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How about a party with all the cheerleaders and their boyfriends? Drawing keys from a bowl? Hmmm...
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Also, folks, if you'd like to make suggestions, you're more likely to make headway with me if your profile isn't set up such that you can't be PM'ed. (looking at you, gunzen) My approach to suggestions is usually to try to engage the suggestor privately to find out more about what's going on in his (her?) head. After all, I'm anything but the greatest author, and can use all the good ideas I can get.
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I didn't quite catch what you wrote there, but if you're asking if we want more cucking of the main character (by letting Becky get railed by strangers or blackmailed into fucking by the cops) then, yea, definetly! Go for it!
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The intent of my post was that if you make a suggestion that I find intriguing, I'll probably PM you to discuss what you had in mind in more detail, me not being a mind reader. However, if you're one of those people that basically has your F95 profile locked down such that nobody can PM you, then you can't complain if nothing ever comes of your suggestion.
I play both nts/ntr games so Im down for anything but mostly interested to see becky x cops path.
Last update with becky is the best so far
Last update with becky is the best so far
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No worries. Yet again, I've made the mistake of allowing irritating things IRL overlap here.
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I gotta say, I enjoy this version and scenes from the game than the actual game.
No shade on the game itself; the main game is just literally all of my least favorite genres. xD
But, this dev has amazing artwork, and a solid storyline, so if anyone is down with that genre, give this a shot!
That being said, looking forward to more of these. I personally would love to see more Melanie x MC or Mom x MC myself.
Good luck, dev!
No shade on the game itself; the main game is just literally all of my least favorite genres. xD
But, this dev has amazing artwork, and a solid storyline, so if anyone is down with that genre, give this a shot!
That being said, looking forward to more of these. I personally would love to see more Melanie x MC or Mom x MC myself.
Good luck, dev!
I give the Dev a lot of props for putting out extra scenes, especially some NTRish stuff with Becky. Now since that seal has been broken it opens up a lot of avenues for the main story - if the Dev chooses. For example, I and others have noted the MC is a bit of a twat. He supposedly loves Becky, but cheats behind her back. He then screws over another LI that left the story. He is ripe for a comeuppance. Either Becky finds out about his cheating and screws another male cheerleader or maybe she gets caught in a police sting and he has to watch her get plugged behind the window at the police station? Another avenue - similar to the extra scenes - is Becky is seduced by a cheerleader couple. Her cheer friend gets her hot and bothered and then one of the male cheerleaders rails her. Perhaps, Becky walks in on him plowing another and gets revenge sex? Maybe breaks up with him and dates another male cheerleader, while he dates another Cheerleader. Becky gets with his best friend? That would sting. Anyhow, whatever the Dev wants to do. So many possibilities.
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Radical_Dreamer, xert13 - thanks for the encouragement and feedback.
I am definitely finding writing some of the STDH scenes a lot of fun, since I don't have to be in any way constrained by the story arcs in FF&S, or have the story arcs somehow altered/constrained wrt the story I'm telling there.
I am definitely finding writing some of the STDH scenes a lot of fun, since I don't have to be in any way constrained by the story arcs in FF&S, or have the story arcs somehow altered/constrained wrt the story I'm telling there.
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Any chance we will get to see Parker get to bang Carls mom, since Carl already did Parker’s mom & sister? Or maybe Melissa tutoring one of the jocks after class or in detention and he starts seducing her and at first she plays the married card, but the jock asks if she’s “happily” married or does he leave you unsatisfied?
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First, I refer you to the FAQ in the FF&S Thread OP, particularly item number 4. Although it hasn't been included in the OP here, it probably applies.
Second, if you read the text in the Carl/Melissa scene, the "jock" scene you're suggesting has already been ruled out.
I quote her commentary early in that episode:
So, Rich has pretty much dealt with that type of scene already.
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The whole reason for this game is to provide scenarios that didn't and/or couldn't happen in the original game. To me, that means that nothing is ruled out, except stuff that's already happened, and is limited only by the desires of the developer. So, I wouldn't put too much faith in what a character opined in one of these scenarios.
Of course, you might be absolutely right that it will never happen, but, as I said, it's all up to the developer and what he wants to do.
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L.Lumpy Walter Victor:
You both have reasonably good points here. In most of STDH, I've let the characters' personalities, reactions, etc., be pretty much the same as they would have been had that scene occurred in the main game. That's a foible of mine - I've "spent enough time with" these characters that I find myself saying "No, X wouldn't do that" in a number of situations. So, it's mostly "same person, just a different situation," or else it's "well, the main game just never revealed this aspect of that character."
If I were to 100% lock myself into that, then L.Lumpy would be correct - a character wouldn't ever behave differently in STDH than they would if that scene had happened in FF&S, and something that they said in one STDH scene that revealed personality, motivation, etc. would carry over into others.
However, as Walter Victor points out, I don't feel I'm strictly bound to that. Nor, to be frank, do I necessarily guarantee that events in one STDH scene be strictly compatible with events in another such scene or events in the main game.
That being said, as a not-terribly-good author, I do find it hard to write a scene that radically changes a character's personality or motivations.
So, at the end of the day, I would say... I guess you'll have to wait and see what I actually manage to write, because even I don't always know where a scene that I start to write will end up.
Is that nebulous enough?
You both have reasonably good points here. In most of STDH, I've let the characters' personalities, reactions, etc., be pretty much the same as they would have been had that scene occurred in the main game. That's a foible of mine - I've "spent enough time with" these characters that I find myself saying "No, X wouldn't do that" in a number of situations. So, it's mostly "same person, just a different situation," or else it's "well, the main game just never revealed this aspect of that character."
If I were to 100% lock myself into that, then L.Lumpy would be correct - a character wouldn't ever behave differently in STDH than they would if that scene had happened in FF&S, and something that they said in one STDH scene that revealed personality, motivation, etc. would carry over into others.
However, as Walter Victor points out, I don't feel I'm strictly bound to that. Nor, to be frank, do I necessarily guarantee that events in one STDH scene be strictly compatible with events in another such scene or events in the main game.
That being said, as a not-terribly-good author, I do find it hard to write a scene that radically changes a character's personality or motivations.
So, at the end of the day, I would say... I guess you'll have to wait and see what I actually manage to write, because even I don't always know where a scene that I start to write will end up.
Is that nebulous enough?
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rich: an idea found in literotica. something for you to do in your spare time, if you decide to do it. definitely not main story stuff, unless you can puzzle it in somehow.
becky's mom back story... or can be someone else's mom. it's just that you portrayed becky's mom like a vicious bitch. her facial expression is often angry or something. she wants what she wants, and gets it. it's how i perceive her, though your opinion may differ. well, if not becky's mom, someone else.
here's the link to the story in lit. short story. 2 chapters. 2 pages each. pretty short. all you need to do is read first chap to get the idea for angry woman background. and how she has revenge. all in first chap. 2nd chap is where it happens. btw, found that author's writing style a bit irritating. you've been warned.
can't figure out how to change pm settings. is it the allow conversation thing?
becky's mom back story... or can be someone else's mom. it's just that you portrayed becky's mom like a vicious bitch. her facial expression is often angry or something. she wants what she wants, and gets it. it's how i perceive her, though your opinion may differ. well, if not becky's mom, someone else.
here's the link to the story in lit. short story. 2 chapters. 2 pages each. pretty short. all you need to do is read first chap to get the idea for angry woman background. and how she has revenge. all in first chap. 2nd chap is where it happens. btw, found that author's writing style a bit irritating. you've been warned.
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Thanks for the suggestion.
I didn't really intend Becky's mother to come off as "angry" all the time, although I can see how she might be interpreted that way. Unfortunately, I didn't discover until after I'd purchased her that her eyebrows do kind of tend in that direction. (The promo pictures on Daz Studio don't always reflect some aspects of what you can and can't do with characters, because you don't know where the settings were for those promo images, or whether they've had post-work touch-up done.)
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Did read the story, thanks. While an interesting premise, it doesn't fit my concept of Denise's back-story. That doesn't mean that Denise's back-story might not make a decent STDH, however. Have to ponder it.