VN Ren'Py Abandoned Femdom Police [v1.0] [Deruc]

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CravenGrave

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Apr 10, 2020
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The writing inconsistency of sometimes spelling you out and sometimes just using u feels odd. There are some more grammatical mistakes as well like having thats when it should be that's. Sure, non native speakers will have issue with this but some more proof reading could work wonders. Some screens are way overexposed in lightning.

I don't get why the character wouldn't try to run if he's disobient when the cell is opened. He won't succeed but with the previous behavior it would seem like he'd try. The ending shortly after is pretty sudden. It's not really clear what kind motive the characters have. What kind of person they are.

Just like with Femdom Lockdown the premise is quite interesting but this will need quite a bit more work.
 

Jeevant

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Byczer

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These types of games are like Kinetic Novel. Whatever you choose, the result is always the same xd.
 
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