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- Thread starter SilentVerge
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- Nov 6, 2017
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Just a couple of sex scenes right now basically, nice renders for sure but still not much to comment on.
- May 19, 2024
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Way too short to form any opinion. No clue who anyone is yet. Definitely would like more lighting with the rendering.
(2 scenes with zero build up or plot behind them - Strange)
(2 scenes with zero build up or plot behind them - Strange)
- May 29, 2024
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- Jun 1, 2021
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- Jun 28, 2023
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Congratulations on your release, Silentverge.
Anyone who likes dramatic writing and beautiful graphics with Dutch angles should play this and keep it on the list.
This is a commendable start with multiple characters coming together in the world. Give this a try. If you like noir storytelling and beautiful women, you might be interested in this.
However, I am a total story-based gamer and I found the story hard to get into. If it helps you, here is some constructive criticism from my opinion. You're really onto something here, so please take everything I'm writing in the spirit of wanting your game to become an A+ game for a player like me. The quality of your graphics is very high. There are multiple locations and different characters to speak with.
EDIT: I found a typo in your game after playing through it a third time - see the spoiler tag.
Anyone who likes dramatic writing and beautiful graphics with Dutch angles should play this and keep it on the list.
This is a commendable start with multiple characters coming together in the world. Give this a try. If you like noir storytelling and beautiful women, you might be interested in this.
However, I am a total story-based gamer and I found the story hard to get into. If it helps you, here is some constructive criticism from my opinion. You're really onto something here, so please take everything I'm writing in the spirit of wanting your game to become an A+ game for a player like me. The quality of your graphics is very high. There are multiple locations and different characters to speak with.
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EDIT: I found a typo in your game after playing through it a third time - see the spoiler tag.
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- Sep 3, 2022
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this probably has more words than the game itself currently, why post this ai generated shit?
- Jun 28, 2023
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Wait, what?
Are you saying my response is AI-generated? Because that's what I got out of your hostile response.
If that's what you mean and it was meant to be derogatory - perhaps you don't understand the reason why I wrote and posted that. Allow me to explain:
- This is a forum, historically a open place for discussion. That's how forums work, that's why you posted your opinion. So I posted that because it was my honest opinion.
- I might be totally dense here and miss a joke or social clue, but as far as I know an AI response isn't (yet) able to go this in-depth without the writer giving the LLM the details - in which case I might as well write it myself. If your comment is specifically aimed at the length of my criticism, then you're actually posing a question why it turned out that long. The answer is simple: I see potential in what the developer has made and wanted to offer him detailed criticism with clear examples from his game, hoping to get across where I see potential for improvement.
Don't worry, unlike the text in the game you're not obligated to read it. I even put it in a spoiler section for you - so you won't encounter it unless specifically clicking on it.
Edit: In fact, I would like to comment on what you wrote earlier as well.
I agree with you about feeling Vera moving in on the MC too fast. Personally I wouldn't say the developer failed at properly introducing the characters, but I do agree it could have been stronger, leaving a lasting impression. For me, it seems like this dev really focused on the quality of the visuals and the wording, rather than the specific storytelling techniques. I hope it doesn't get abandoned. But we agree on mostly what you said, Black Orchid.
- Oct 26, 2017
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There is a wide range of individuals with varying degrees of intelligence here.
I agree with your thoughts on the game.
It would be interesting to hear from the Dev. But I don't think we will.
That's what I think is happening. The puzzle is built piece by piece.
- Oct 1, 2019
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Another game that the Universal Mods working with made me decide to give it a shot. Glad I did, so much about this has me curious where it is going, very intriguing indeed. Thank you so very much for this, and I will be totally looking forward for more!!!
As some have said it is a little overly descriptive at times, like in school when you pad an essay to get your word count up.
Appreciate that all lewd scenes were skippable, though I guess a little annoyed that MCs attraction to a character gets written into the story instead of based around choices made in regards to that character. Like, when "Vera leans in, and your gaze momentarily drops to her cleavage", that shoulda been a choice. Do you have the willpower and attention span of a frat boy and take the bait, or are you a professional fixer who isn't going to fall for such a blatant power move? Well, apparently the MC is the former, unlike we were led to believe by the story so far.
I agree with the others that said that Vera making a pass at the MC is a little rushed. I get that its a porn game and all, but not believing she's being genuine to begin with, its fast even if she's just manipulating him.
Appreciate that all lewd scenes were skippable, though I guess a little annoyed that MCs attraction to a character gets written into the story instead of based around choices made in regards to that character. Like, when "Vera leans in, and your gaze momentarily drops to her cleavage", that shoulda been a choice. Do you have the willpower and attention span of a frat boy and take the bait, or are you a professional fixer who isn't going to fall for such a blatant power move? Well, apparently the MC is the former, unlike we were led to believe by the story so far.
I agree with the others that said that Vera making a pass at the MC is a little rushed. I get that its a porn game and all, but not believing she's being genuine to begin with, its fast even if she's just manipulating him.
- May 23, 2023
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Well, too much text and too little action for my taste. In my view, it also has potential ... but is in need of improvement. Let's see if the game survives 2 - 3 updates. Then it would be worth taking another look at it. There's just not enough content at the moment to really write a well-founded review. Good luck with the game DEV.
- Oct 17, 2023
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