- Mar 18, 2019
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I'm here, man. Don't worry. I want to try and make a living out of this, so I'll go hard at it. I don't need a whole lot to get by so I think I'll get there. Usually I make pixel art commissions to make a living but I want to replace that with the developing of this game. I even have an idea for another lewd platformer game after this one.
It's not very wholesome at the beginning. I want the wholesomeness levels to very slowly increase.
Skip through text, go to her room, train her, talk to reduce stress, or she will leave. there are only two training levels so there isn't much game here. pulling up her dress and seeing her panties is as far as you can get. There is no nudity, and there is no masturbation either. It gets an F for now, but it has potential, needs improvement.
"See through walls" has partial nudity with Fey getting off.
https://f95zone.to/threads/foster-home-for-fantasy-girls-v0-1-tiredtxxus.79643/post-5560972
- Jul 28, 2018
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Art is cute, I love the animations, interactions and conversations with the girl felt quite interesting but game is really rough around the edges. For example:
- menu seems broken (other people mentioned most issues in regards of that)
- choices how you interact with girl feel very one dimensional (for a start, based how MC feels about magical creatures it is fine, but at least I'd like to see more dynamic choices, that might have negative or possitive effects based on how much progress you had with the girl. For example training 1 could be unlocked from the start but until you increased her submission in training 0, it would give only stress and make her get less submission or relationship for a day or few)
- it might be that I expect slightly too much but I feel like everything outside of girl's room is really empty. Even the MC bedroom could have some dynamics at least in the waking up text displayed or emotions MC feels when he wakes up
Ofc, we plan to implement a lot of stuff to make the surrounding more useful than just to be there. Bathroom will be mostly for random lewd events tho, not much else will be there to do. Regarding the buttons, renpy doesn't tend to have buttons that are pushed down like the one we made. We had to do workarounds for that. It seems that might be causing some troubles so we are thinking of removing the pushable buttons in order for them to be more practic. Eventually you'll be able to ask the girls to follow you around. Next girl on line is a goblin girl that is convinced she's an orc. You'll be able to tell Fey to follow you and take her to another girl's room for example and that will trigger interactions. But we are talking far ahead. For now our next goal is to implement day and evening cycle and add some of the missing backgrounds (backyard pool and the kitchen). I promise you, all those places won't be there just to fill space.
- Aug 2, 2017
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The intro looked really close to Teaching Feeling. The plot sounds really interesting as you're a powerful 200 years old priest. Really wondering how you'll get more girls, what new spells you'll unlock, what side quest there will be in town and more. I'll keep an eye on this one, good luck!
- May 19, 2020
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That hit right in the feels. One could even wonder if this is how villains like Dracula get their "Minions" in Castlevania.
This seems to be very promising, I love myself some wholesomeness in my porn games, and I hope we can choose to go down that route.
Also, Fey is very endearing, I love it.
Only small suggestion I have would be having the sleep button on our room in the bottom left, or even better top left, so we don't have to move the cursor very far.
Also, Fey is very endearing, I love it.
Only small suggestion I have would be having the sleep button on our room in the bottom left, or even better top left, so we don't have to move the cursor very far.
Yeah! You will be able to go very wholesome route eventually, but first there'll be some sadness and dark past stories.
Having choices also affect Alexander would be nice. As in if the player acts less cruel then he should soften up and be more wholesome to Fey. It would make those be mean to her or be kind to her have more weight.
Good game, hope it stays around!
Just a thought but when you enter the room you could have various idle-type images of her sitting in the background doing something that she normally does. It would be a good and consistent way of showing her character of being indulgent in reading & the character of the MC skill-wise able to move with little to no detection out of habit.
- May 19, 2020
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Agreed. I think that would be a great way to add more character depth to the girls.
I'll consider it! Thanks for the suggestion.
Just commenting to praise the writing and pixel art. The art is very distinctive and well-done; the expressions and poses are on point and the animation is very fluid; they don't look "stiff" like many 3d modeled games do. Fay's little room-accessing portrait is also so, so cute. The "jaw" training art too, gosh, almost unbearably cute. A suggestion - the MC's (Alexander) portrait in the map could change with time, maybe? Following his own internal changes, in a sort of doomguy vibe. Or maybe even the girls', changing when the cursor is above them to a little head cocking/smile when things are going in a more tender direction and a looking down/averting eye contact if the direction is a bit more agressive/domineering.
About the writing, it conveys how the MC has few if any actual experience in human interaction outside the structured confines of the church, and how this "experiment" is also a way of working his own blindspots; that is a welcome departure from the median MC. The pacing is also good, it doesen't skip steps in order to give the goodies right away. That makes them feel "earned" without the need of grindy "gather X thingy/money from repetitive action!1!"; the dialogue also helps a lot with that. There are some typos, but that's to be expected, and can be ironed out with time.
About the backgrounds, I like that they are very functional, and that there was care in doing them - they don't look half-assed at all. Did you use some 3d modelling software to do the object-shaping and then applied 2d textures over them? If you mind to share, could you tell us what software was used for them? (Asking because I've been doing some picoCAD thingies in my spare time, and found the low-poly/pixel-textured look of the BGs very interesting).
Still about the BGs; there was something bugging me about them that I afterwards realized - the 2d-looking elements have a different sort of shading than the 3d ones. I mean, their countour is made up of darker pixels, while most of the 3d-looking parts aren't. I.E., the plant and curtain in the bedroom, the light fixtures in the corridor, they look a bit off because of it. The 2nd chandelier on the corridor, on the back, it looks like it escaped a bit from the perspective point. It's not a big problem, but some might find it jarring. The BGs in general look very nice, all in all.
Also, are the fonts hand-drawn? They took a bit to get used to, but they also add character to the game.
Thanks for the work, wish you lots of luck!
Lastly... add headpat pwease ;3;
About the writing, it conveys how the MC has few if any actual experience in human interaction outside the structured confines of the church, and how this "experiment" is also a way of working his own blindspots; that is a welcome departure from the median MC. The pacing is also good, it doesen't skip steps in order to give the goodies right away. That makes them feel "earned" without the need of grindy "gather X thingy/money from repetitive action!1!"; the dialogue also helps a lot with that. There are some typos, but that's to be expected, and can be ironed out with time.
About the backgrounds, I like that they are very functional, and that there was care in doing them - they don't look half-assed at all. Did you use some 3d modelling software to do the object-shaping and then applied 2d textures over them? If you mind to share, could you tell us what software was used for them? (Asking because I've been doing some picoCAD thingies in my spare time, and found the low-poly/pixel-textured look of the BGs very interesting).
Still about the BGs; there was something bugging me about them that I afterwards realized - the 2d-looking elements have a different sort of shading than the 3d ones. I mean, their countour is made up of darker pixels, while most of the 3d-looking parts aren't. I.E., the plant and curtain in the bedroom, the light fixtures in the corridor, they look a bit off because of it. The 2nd chandelier on the corridor, on the back, it looks like it escaped a bit from the perspective point. It's not a big problem, but some might find it jarring. The BGs in general look very nice, all in all.
Also, are the fonts hand-drawn? They took a bit to get used to, but they also add character to the game.
Thanks for the work, wish you lots of luck!
Lastly... add headpat pwease ;3;
- Nov 18, 2016
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So katawa shoujo, meets trainer meets fantasy.... Seems interesting.
If the meets trainer part, is teaching feeling type trainer.... I am more than in. (giff headpats)
Txxus I take it by the "train to serve you" means it is a girls are exclusive to MC type trainer game, and not like "here use the whore" type trainer game? i.e. while they are slaves, they are also a harem type thing, so a slave harem.
Also will there be a more romantic route (like teaching feeling for example). I know there is a romance tag, just woundering if it is tied to the corruption or not, since some games have romance tag... where there really isn't any, is just being a little nice then treats em like a whore.
And as a final point.... you should request the game dev title. (the icon that goes below the name).
If the meets trainer part, is teaching feeling type trainer.... I am more than in. (giff headpats)
Txxus I take it by the "train to serve you" means it is a girls are exclusive to MC type trainer game, and not like "here use the whore" type trainer game? i.e. while they are slaves, they are also a harem type thing, so a slave harem.
Also will there be a more romantic route (like teaching feeling for example). I know there is a romance tag, just woundering if it is tied to the corruption or not, since some games have romance tag... where there really isn't any, is just being a little nice then treats em like a whore.
And as a final point.... you should request the game dev title. (the icon that goes below the name).
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It has training but at no point the girls will become sex crazed sluts that serve just anyone and beg for your dick at all times, no, their identities will always be important. But at some point you'll be able to take nude/sexy picture of them and make profits with it, and there might be some exhibitionism, but no other people will touch them besides yourself. There will be romance, the MC has to warm up to the girls more than the girls have to warm up to him, and it's mostly going to be 1 route, but some decisions might change the ending. I can't say more without going into heavye spoilers, but yeh, I plan to make it wholesome and very chillax. There is struggle on this game but all of them are about the character's past and trying to overcome it. The main struggle of the characters will be the struggle dealing with regret, with guilt, and with overcoming loses.