VN Ren'Py Fleeting Memories [Update 3] [Lyrical Artistry]

[jadepaladin]

You might have misunderstood their relationship a bit, brother. Sam keeps things (like the marshall and news) from mc because she likes teasing him, not the other way around. On the contrary, Sam has shared her deepest secret with mc, which she never told Janice. So, you can guess their bond... I just want to convey that don't misunderstood that Sam is going after her best friend's lover/ fuck buddy or whatever u call mc. She is as good of a friend of mc and she is of Janice.

And now, I should shut the fuck up, before I give more spoilers.

Nah, you're good. Pix just tends to tunnel vision hard.

 

[Pixillin']

You might have misunderstood their relationship a bit, brother. Sam keeps things (like the marshall and news) from mc because she likes teasing him, not the other way around. On the contrary, Sam has shared her deepest secret with mc, which she never told Janice. So, you can guess their bond... I just want to convey that don't misunderstood that Sam is going after her best friend's lover/ fuck buddy or whatever u call mc. She is as good of a friend of mc and she is of Janice.

And now, I should shut the fuck up, before I give more spoilers.

I get that she likes teasing him but to me, it’s a serious situation and not the time to withhold information because it’s fun. Whatever their connection I see her behavior as somewhat unhinged and definitely disrespectful and incompetent. It’s your story but as a character I strongly dislike her now.

Edit: I also think her ideas were bad ones.

 

[Lyrical Artistry]

Nah, you're good. Pix just tends to tunnel vision hard.

lol, it seems so, bro

 

[Lyrical Artistry]

I get that she likes teasing him but to me, it’s a serious situation and not the time to withhold information because it’s fun. Whatever their connection I see her behavior as somewhat unhinged and definitely disrespectful and incompetent. It’s your story but as a character I strongly dislike her now.

Edit: I also think her ideas were bad ones.

lol, tried my best to change ur opinion of her, bro. But no problem... To each, to their own..

I hope you continue liking the future updates too

 

[Pixillin']

Nah, you're good. Pix just tends to tunnel vision hard.

Maybe. I read what's written, and I react to it the way I react to it. I don't change my mind because the writer/author/dev says "but that's not how I wanted you to react/feel" because that's not how anything works. The writer gets to tell the story the way they want to, and I get to react to it the way I react.

 

[chaosbox24]

Is this gonna be one of hte games where you have to choose between the two girls in the end or can we get both

 

[jadepaladin]

Is this gonna be one of hte games where you have to choose between the two girls in the end or can we get both

 

[LionBear]

Thanks for sharing this.

 

[Lyrical Artistry]

Thanks for sharing this.

You're welcome, friend

 

[sigvar]

Indeed, harem would be added. But as i said, don't expect it to be like the most other harem games. In here, mc will have to earn it and needs certain tags, variables and points to trigger the harem route. If mc fails to acquire any of those requirements and still try to go for the harem route... It will have negative consequences.

Another note, in case someone asks...


Yes, I will make a walkthrough of the game... I will make it after the release of Update 2

Was the walkthrough something that ever got done? I can't really tell with the changes to the story and the Patreon and SS bullshit what happened.


Oh, and by the way. WTF is this sentence right here?

Don't think I have ever come across such a weird, off the wall comment like this. Usually people use similes to evoke imagery to describe something that makes understanding easier. This, however assumes some weird association that my years on the internet still didn't prepare me for. My mind is not quite equipped to draw up the mental image that this is supposed to invoke, and I am ok with that.

 

[Lyrical Artistry]

Was the walkthrough something that ever got done? I can't really tell with the changes to the story and the Patreon and SS bullshit what happened.


Oh, and by the way. WTF is this sentence right here?
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Don't think I have ever come across such a weird, off the wall comment like this. Usually people use similes to evoke imagery to describe something that makes understanding easier. This, however assumes some weird association that my years on the internet still didn't prepare me for. My mind is not quite equipped to draw up the mental image that this is supposed to invoke, and I am ok with that.

My mission is successful then, friend. lol, joking aside, it felt funny in my mind at that moment. And i was writing... going in a flow, didnt want to pause and think of.. if the sentence meant anything weird or not.

and no, the walkthrough never got completed/released... not yet

 

[Bella Von Halen]

I've had an error twice.

 

[Lyrical Artistry]

I've had an error twice.

tnx. i will check it out

 

[BakaHu]

I think the note about fetishes being optional is unnecessary

Aside from Lesbian all the tags are vanilla
And I don't think the majority of perverts are bothered by Lesbian

 

[Pixillin']

I think the note about fetishes being optional is unnecessary

Aside from Lesbian all the tags are vanilla
And I don't think the majority of perverts are bothered by Lesbian

Lesbian is an issue and it's good that everything is optional.

 

[Raziel_8]

Lesbian is an issue and it's good that everything is optional.

I mean, yeah, i don't like lesbian content myself.
The scene didn't bother me thought, as it was between 2 random girls (no LI's involved), the MC ain't being a voyeur either...so i just didn't care at all, that being said, i don't care about any sex scenes which isn't with the MC.
As for the masked girl, i already hope the MC can shot the bitch in the face as soon as he has the info he needs from her.

 

[Pixillin']

I mean, yeah, i don't like lesbian content myself.
The scene didn't bother me thought, as it was between 2 random girls (no LI's involved), the MC ain't being a voyeur either...so i just didn't care at all, that being said, i don't care about any sex scenes which isn't with the MC.
As for the masked girl, i already hope the MC can shot the bitch in the face as soon as he has the info he needs from her.

Sure but there are people who do care and just don't like it at all - I mean, IMO, all sex scenes in everything should be optional.

As for the masked girl, that's what I was thinking - Instead of having a sword fight with her partner/slave - whatever she is - the MC should have just shot her and then turned the gun on the masked girl to see if she felt like being cooperative.

Edit: MC also needs to stop calling that gun a revolver - it is not, and it makes him look a bit silly (like calling it a rifle).

 

[Raziel_8]

Sure but there are people who do care and just don't like it at all - I mean, IMO, all sex scenes in everything should be optional.

You're not wrong, i just found it unnecessary, thought the scene kinda fit that bitch's personality of ''having fun''.

As for the masked girl, that's what I was thinking - Instead of having a sword fight with her partner/slave - whatever she is - the MC should have just shot her and then turned the gun on the masked girl to see if she felt like being cooperative.

Yeah, we even see the MC showing the gun as he goes in there. My hope was as the girls with the stick came was this.

And dealt with one bitch

Edit: MC also needs to stop calling that gun a revolver - it is not, and it makes him look a bit silly (like calling it a rifle).

yeah.

 

[Lyrical Artistry]

Sure but there are people who do care and just don't like it at all - I mean, IMO, all sex scenes in everything should be optional.

As for the masked girl, that's what I was thinking - Instead of having a sword fight with her partner/slave - whatever she is - the MC should have just shot her and then turned the gun on the masked girl to see if she felt like being cooperative.

Edit: MC also needs to stop calling that gun a revolver - it is not, and it makes him look a bit silly (like calling it a rifle).

For the masked girl.. You will get your chance brother. If mc kills her right away or get the information right away... wont that make the game way too short?

 

[Pixillin']

For the masked girl.. You will get your chance brother. If mc kills her right away or get the information right away... wont that make the game way too short?

Yeah, I was mainly talking about her friend. Why is MC getting in sword fights when he has a gun?

Edit: Which ... it's hard to tell from the drawing but it looks like a .45 semi-automatic, which is clip fed - not a revolver.