- Thread starter Eroguri
- Start date
The good news is the renders and character designs are nice, which is probably the most important thing to gain popularity.
The writing is really rough. Errors, a questionable intro device, clunky conversations...it's not good. Fortunately this is something that can be corrected if an effort is made or the right people are brought into the project.
One small thing that would absolutely get me to stop playing is the "head bobbing" effect during conversations by alternating slightly rotated images. Please get rid of that, it's nauseating and unnecessary. If you're concerned that your scenes are flat, get better dialogue or shot composition. There are no substitutes.
The writing is really rough. Errors, a questionable intro device, clunky conversations...it's not good. Fortunately this is something that can be corrected if an effort is made or the right people are brought into the project.
One small thing that would absolutely get me to stop playing is the "head bobbing" effect during conversations by alternating slightly rotated images. Please get rid of that, it's nauseating and unnecessary. If you're concerned that your scenes are flat, get better dialogue or shot composition. There are no substitutes.
Dactess
Member
- Sep 9, 2021
- 299
- 457
- 193
Uh how bout sit your ass down and eat the fucking pancakes your "landlady" just slaved away making!
I got baited in by the thumbnail of two women but it says male MC on the first page, can someone who played explain what's going on?
Forgotted
Engaged Member
- Sep 1, 2020
- 2,555
- 2,388
- 479
You don't have permission to view the spoiler content.
Log in or register now.
Best of Luck
Cheers
Last edited:
Forgotted
Engaged Member
- Sep 1, 2020
- 2,555
- 2,388
- 479
Sorry you feel baited. I might not understand what you mean. Yes that's just a picture of a couple characters in the game.
The mc is male, though. It's also a really really good release for a first game...certainly much better than I could ever do. lol
Anywho, I hope you enjoy it
Cheers
Is this auto-incest-self-breakup-narci-shizo-trailerpark-gay-ism when your dad is multiple personalities and married to himself produces a daugher then produces children with her then breaks up with himself?
I'm confused