First of all. Thanks for the update.
I'll give you a couple of critiques from my humble opinion.
1) I love Leona's new "outfit". She looks like a total whore. 10/10.
2) I was struck by how abrupt her transition was from, "touch my ass and I'll break your arm" to "oh yeah. I love gangbangs". I feel like there should be something in between. But I'm not complaining, it's still great.
3) Why change her "audience" from the mechanics to the marketing department? I really didn't understand this. You built a narrative with the mechanics step by step, but at the moment of truth you swapped them for the marketing department. Are you planning on giving those poor mechanics a piece of Leona?
4) I already told you. but god. i love the route leona is taking. from a strong woman who doesn't give a shit about the opinion of sponsors, to a whore who pleases them for a little sponsorship. . . . simply magnificent.
5) all my criticism was only about leona since this is an update that focuses on her. but if i have one thing to say about the rest it is that i think you are doing an EXCELLENT job regarding the variety that the three girls give. each one is different from the other. their routes are well differentiated and it is appreciated.
6) lastly. i think a "status" that shows information about the girls would be the icing on the cake for this game. a tab that tells us what their fan base is, what their opinion is of her in general, etc.
Gracias por la actualización, autor. Te deseo 1000 años de longevidad.