scene was supposed to be about. I'm planning on sharing some more non-story renders soon involving the glory hole scenes and sex in the bathroom..