Has some potential, but maybe slow down a bit with the storytelling/lady introducing, etc.
Give the ladies some personality, at least in later chapters, else they all blend into fuckables no one can tell apart - even more so if updates take 3 months or more.
The conversations are ok, but also a bit on the not really having depth (not every sentence has to, but sprinkle something interesting in every now and then) side.
For example, the MC: I know
, but from the story/flashbacks, conversations, etc. I cannot tell if he actually is a guy I would want to play. After that whole chapter 1. So to make it short: I don't know anything relevant of him, his moral compass to name it.
IF the intension is to just aiming to make a "fuck em all, and fuck the story most"-VN, that is fine. But I have a sense that is not the thing the creator aims for.
I will check later chapters and hope it improves on the story/character-side. Else, long-therm, this will be one (of way to many) VNs that couldn't hold my attention. Good luck dev.
