Ren'Py Finding Cloud 9 [v0.5.1] [Onyx Decadence]
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Just starting out, and immediately "totally not MC's sister" Elizabeth says she is "seeing" a biker guy. Why in the world would I want a sloppy seconds sister? It completely breaks the entire point of a brother-sister romance if she would rather be with some random douchebag than the MC. The whole point of the relationship is the fact that they grew up together and have an intimate bond that can't be replicated, her riding bitch with some biker annihilates that bond.
Also, Americans don't say "mate"; use "pal" instead. Additionally, "flat" should be "apartment" and "kilometer" should be "mile".
Also, Americans don't say "mate"; use "pal" instead. Additionally, "flat" should be "apartment" and "kilometer" should be "mile".
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- Feb 17, 2024
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Ok i just played it .. and wow i think its one of the best VN i have ever played
almost all LIs are beautiful , Graphics are extremely good and the soundtrack is very good.
Moreover we also have a good story and mystery , i enjoyed it a lot and finished it in one afternoon.
cant wait for next upgrade.
almost all LIs are beautiful , Graphics are extremely good and the soundtrack is very good.
Moreover we also have a good story and mystery , i enjoyed it a lot and finished it in one afternoon.
cant wait for next upgrade.
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Lmao Its almost comical how poor these LIs are. This pathetic MC gets bitched at by his sister, even though the game explicitly says they get along well, so good job subverting that trope. And then we get to find out that Mila is sloppy seconds too. Does the dev have a fetish for the women he grew up with getting together with other guys or something?
- Nov 18, 2017
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Well... shit. Downloaded the game and was hyped till I read discussions about the MCs personality. Have any meaningful choices been added to make the MC more confident & competent? Rather play as a dude like Jax from Sons of Anarchy instead of dumb doormat #3981.
- Feb 17, 2024
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About Mila yea i would prefer it better if she was a Virgin
because it would make a sense too, if she was in comparison to the other LIs ... she is the childhood friend who always had a good chemistry with MC but they never made a move for each other (MC friend mention this fact too)
Now about the other LIs perhaps Ruth is Virgin .. from what we have see it make sense if she was...
If she isnt then none is.
ps. About MC yea i agree i wish he had some more Backbone and be more confident but he was a normal young guy before the story started so perhaps we have some character development in this regard.
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Yea this is what I meant with my original comment in this thread, not trying to be disrespectful to the dev, but I think they could be better written. Your sister is a straight up dumbass fucking around with a gang member, then you try to tell her they are bad news and she yells at you and what does the MC say in response...well he becomes a little bitch and says he's sorry to her...even though he's in the right. I'm not really sure what the angle is with making our LI's interested in other males in the game though in the first place? It's a bit odd. I was immediately disappointed as soon as I heard she was seeing someone else. Initially upon meeting Elizabeth I was excited but then hearing that...well, it was not a great start.
Finding out Mila was sloppy seconds and that's why she started to act weird towards you was a letdown too. She blows you off after you guys hookup because she....slept around before and it ended badly...yea no shit
. so now you deal with her baggage and she takes that out on you. Really honestly thought she would be a virgin since it's the whole best friends since childhood trope. Shame.Then you have Isabel always complaining to you about her guy problems with that one asshole you work with. Fuck him and fuck her. I would've liked her since she's cute but now it's hard to care about her. Am I supposed to be captain save-a-hoe?
This is why I asked before if there will be virgin planned. I am holding out for Ruth now, she seems super nice and cute. Since some of the others one I had hoped for having good routes are a bit dislikeable, and I got a feeling the model you've been helping find her friend also isn't a virgin.
On the upside I like the atmosphere of the game, the soundtrack. The story of the drug world is engaging enough. The Milf I like though, she actually starts to see you as the man of the house and is appreciative, or at least that's the vibe I'm getting, unlike your sister who was being a bitch and disrespectful when you're just trying to look out for her. But Riley won't be enough to keep me interested in this game.
Just my feedback.
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I totally agree, Elizabeth and especially Mila basically killed this game for me. Isabel was also completely insufferable even before Gordon showed up. Riley is ok, but she's a very generic milf and while I don't mind that in a harem game, I don't particularly care for it in a game that limits LIs. Callista and Ruth are basically the only one's that actually seem desirable to me. However, the MC's spinelessness is also just as big a problem for me. The dude doesn't need to be a gigachad right away, but the only time he actually stood up for himself is with the lawyer, but the game almost immediately forces you to go meet with her again and reconcile with her.Yea this is what I meant with my original comment in this thread, not trying to be disrespectful to the dev, but I think they could be better written. Your sister is a straight up dumbass fucking around with a gang member, then you try to tell her they are bad news and she yells at you and what does the MC say in response...well he becomes a little bitch and says he's sorry to her...even though he's in the right. I'm not really sure what the angle is with making our LI's interested in other males in the game though in the first place? It's a bit odd. I was immediately disappointed as soon as I heard she was seeing someone else. Initially upon meeting Elizabeth I was excited but then hearing that...well, it was not a great start.
Finding out Mila was sloppy seconds and that's why she started to act weird towards you was a letdown too. She blows you off after you guys hookup because she....slept around before and it ended badly...yea no shit
Then you have Isabel always complaining to you about her guy problems with that one asshole you work with. Fuck him and fuck her. I would've liked her since she's cute but now it's hard to care about her. Am I supposed to be captain save-a-hoe?
This is why I asked before if there will be virgin planned. I am holding out for Ruth now, she seems super nice and cute. Since some of the others one I had hoped for having good routes are a bit dislikeable, and I got a feeling the model you've been helping find her friend also isn't a virgin.
On the upside I like the atmosphere of the game, the soundtrack. The story of the drug world is engaging enough. The Milf I like though, she actually starts to see you as the man of the house and is appreciative, or at least that's the vibe I'm getting, unlike your sister who was being a bitch and disrespectful when you're just trying to look out for her. But Riley won't be enough to keep me interested in this game.
Just my feedback.
I prefer virgin LIs, but not all character types need to be virgins to work. However, in my opinion, sisters and childhood friends (and other similar archetypes) MUST be virgins in order to work as LIs. I would literally rather Elizabeth and Mila weren't LIs at all instead of them being sloppy seconds.
As an aside, it's nice to see another Nami and Mia enjoyer.