VN Ren'Py Fate Won't Separate Us [v0.6a Cuckold Path Bizzare] [Raising Phallus]

[critic specialized in NTR]

I won't waste my time stating the obvious anymore, NTR fans who are playing can see for themselves if they want to try it.

 

[Nap4727]

I won't waste my time stating the obvious anymore, NTR fans who are playing can see for themselves if they want to try it.

I’m a huge NTR fan…PAYING amd playing. Trust me lads….this is THE BEST NTR driven game, with by FAR the greatest FMC. Stop rushing things. Just enjoy it.

 

[Dogorti]

I won't waste my time stating the obvious anymore, NTR fans who are playing can see for themselves if they want to try it.

You don't say anything obvious, you say that the focus is not on the fmc when it is a lie, if there are sexual scenes with other characters it is to satisfy those who do not want to wait for the fmc to have sex with the antagonist, you may like it or not and It is valid, but it has nothing to do with the FMC not being the focus.

 

[Nap4727]

I won't waste my time stating the obvious anymore, NTR fans who are playing can see for themselves if they want to try it.

…and there’s nothing obvious in the first few updates

 

[i dond dog]

so if im ntr fan does mean im cuck? i look like the mc in this game.

 

[Dogorti]

i look like the mc in this game.

Sucks to be you man.

Sorry

 

[Anaskm07]

I laugh this too much

 

[Coriolan]

New test with Freya (fan-art)....hope you like it

 

[Doctor Doom]

This is exactly my point. Don't get me wrong, I love the game and I understand it is still in its beginning phase, but sometimes I just can't help getting annoyed when the story/plot moves so slow, couple it with various path updates which will drag the story more.


I love the game and I am very much looking forward to it. I'm willing to wait since I am already experienced with games like these (Shadows of Desire, etc.) and I was rewarded for my patience greatly. I just hope it will be as rewarding as I think it will be. Thanks for the update and looking forward to the next ones although I would probably just stack up updates and maybe wait til Ver 0.8/1.0

hmm, the only game that i've played that comes close to this is shadows of desire. can you recommend similar games like these 2? or anyone?

 

[Adhdclassic]

On the contrary, too low content for the mom and sis and could be increased in next update specially sense its cuckold path. Also i think they (mom n sis) should be even more like main characters cuz they r so hot specially the mom pornstar idea being a bbc huge slut already and cucking her son with bbc.

A suggested idea for dev for next update mom could go to her agancy and son get involved somehow against her wishes and see her mom fucked by bbc so she punishes him by cucking him right there and start being mean to him which kinda develops their relationship after the session. Raising Phallus
also thnx for ur work dev its a good game. ignore bad critics. keep going.

Go team Daniella the BBC Slut

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Above picture he looks like the black version of Red Skull or Skeletor.

 

[AlexStandal]

I just played the game for the first time and skipping at that cause I didn't understand the story somehow. So here i am and I wanna say and ask-

This MF is insecure and delusional so much that he imagines ntr . So much so, that he cried in the gym with her being in the vicinity, just cause some random dude didn't agree to stay away from her and still he imagines the worst case scenario.

Now question, who the fuck is the wizard? Why is the MC so much insecure? Since the latest release 0.4 introduced us with cheating and cuckold path, should we expect her to get blacked starting in the future updates?

Also, what is the gf doing in all this? Like are you tomboy to your bf, is he someone you can push around or something? I remember the last scene in this update where she shares her past and cries, but still I am confused.

Can a brother explain this all to me?

 

[R1k0]

I laugh this too much

She has a negative IQ then, dumbest female character ever

I just played the game for the first time and skipping at that cause I didn't understand the story somehow. So here i am and I wanna say and ask-

This MF is insecure and delusional so much that he imagines ntr . So much so, that he cried in the gym with her being in the vicinity, just cause some random dude didn't agree to stay away from her and still he imagines the worst case scenario.

Now question, who the fuck is the wizard? Why is the MC so much insecure? Since the latest release 0.4 introduced us with cheating and cuckold path, should we expect her to get blacked starting in the future updates?

Also, what is the gf doing in all this? Like are you tomboy to your bf, is he someone you can push around or something? I remember the last scene in this update where she shares her past and cries, but still I am confused.

Can a brother explain this all to me?

Explanation, a silly porn game with no characters with reasonable actions, like 90% other games for "adult" here

 

[Firaxius]

I just played the game for the first time and skipping at that cause I didn't understand the story somehow. So here i am and I wanna say and ask-

This MF is insecure and delusional so much that he imagines ntr . So much so, that he cried in the gym with her being in the vicinity, just cause some random dude didn't agree to stay away from her and still he imagines the worst case scenario.

Now question, who the fuck is the wizard? Why is the MC so much insecure? Since the latest release 0.4 introduced us with cheating and cuckold path, should we expect her to get blacked starting in the future updates?

Also, what is the gf doing in all this? Like are you tomboy to your bf, is he someone you can push around or something? I remember the last scene in this update where she shares her past and cries, but still I am confused.

Can a brother explain this all to me?

The MC is much in love with his gf, but one day some evil perverted wizard appears and finds it funny to mess with his relationship, he shrinked the MC's cock and tries everything to make his gf cheat or cuck her MC bf. But if the MC is smart enough he drinks all those potions and undergo the consequences, thus seeing illusions of his gf being fucked by his bully, the drinks does that. So it either suffering the illusions, see his gf do it for real with his bully or have her cheat behind his back.

 

[R1k0]

Whenever she sees a black dick, she just loses all sense—memory, awareness, everything. The logic and personality in this game are just so messed up

“Once you go black you never go back” corruption story, there is so much potential, but instead it's such a boring and primitive plot about mindless sluts.

 

[Raising Phallus]

I won't waste my time stating the obvious anymore, NTR fans who are playing can see for themselves if they want to try it.

"I won't waste my time stating the obvious anymore"


Obvious (?) statement n1:
The NTR gourmet: Oh no, here nothing happens, only illusions of the protagonist. only illusions.

Me: "a bunch of scenes are shown that are not illusions"

The NTR gourmet: I won't waste my time stating the obvious anymore.

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Obvious (?) statement n2:
The NTR gourmet: only one miserable scene sucking the man's finger.

Me: *a bunch of scenes are shown.
*mentioning her 'friendship' with samuel, her squirting in her boyfriend's face, the gym and the toilet scenes etc.
*stating this game is slowburn and it's making its debut at the end of June.
*asking what kind of scenes are expected.

The NTR gourmet: I won't waste my time stating the obvious anymore.

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Obvious (?) statement n3:
The NTR gourmet: *I bet he'll create more female characters for the same purpose.

*I was a patron of your work since you released it. Don't get me wrong, I don't give gratuitous hate, especially in NTR games, I only raise sincere and constructive points.

Me: You're just spreading some shitty misinformative comments. You're taunting me by misreading my intentions and leaking my wallpapers. Then "Oh no, don't get me wrong".
Btw, don't you think that leaking these wallpapers is undermining the game you declared to support?

The NTR gourmet: I won't waste my time stating the obvious anymore.

Even Kofi is capable of understanding what I wrote.

Spoiler: You have a good game , I am supporting you. But I'm also leaking the wallpapers. Don't get me wrong.

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"I won't waste my time stating the obvious anymore"


Obvious (?) statement n1:
The NTR gourmet: Oh no, here nothing happens, only illusions of the protagonist. only illusions.

Me: "a bunch of scenes are shown that are not illusions"

The NTR gourmet: I won't waste my time stating the obvious anymore.

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Obvious (?) statement n2:
The NTR gourmet: only one miserable scene sucking the man's finger.

Me: *a bunch of scenes are shown.
*mentioning her 'friendship' with samuel, her squirting in her boyfriend's face, the gym and the toilet scenes etc.
*stating this game is slowburn and it's making its debut at the end of June.
*asking what kind of scenes are expected.

The NTR gourmet: I won't waste my time stating the obvious anymore.

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Obvious (?) statement n3:
The NTR gourmet: *I bet he'll create more female characters for the same purpose.

*I was a patron of your work since you released it. Don't get me wrong, I don't give gratuitous hate, especially in NTR games, I only raise sincere and constructive points.

Me: You're just spreading some shitty misinformative comments. You're taunting me by misreading my intentions and leaking my wallpapers. Then "Oh no, don't get me wrong".
Btw, don't you think that leaking these wallpapers is undermining the game you declared to support?

The NTR gourmet: I won't waste my time stating the obvious anymore.

Even Kofi is capable of understanding what I wrote.

Spoiler: You have a good game , I am supporting you. But I'm also leaking the wallpapers. Don't get me wrong.

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It's not fair to yourself to waste so much mental energy with him. There will always be some trolls and edgelords demanding your attention, the ignore button is your best friend.

Keep up the great work and keep in mind that the vast majority of people is receiving your game very positively.

 

[abirvg]

8/10.
v0.4
A humorous NTR with very high highs, but somewhat mediocre lows.
I really wanted to give this game a max score - the 'Good' stuff in this truly deserves it. But the 'Bad' stuff was just too big for me to ignore.

Good:
- Tone - 10/10.
NTR <=> Comedy.
The very best thing about this game.
An NTR can be a pretty dark genre - and here author for sure explores some extreme emotions and past traumas - but because the comedy is at the very center of this story, it never feels truly gross, depressing or disgusting.

- Relationships (of the main couple) - 10/10.
The couple loves each other. It's not some empty relationship just for the sake of checking out an NTR box. Their funny/caring little moments are incredibly cute, and not just some padding between sex that you want to skip. You feel for these two freaks of nature.

- Sex scenes (of the main heroine) - 10/10.
From teasing, innuendos, and character turmoil to the flow and tempo switches - almost everything with Freya is pure electrifying enjoyment.

Bad:
- Sex scenes.
-_-
Half of ALL the sex scenes - with Mom - are complete side stories that have nothing to do with the main plot. These are just fanfics.
And another half - with the sister - has absolutely 0 emotional investment from her. There are just some gifs of her fucking appearing out of nowhere and no one on the screen cares about what's going on - until... she just becomes a malicious bitch? There's some glimmer of possible tension for her after the hospital - but it's quickly squashed and she goes back to be her unpleasant self.
Not very sexy of her.
And that is 'a bit' of a problem when almost ALL of the sex scenes in the game are either her, or her mom's meaningless cameos.

- 'Bad choices'.
"You want to behave like a decent human being? No content for you~"
"Oh, want more content? Act like a piece of shit."
Classic.
Dude, you have antagonists for a reason. Several of them! Use them if you need something bad to happen to create the drama.
Why the fuck are you forcing Ugly to destroy his own relationship, while antagonists just sit on their balls doing nothing - and picking up what's falling from the sky?
These relationships are important. See what I listed in the good stuff? There won't be any NTR without them.
It would be just like with the sister - mindless fucking. And I can go on pornhub for that. No need to sit for hours in the game.

But overall:
Hot, cute, and funny.
Highly recommend it even with the 'bad' stuff listed.
Most importantly: the author showed that he CAN write hot scenes and character tension - he just doesn't do it for the sister. For some reason.
And he CAN write the adorable relationships for the couple - he just uses MC instead of the antagonists to create the drama. For some reason.
He can do everything.
So I'm looking forward to the future of his stories.

//This is my review. Copied here for discussion cos this site does not allow commenting on the reviews.

 

[sdadsadsadsadzzxxzx]

I die from laughter whenever the old fuck and the MC interact with each other. Can't wait to see how you handle the cuck path.

 

[Xonra]

Everyone seems to complain about this…it’s literally the fourth update. Give it time. Other characters need to be introduced/developed. The pacing is perfect.
Enjoy the ride.

It's far from "perfect pacing", but it's clear with how many times you've responded in here defending the game, and your pfp and your sig are about the game you are FAR from unbiased.

"Everyone" complains about this because it's egregious compared to other games in this category (NTR type games), and the dev is actively giving people what they are repeating they DON'T want (the constant sex with the sister and mom, it's over the top with the sister), and giving noooooothing of what they do (Freya actually doing anything without having ADHD and wandering off screen the second it pretends anything is going to happen with her).

This is what you do with the first update to tease, the second to hook you to come back with the promise "it will happen soon" at most, but the third time it's silly. The 4th, sorry you are trolling. It's not like the game is lacking sex scenes, and that's why people are doing a "wtf?!" because it has tons of sex scenes, and zero with the only thing people are here for and lots of what they are telling the dev they don't.

 

[Nap4727]

It's far from "perfect pacing", but it's clear with how many times you've responded in here defending the game, and your pfp and your sig are about the game you are FAR from unbiased.

"Everyone" complains about this because it's egregious compared to other games in this category (NTR type games), and the dev is actively giving people what they are repeating they DON'T want (the constant sex with the sister and mom, it's over the top with the sister), and giving noooooothing of what they do (Freya actually doing anything without having ADHD and wandering off screen the second it pretends anything is going to happen with her).

This is what you do with the first update to tease, the second to hook you to come back with the promise "it will happen soon" at most, but the third time it's silly. The 4th, sorry you are trolling. It's not like the game is lacking sex scenes, and that's why people are doing a "wtf?!" because it has tons of sex scenes, and zero with the only thing people are here for and lots of what they are telling the dev they don't.

You’ve clearly got it all figured out. Well done.
Everyone definitely appreciates the insight.