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Ren'Py Finding Cloud 9 [v0.6.2] [Onyx Decadence]

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Mantioxi

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I gotta say, a really fantastic game, likeable characters, gorgeous girls, everything is dandy.. But....... lots and lots of typos and bad grammar. I hope proof reading will be in high priority next time. Other than that fantastic VN.
 

johnmnf692

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Just starting out, and immediately "totally not MC's sister" Elizabeth says she is "seeing" a biker guy. Why in the world would I want a sloppy seconds sister? It completely breaks the entire point of a brother-sister romance if she would rather be with some random douchebag than the MC. The whole point of the relationship is the fact that they grew up together and have an intimate bond that can't be replicated, her riding bitch with some biker annihilates that bond.

Also, Americans don't say "mate"; use "pal" instead. Additionally, "flat" should be "apartment" and "kilometer" should be "mile".
 
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D4rkK1ng

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Ok i just played it .. and wow i think its one of the best VN i have ever played
almost all LIs are beautiful , Graphics are extremely good and the soundtrack is very good.
Moreover we also have a good story and mystery , i enjoyed it a lot and finished it in one afternoon.
cant wait for next upgrade.
 
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johnmnf692

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Lmao Its almost comical how poor these LIs are. This pathetic MC gets bitched at by his sister, even though the game explicitly says they get along well, so good job subverting that trope. And then we get to find out that Mila is sloppy seconds too. Does the dev have a fetish for the women he grew up with getting together with other guys or something?
 

Crosaith.

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Well... shit. Downloaded the game and was hyped till I read discussions about the MCs personality. Have any meaningful choices been added to make the MC more confident & competent? Rather play as a dude like Jax from Sons of Anarchy instead of dumb doormat #3981.
 
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D4rkK1ng

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Lmao Its almost comical how poor these LIs are. This pathetic MC gets bitched at by his sister, even though the game explicitly says they get along well, so good job subverting that trope. And then we get to find out that Mila is sloppy seconds too. Does the dev have a fetish for the women he grew up with getting together with other guys or something?
About Mila yea i would prefer it better if she was a Virgin
because it would make a sense too, if she was in comparison to the other LIs ... she is the childhood friend who always had a good chemistry with MC but they never made a move for each other (MC friend mention this fact too)
Now about the other LIs perhaps Ruth is Virgin .. from what we have see it make sense if she was...
If she isnt then none is.

ps. About MC yea i agree i wish he had some more Backbone and be more confident but he was a normal young guy before the story started so perhaps we have some character development in this regard.
 
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Vopeco

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Lmao Its almost comical how poor these LIs are. This pathetic MC gets bitched at by his sister, even though the game explicitly says they get along well, so good job subverting that trope. And then we get to find out that Mila is sloppy seconds too. Does the dev have a fetish for the women he grew up with getting together with other guys or something?
Yea this is what I meant with my original comment in this thread, not trying to be disrespectful to the dev, but I think they could be better written. Your sister is a straight up dumbass fucking around with a gang member, then you try to tell her they are bad news and she yells at you and what does the MC say in response...well he becomes a little bitch and says he's sorry to her...even though he's in the right. I'm not really sure what the angle is with making our LI's interested in other males in the game though in the first place? It's a bit odd. I was immediately disappointed as soon as I heard she was seeing someone else. Initially upon meeting Elizabeth I was excited but then hearing that...well, it was not a great start.

Finding out Mila was sloppy seconds and that's why she started to act weird towards you was a letdown too. She blows you off after you guys hookup because she....slept around before and it ended badly...yea no shit :rolleyes:. so now you deal with her baggage and she takes that out on you. Really honestly thought she would be a virgin since it's the whole best friends since childhood trope. Shame.

Then you have Isabel always complaining to you about her guy problems with that one asshole you work with. Fuck him and fuck her. I would've liked her since she's cute but now it's hard to care about her. Am I supposed to be captain save-a-hoe?

This is why I asked before if there will be virgin planned. I am holding out for Ruth now, she seems super nice and cute. Since some of the others one I had hoped for having good routes are a bit dislikeable, and I got a feeling the model you've been helping find her friend also isn't a virgin.

On the upside I like the atmosphere of the game, the soundtrack. The story of the drug world is engaging enough. The Milf I like though, she actually starts to see you as the man of the house and is appreciative, or at least that's the vibe I'm getting, unlike your sister who was being a bitch and disrespectful when you're just trying to look out for her. But Riley won't be enough to keep me interested in this game.

Just my feedback.
 
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johnmnf692

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Yea this is what I meant with my original comment in this thread, not trying to be disrespectful to the dev, but I think they could be better written. Your sister is a straight up dumbass fucking around with a gang member, then you try to tell her they are bad news and she yells at you and what does the MC say in response...well he becomes a little bitch and says he's sorry to her...even though he's in the right. I'm not really sure what the angle is with making our LI's interested in other males in the game though in the first place? It's a bit odd. I was immediately disappointed as soon as I heard she was seeing someone else. Initially upon meeting Elizabeth I was excited but then hearing that...well, it was not a great start.

Finding out Mila was sloppy seconds and that's why she started to act weird towards you was a letdown too. She blows you off after you guys hookup because she....slept around before and it ended badly...yea no shit :rolleyes:. so now you deal with her baggage and she takes that out on you. Really honestly thought she would be a virgin since it's the whole best friends since childhood trope. Shame.

Then you have Isabel always complaining to you about her guy problems with that one asshole you work with. Fuck him and fuck her. I would've liked her since she's cute but now it's hard to care about her. Am I supposed to be captain save-a-hoe?

This is why I asked before if there will be virgin planned. I am holding out for Ruth now, she seems super nice and cute. Since some of the others one I had hoped for having good routes are a bit dislikeable, and I got a feeling the model you've been helping find her friend also isn't a virgin.

On the upside I like the atmosphere of the game, the soundtrack. The story of the drug world is engaging enough. The Milf I like though, she actually starts to see you as the man of the house and is appreciative, or at least that's the vibe I'm getting, unlike your sister who was being a bitch and disrespectful when you're just trying to look out for her. But Riley won't be enough to keep me interested in this game.

Just my feedback.
I totally agree, Elizabeth and especially Mila basically killed this game for me. Isabel was also completely insufferable even before Gordon showed up. Riley is ok, but she's a very generic milf and while I don't mind that in a harem game, I don't particularly care for it in a game that limits LIs. Callista and Ruth are basically the only one's that actually seem desirable to me. However, the MC's spinelessness is also just as big a problem for me. The dude doesn't need to be a gigachad right away, but the only time he actually stood up for himself is with the lawyer, but the game almost immediately forces you to go meet with her again and reconcile with her.

I prefer virgin LIs, but not all character types need to be virgins to work. However, in my opinion, sisters and childhood friends (and other similar archetypes) MUST be virgins in order to work as LIs. I would literally rather Elizabeth and Mila weren't LIs at all instead of them being sloppy seconds.

As an aside, it's nice to see another Nami and Mia enjoyer.
 

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It took longer than I expected due to scope of the update in terms of renders and animations.

New challenges and lessons learned. The biggest update thus far when talking about renders and animations. I truly hope you will like what I've done. Let me know what you like and dislike. Hope you ENJOY!


This update is more linear in terms of progression (meaning it doesn't contain any free-roam segments) but that doesn't represent the whole game. As this project is still in development I'm trying out new things regarding technical and creative aspects. Just to test out the waters for this kind of storytelling. Nothing is permanent and things can be amended. I will release a survey regarding this choice. Also in this update I experimented with cinematic elements, tried to make it more filmic in many areas. I will release 2 polls regarding these two aspects. I wish you all vote when they come out. Thanks! :)
Episode 6 is pivotal point in the story as it now brings choices that will shape the course of the rest of the story. The player will have to make several difficult decisions that will leave a mark in further episodes. You will be introduce to a few new characters, and try to survive amidst the chaos. You will gather intel and discover a few shocking truths.
Will be honest, Been on quite a bit of grind. This update changed my perspective on my workflow, which I thought had become pretty solid. You live and you learn. Thus I will adapt and improve where needed. But my main goal stays unchanged, bring you as high of a quality as I possibly can. This update contains around 73 animations. Almost 3 times more than the previous update. Representative of 3 lewd scenes that take place in Episode 6. I will also release a survey as to who are the fan favorite characters. Just to get to know my audience a bit better.

This update will be released in the originally planned schedule: The Flawless Tier patrons will receive it first. in 3 days High-Grade and Class 3 patrons will receive the update and in a week Class 2 patrons will receive the update.

Reminder: I want to mention that there might be possible bugs, and if you find any please contact me either on or directly here on Patreon.

Changelog:
  • Added 1250+ New Renders
  • Added 73 New Animations
  • Added 4 New Music
  • Added 3 new Sounds
  • Added Missing Relationship point with Isabel.
  • Adjusted Gallery scene name position.
  • Fixed a bug where a choice in one of Isabel's missions stopped game progression.
  • Changed Chloe choices when she asks for some info Changed the lying option, they will meet regardless.
 

xXwankerXx

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Just starting out, and immediately "totally not MC's sister" Elizabeth says she is "seeing" a biker guy. Why in the world would I want a sloppy seconds sister? It completely breaks the entire point of a brother-sister romance if she would rather be with some random douchebag than the MC.
I personally wouldn't say there's anything wrong with an attractive young woman like Elizabeth having had one or two BFs at her age. On the contrary, it sounds pretty realistic to me, understandably why so, but I have to agree on the "dating the potential token (biker) douche" part... some players might have a problem with it bcz it only paints her in a bad light as a very naive person who makes bad choices.

I suppose the MC's expected to simp real hard for her, kiss her ass literally and figuratively, and even risk getting his own ass kicked by her 'loving' BF for a damn kiss on the cheek, a 'romantic' hug and maybe, a big maybe, an HJ, while the douche goes all the way with her, offscreen, not on camera (!!).:unsure:

I call bullshit on this too, but if the majority of the devs' fans doesn't mind Lizzie's occasional bitchy attitude toward the MC, who only wants the best for his not-sister, and an LI with this kinda unnecessary (IMO) emotional baggage at such a young age, we'll just have to accept or keep it friendly with her, shut down our brains for 'the plot' to make sense and play the game as it is or just stop playing it and moving on.:cautious:

Lmao Its almost comical how poor these LIs are. This pathetic MC gets bitched at by his sister, even though the game explicitly says they get along well, so good job subverting that trope.
Your sister is a straight up dumbass fucking around with a gang member, then you try to tell her they are bad news and she yells at you and what does the MC say in response...well he becomes a little bitch and says he's sorry to her...even though he's in the right.
Haha, right ?? Fictional bro' there's trying his best to avoid tapping into his so-called already-infamous 'toxic' masculinity and caring big bro energy by acting like a manly yes-man (pathetic pussy), cuz supposedly, that's the kinda men real women who're actual 8s, 9s and 10s want, maybe on another planet in a completely different dimension from ours... this kinda shit is not and never will be happening on this beautiful blue Earth tho.

Lizzie's daddy issues are soo obvious, it's hilarious to see her trying to bullshit her way out of this argument and still pretend she's the mature, reasonable person who knows what the fuck she does, especially after accusing the MC of joining a gang out of his own free will cuz it's a dangerous thing to do. The irony.:KEK::ROFLMAO:

And then we get to find out that Mila is sloppy seconds too.
Finding out Mila was sloppy seconds and that's why she started to act weird towards you was a letdown too.
Well, so far, nothing storywise suggests that, but I wouldn't be surprised if it turned out you were right and she had a lil OnlyFans side hustle going on for her or something creative like that all this time, in case her weird 'career' choice didn't work out the way she expected it to.:eek:

we need a hero!
No, what we really need to do is let the dev make some money off his hard work first and then ask for a hero to share the game they paid for with us. Sounds logical, don't ya think ??;):WeSmart:

Have a lil patience, like most of us do. The game will be posted here sooner or later, the most important thing right now is that the dev makes as much money as he can so he can keep working on the game and not find himself be forced to abandon it cuz of financial reasons. Patience is the key, as they say.
 
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Abhai

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ok, wtf this dev is doing?
doesnt he know for avns developing standards (a famous "dpc-bible")??
1200 renders and 70 animations in 2 months!?!

what would legendary dpc say on that matter??
or ocean, or 99% of other top "hardworking" devs?
those poor devs can only dream to get such $$ support and thus resources/hardware, in order to become a bit more productive...

#18months_goldenstandard
#webelieve_wesupport
 

xXwankerXx

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the MC's spinelessness is also just as big a problem for me. The dude doesn't need to be a gigachad right away, but the only time he actually stood up for himself is with the lawyer, but the game almost immediately forces you to go meet with her again and reconcile with her.
I'm happy there's other users pointing out this very important detail too, cuz I had a looong back-and-forth with the dev on this specific topic a couple of months ago before the posts were deleted, and let's just say the bottom line is, he won't change anything about the MC's personality and overall attitude cuz of reasons only known to him.

I find this funny asf, considering all the other believable and not-believable-enough kinda stuff that's happening and probably about to happen in the story, like Lizzie being dumb enough to spread her legs for a rando cliché douche only looking for a tight, young pussy, despite trying to scold the MC on how dangerous gangsters are (bruuhh:FacePalm::FacePalm:), and Isabel's constant bitching about the idiot that is her BF and MC's superior in the gang, more so since I never even asked him to completely change the MC's personality, just to add another more confident and less pussy or, to put it shortly, a bad boi/guy approach that fits this type of premise like a glove for the players who want a different path for their MC, but the answer was still a resounding no, so I gave up on hoping things will get that much better for the MC in this department as the story progresses. Porn 'logic' ftw, I guess.:cautious:

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Chuck6o

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ok, wtf this dev is doing?
doesnt he know for avns developing standards (a famous "dpc-bible")??
1200 renders and 70 animations in 2 months!?!

what would legendary dpc say on that matter??
or ocean, or 99% of other top "hardworking" devs?
those poor devs can only dream to get such $$ support and thus resources/hardware, in order to become a bit more productive...

#18months_goldenstandard
#webelieve_wesupport
Honestly I don't know how you include dpc and ocean in any discussion regarding developer output or work ethic. Except as an example of polar opposites, but we're all entitled to our opinions.
 
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Abhai

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Honestly I don't know how you include dpc and ocean in any discussion regarding developer output or work ethic. Except as an example of polar opposites, but we're all entitled to our opinions.
#webelieve_wesupport

p.s.
if youve finished elementary school, you should be able to do some basic math (as indicated in the post youve quoted/replied to).
just in case you have difficulties - this dev produces 600 renders and 35 animations per month.
dpc produces less (ocena isnt even worh mentioning in that regard).
compare resources dpc and this dev have.
profit (or not).

and just in case drawing is needed on top of the math:
just imagine dpc as an ultra fast 250km/h train which goes 70 km/h on average (on the rails which allows 300 km/h), and your comment would be "wow, such a great example of speed in the railway transport, a true legend, i belive in!"
 
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Adhdclassic

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I haven't got past first 5 minutes working 6 straight work days wore me out so I didn't get into it. Notice there was a personality stat chart can it be increased or is it set once you allocate the numbers
 
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