VN Ren'Py Abandoned First and Foremost [v0.11a] [UnderTheStairs]

[Xanado]

Hmm, my thought's on ep1: 1st Let me get this out of the way : Allison is super hot.

I just have a feeling everything is going a bit fast. We are already have her pussy showing and wanking off on her naked body and flashbacks of trying to fuck her already in ep1, I prefer a little slower burn with emontional hurdles myself. Like how did we get here? Where are all the yummy "this is wrong" thoughts? This feels more like "pornhub" story than a spicy taboo story. Nothing wrong with that if that is what you want to make, it's not my favorite way of telling a story in this genre though.

Something about Anna's face close ups are a bit much, a little less fisheye lens maybe? The script still shows signs of translation and needs work to feel natural. (You can understand almost everything though.)

Good first release for those that whine about content from day 1. IMHO story and pacing could be better and translation needs polish. Also Allison best girl.

Good Luck with your project.

 

[Nalex]

.. and it's good that he did - just saying
(Aside that, i don't know why you mention exactly MrDots - there are tons of developers out there who create dicks exactly as they are - and NOT oversized ones.
Even more, oversized genitals, no matter on females or males, make a game weird and cause more people to leave the game rather than attracting a few weirdos with unnatural excessive phantasies.)

You don't know why I mention Mr Dots ? So you don't know DmD history ... strange for a "fan". And by the way, having a big dick is not unnatural. So calm down with your insults like weirdo.

 

[mmmonsterkill]

"Language: English (Good MTL)"

Spoiler: yeah thats a lie

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[Naskura]

So I downloaded the Patch and it wasn't working so I did some digging in the files, the file it's supposed to replace is not Patch, it's Script. So it's likely not been updated for at least a few editions.

 

[Xanado]

So I downloaded the Patch and it wasn't working so I did some digging in the files, the file it's supposed to replace is not Patch, it's Script. So it's likely not been updated for at least a few editions.

If it's working it they are step/foster.... Otherwise they are not even that. Patch does work though. You can easily edit the step/foster part out by yourself (with notepad), the only references to it is right in the beginning after that they all refer to each other as mom, son, brother etc. (Using the patch).

Alternative: you can download an edited patch here:

https://f95zone.to/threads/first-and-foremost-v0-11a-underthestairs.102076/post-7717696

 

[Saint Blackmoor]

The script still shows signs of translation and needs work to feel natural. (You can understand everything though.)

Understatement of the century almost would prefer textless.

Spoiler: WTF is a

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A lot of potential in the game.

 

[SlammJamm]

Very hot and erotic. Love it.

 

[ArturiousDesign]

Little sister is kinda ugly imo; big nose, eyes too big. And the engrish is a big turn off. I suggest dev look in the help section here for a translator. Best wishes but imma drop it

 

[zeus04]

 

[Lyve]

The same comments of "engrish"...., it's MTL obviously there are mistakes

 

[saltynip]

incest activity on the get-go, that's what I'm talking about

 

[_tewi]

>good MTL

wew
no

 

[UnderTheStairs]

Here is a better patch after doing a bit of testing.

Please explain so I can make changes

 

[UnderTheStairs]

The developer of this game is Russian?

The developer of this game is Russian. Yes.

 

[UnderTheStairs]

0.11 ????
WTF ???
it's a 0.1.1 but not a 0.11

Just imagine ch2 would be out - history would be: 0.1 -> 0.11 -> 0.2 (1, 11, 2)

Of couse a developer can name his versions like he is pleased, but imho there are conventions to which it's for the better to stick on

no. deny.

 

[UnderTheStairs]

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[VN] [Ren'Py] ███
This is the Italian translation of First and Foremost [v0.11a]

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Handmade
Include: I-Patch

Unzip the .rar file - copy/paste the game folder into the game directory, replace when asked.

**This translation is "unofficial" and "made by a fan"**

You saved someone's psyche from my MTL with your work. Huge huge thanks!

 

[UnderTheStairs]

Many mentions of MTL. I think it would be correct if I change the description.

 

[punisher2099]

Ehh as long as there is no excessive clipping I don't really care about the size of the mcs dick. The sisters skin almost looks like its glowing in some renders.
The mc kinda looks like Remi Malek. The mom is perfect dev please don't get rid of her bush.

 

[loknathkarmakar]

Best perfection of milf can't wait to see next update dev❤

 

[Dyhart]

Looks good but...

what that thing?
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Honestly first thing I said was "what the hell is that, an arm?"