Feeling Good With Your Little Sister, is a very annoying VN, because it presents you with some good ideas, and does nothing (as in literal zero) with them, so all you have left are the tags: Sadism, shame play, humiliation, domination, bullying?... This needed a few more hours to really fulfill its premise.
Positive:
- Lots of H-scenes; Good concepts (like: Who needs who? The value of having someone who knows the real you. The only way to soften a sadist heart. Twisted love and possessiveness. Stuff like that.); Heroine is attractive.
Negative:
- Not a lot of incest; Nothing is explained (it's a grown man with a job...); 1 of the endings is dumb, the other depends on your preconceptions regarding dom/sub; More nonsensical situations than usual, for an Appetite (dev) VN.
Score: 4/10. I'm not the greatest fan of this sort of relationship, but enticing the reader with a good premise, and then proceed to deliver porn, with idiocy in between scenes, is not OK. Wasted potential, with a few tweaks i can see this being a high tier VN. As it is, you should try it if you like the tags.
(H-scenes work if you like a masochist, spineless protagonist - and the corresponding heroine is uncommon in the medium - many of them happen in public places, or somewhere where the couple can be found. They are not bad, but they fit a specific taste.)
Positive:
- Lots of H-scenes; Good concepts (like: Who needs who? The value of having someone who knows the real you. The only way to soften a sadist heart. Twisted love and possessiveness. Stuff like that.); Heroine is attractive.
Negative:
- Not a lot of incest; Nothing is explained (it's a grown man with a job...); 1 of the endings is dumb, the other depends on your preconceptions regarding dom/sub; More nonsensical situations than usual, for an Appetite (dev) VN.
Score: 4/10. I'm not the greatest fan of this sort of relationship, but enticing the reader with a good premise, and then proceed to deliver porn, with idiocy in between scenes, is not OK. Wasted potential, with a few tweaks i can see this being a high tier VN. As it is, you should try it if you like the tags.
(H-scenes work if you like a masochist, spineless protagonist - and the corresponding heroine is uncommon in the medium - many of them happen in public places, or somewhere where the couple can be found. They are not bad, but they fit a specific taste.)