Pagoramix
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What a great premise!
Doesn't seem like the dev is around, though pretty sure he was for his other game, so just in case he stumble upon this...
I have a bit of concern about how you manage your branching and how much branch there is.
To review what's already in the demo, there is already overlap on the pure and ntr route. I mean, you can succeed every run, have the pure route, then simply fail a run and andrew tell us that it's okay for a second day or something like that. But it's really not our second day. Kinda break the immersion, and if you really intend to manage branch as you seem to be doing now, you'll need to write dialog so that the transition between the two branch isn't so brutal.
Which brings me for my concern about how much branching you intend to do. So there is pure and ntr route for the main girl, and you int toward another one more right? Plus the routes with evelyn, so sub and dom route + telling her boyfriend or not about it's cheating? And then there is the scientist spouse that also have dom and sub route right? That's an awfull lot honestly, which is okay, you do you, but i wonder how you expect to handle all that. Seems like there is chapters so, do you intend to have dedicated chapters depending on the route? Isn't that an awfull lot? Feel like you're trying to stuff 3 game in a single one honestly.
Anyway wish you the best on the project, it's great so far
Doesn't seem like the dev is around, though pretty sure he was for his other game, so just in case he stumble upon this...
I have a bit of concern about how you manage your branching and how much branch there is.
To review what's already in the demo, there is already overlap on the pure and ntr route. I mean, you can succeed every run, have the pure route, then simply fail a run and andrew tell us that it's okay for a second day or something like that. But it's really not our second day. Kinda break the immersion, and if you really intend to manage branch as you seem to be doing now, you'll need to write dialog so that the transition between the two branch isn't so brutal.
Which brings me for my concern about how much branching you intend to do. So there is pure and ntr route for the main girl, and you int toward another one more right? Plus the routes with evelyn, so sub and dom route + telling her boyfriend or not about it's cheating? And then there is the scientist spouse that also have dom and sub route right? That's an awfull lot honestly, which is okay, you do you, but i wonder how you expect to handle all that. Seems like there is chapters so, do you intend to have dedicated chapters depending on the route? Isn't that an awfull lot? Feel like you're trying to stuff 3 game in a single one honestly.
Anyway wish you the best on the project, it's great so far
