VN Ren'Py Abandoned Fate and Destiny [v0.2] [dashblade]

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dashblade

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Hi, I updated the game following some of your feedbacks,
it is a minor update, only some English fixes and a few scenes for Lucas' backstory here is the link for the updated version 0.11

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dashblade

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I would suggest first to tweak the female models. All of them are in Being a DIK, so perhaps change facial and hair features to make them more original...
I played being a dik before, if there is any likeness to the character I don't have any defense because all my characters are bought assets at the moment only 3 of them have a little of my input. At the moment, my focus is on developing the stories and showing my vision for my story. I could of course tweak more of it but I am not a designer so If I tweak a lot it might look ugly since I paid for it I feel that it is okay if other people have similar character design after all we all paid for the same product.
If any of you tried being a dik it is obvious that his talent and level is way higher than mine and most of his characters are tweaked and still look aesthetically pleasing, if I get to that level I would do more character design but for now unlikely. Thank you for your comments, appreciate it I will try to do what you suggest for newer characters when the backbone of my story is out.
 

Skeltom

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I really like school based VNs, but everything happening so fast.
I have to agree with that. The first girl you see jumps you without so much as a how do you do in the middle of her workplace. It is an AVN but nowhere does it say you have to jump directly into the lewd scenes especially with so little explanation or setup.

On another aspect of that, the animations are very stiff and unnatural. You should put a bit more effort into them if your going to have them. Also when you go back to your dad (who's nameplate is Andrew for some reason) it comes across like you stayed behind with the girl whether you did or not, he is still sleeping either way.

I would definitely look into finding a proof reader if you insist on releasing this in English, the sentence structure and punctuations are kind of all over the place. It may just be a translation issue but it's very clear English is not your primary language.
 
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Rannell

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I would suggest first to tweak the female models. All of them are in Being a DIK, so perhaps change facial and hair features to make them more original...
You are playing a different Being a DIK than I have then. Yes most of the models have been used in other AVN's, but none of these. Also I really like Nova's model.
 
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Rannell

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These are some of the ugliest characters i've seen in a porn game.
Anyone and their dog can criticize, but can you give him recommendations on how to improve them? Try some constructed criticism instead. Which means tell what you don't like, but offer solutions or suggestions. If you can't do that then you words are as worthless as the pixels to create them.
 
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dashblade

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I have to agree with that. The first girl you see jumps you without so much as a how do you do in the middle of her workplace. It is an AVN but nowhere does it say you have to jump directly into the lewd scenes especially with so little explanation or setup.

On another aspect of that, the animations are very stiff and unnatural. You should put a bit more effort into them if your going to have them. Also when you go back to your dad (who's nameplate is Andrew for some reason) it comes across like you stayed behind with the girl whether you did or not, he is still sleeping either way.

I would definitely look into finding a proof reader if you insist on releasing this in English, the sentence structure and punctuations are kind of all over the place. It may just be a translation issue but it's very clear English is not your primary language.

Thank you for taking your time to comment on this, I will improve the animation in the future definitely and you are right English is not my primary language. If anyone wants to help me with proofreading, I don't mind but I can't offer anything at the moment, only early access for future content.
 
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Shadowblade793

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Hey any timeline or notes on the new update?
Feel like I need more content to talk about this game or judge it.
Not trying to be rude but I wanna see more content with Nova, like she is introed too late imo
 

dashblade

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Hey any timeline or notes on the new update?
Feel like I need more content to talk about this game or judge it.
Not trying to be rude but I wanna see more content with Nova, like she is introed too late imo
It is going to take quite a while, I am still writing the storyline, haven't started rendering/coding, 1.5-2 months probably
 

HoshiEx

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this android version is already on my website, i will update to our Discord tonight, after few days if there is no response about the bug of android version we ported i will post it at here in the next few days.
okay..thanks for the good work. (y)
 

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