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The body isn't my work. That is straight up ripped out of Toph's poses. All I did was photshop out her hand and leg accessories.

Ah sorry thought it was your work in that case looks good did not really notice and artifacts from the photo shop. So who drew or created that? for some reason I don't get that it's Marty's feel from it. Maybe it just needs shading? Well I am not an artist but I spend a lot of time looking at art. The face has this UN-natural look to it , and the upper body looks tiny proportionally. As I typically do not critique anything unless someone asks for it , you have my apology for misunderstanding what you were asking opinions about. :)
 
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Ah sorry thought it was your work in that case looks good did not really notice and artifacts from the photo shop. So who drew or created that? for some reason I don't get that it's Marty's feel from it. Maybe it just needs shading? Well I am not an artist but I spend a lot of time looking at art. The face has this UN-natural look to it , and the upper body looks tiny proportionally. As I typically do not critique anything unless someone asks for it , you have my apology for misunderstanding what you were asking opinions about. :)
The body is from a Toph anal pose in book 3's love route.
 

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The body is from a Toph anal pose in book 3's love route.
Well yeah the body looks like it's Marty's even if I had not noticed the proportional look in book 3 but the face was added no? Look I am not trying to be overly critical it's just the face has a funny look imo. Its not horrible or anything , not trying to offend anyone , specifically the eye's and eye brow look to perfect sometimes artists will make a slight change or an illusion of change like the eye lash count and placement they might vary that a little to give the face depth or maybe the mouth one corner of the smile may be a tiny bit different it gives the face a more natural look imo. The eye shape can also add to the mix . Looks too symmetrical to me. I will not say more as my intent was not to go into it too far in the first place and as I explained I thought it was your work and you were asking for opinions when you said " something looks off...." . Now I don't want the mods to come in and rape the thread for off topic so I will just leave it there. I see this mod has it's own thread if I have more to add I will do it there.
 
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Well yeah the body looks like it's Marty's even if I had not noticed the proportional look in book 3 but the face was added no? Look I am not trying to be overly critical it's just the face has a funny look imo. Its not horrible or anything , not trying to offend anyone , specifically the eye's and eye brow look to perfect sometimes artists will make a slight change or an illusion of change like the eye lash count and placement they might vary that a little to give the face depth or maybe the mouth one corner of the smile may be a tiny bit different it gives the face a more natural look imo. The eye shape can also add to the mix . Looks too symmetrical to me. I will not say more as my intent was not to go into it too far in the first place and as I explained I thought it was your work and you were asking for opinions when you said " something looks off...." . Now I don't want the mods to come in and rape the thread for off topic so I will just leave it there. I see this mod has it's own thread if I have more to add I will do it there.
I'm not talking about the face. I haven't said anything pertaining to your comments about the face.
I said "The body isn't my work" and "the body is from..." Not once in my replies to you did I even say the word face. I agree with you on your statements about the face and already took note of that

You said a few times however that the upper body is tiny. That is what I'm responding to. The body. Not the face. I agree with you about the face. But the subject of my responses is not the face. Here is a screenshot of the original asset as it appeared in game. I'm also including the actual raw asset.

I'm not giving you a hard time. All of the criticism is completely welcome and appreciated. I'm merely pointing out that one of the criticisms you might have about the body are not my end.
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I'm not talking about the face. I haven't said anything pertaining to your comments about the face.
I said "The body isn't my work" and "the body is from..." Not once in my replies to you did I even say the word face. I agree with you on your statements about the face and already took note of that

You said a few times however that the upper body is tiny. That is what I'm responding to. The body. Not the face. I agree with you about the face. But the subject of my responses is not the face. Here is a screenshot of the original asset as it appeared in game. I'm also including the actual raw asset.

I'm not giving you a hard time. All of the criticism is completely welcome and appreciated. I'm merely pointing out that one of the criticisms you might have about the body are not my end.
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I understand and I already apologized for my misunderstanding. I also said I did not remember the proportional look from the game in my last post but it is as you say and I had already confirmed this after your first reply telling me it was that way in the game. I suppose Marty wanted to show the tit's more fully but if you look at that it makes the shoulders impossibly narrow to me. Even taking into account that they are farther away. Its just me mind you I don't think it is a huge deal and I don't think the face looks bad , just needs refining IMO , You have read plenty of my posts and you should know by now I am not mean spirited nor do I troll or demean people for the opinions they hold , so please just take it with a grain of salt. Although this probably sounds insincere I am looking forward to what ever you guys come up with and I will be more careful in the future. Peace:)
 
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I understand and I already apologized for my misunderstanding. I also said I did not remember the proportional look from the game in my last post but it is as you say and I had already confirmed this after your first reply telling me it was that way in the game. I suppose Marty wanted to show the tit's more fully but if you look at that it makes the shoulders impossibly narrow to me. Even taking into account that they are farther away. Its just me mind you I don't think it is a huge deal and I don't think the face looks bad , just needs refining IMO , You have read plenty of my posts and you should know by now I am not mean spirited nor do I troll or demean people for the opinions they hold , so please just take it with a grain of salt. Although this probably sounds insincere I am looking forward to what ever you guys come up with and I will be more careful in the future. Peace:)
Oh I know. All good. I knew you meant well and it just seemed like there was a bit of a misunderstanding. As for the face, your input on that has been taken to heart and I'm making adjustments based on that.

I plan on going through most of Toph's poses and giving them the same treatment as I did with this one and will release a zip file with an onji folder in it with all of the poses and modders will be able to pick out whatever poses they like and use them as they wish in their projects.

Right now, based on input people here have given, I'm hoping to do assets for On Ji, Meng, loli fire trio, and I might make a head rig for Smellerbee just so we can get more scenes with her. I also might decide to do some alternate Zukos for the Zuko mod to work with.

Since a lot of the assets are going to revolve around lolis, I've also decided to touch up some of Mity's loli assets that I felt look kind of off, like Ikki's. The main thing being the nipples. I feel like the nipples are a little too big for lolis.

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Oh I know. All good. I knew you meant well and it just seemed like there was a bit of a misunderstanding. As for the face, your input on that has been taken to heart and I'm making adjustments based on that.

I plan on going through most of Toph's poses and giving them the same treatment as I did with this one and will release a zip file with an onji folder in it with all of the poses and modders will be able to pick out whatever poses they like and use them as they wish in their projects.

Right now, based on input people here have given, I'm hoping to do assets for On Ji, Meng, loli fire trio, and I might make a head rig for Smellerbee just so we can get more scenes with her. I also might decide to do some alternate Zukos for the Zuko mod to work with.

Since a lot of the assets are going to revolve around lolis, I've also decided to touch up some of Mity's loli assets that I felt look kind of off, like Ikki's. The main thing being the nipples. I feel like the nipples are a little too big for lolis.

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Pretty difficult to deal with Ikki's images in the love rout being they aged her up considerably from the slave rout Ikki. I am not even sure she truly is Lolis in the love rout but considering her lack of chest development in the love rout clearly this was done to try and evade the patreons asinine rules about art and still "pretend she is loli". I wish you all luck and I think this is a good idea. :)
 
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Pretty difficult to deal with Ikki's images in the love rout being they aged her up considerably from the slave rout Ikki. I am not even sure she truly is Lolis in the love rout but considering her lack of chest development in the love rout clearly this was done to try and evade the patreons asinine rules about art and still "pretend she is loli". I wish you all luck and I think this is a good idea. :)
Have you not seen the actual Korra series? Those age ups are actually canon designs. There were a few time skips. A year passes between books 1 and 2, 3 happens right after 2, and then 4 happens 3 years after 3. So 4 years pass between books 1 and 4 of korra.

Slave route takes place in Korra book 1 and love route takes place in Korra book 4. That means Ikki is 7 in the slave route and 11 in the love route. Mity didn't age anyone up to avoid trouble or anything. Mity aged them up because of the plotlines being followed. Ikki is actually still a loli. ikki.png
 

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Have you not seen the actual Korra series? Those age ups are actually canon designs. There were a few time skips. A year passes between books 1 and 2, 3 happens right after 2, and then 4 happens 3 years after 3. So 4 years pass between books 1 and 4 of korra.

Slave route takes place in Korra book 1 and love route takes place in Korra book 4. That means Ikki is 7 in the slave route and 11 in the love route. Mity didn't age anyone up to avoid trouble or anything. Mity aged them up because of the plotlines being followed. Ikki is actually still a loli. View attachment 2086172
Ah no I did not see the series. I have seen a little of Avatar and have meant to finish it one day even after I started playing this game I did have more of a reason to finally watch it but I just haven't yet. (I have a 4 terabyte backlog of Anime and Cartoons) I have not had time to watch all of it yet. So I figured the love rout and the slave rout were closer together in the time line of the game.
 

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Ah no I did not see the series. I have seen a little of Avatar and have meant to finish it one day even after I started playing this game I did have more of a reason to finally watch it but I just haven't yet. (I have a 4 terabyte backlog of Anime and Cartoons) I have not had time to watch all of it yet. So I figured the love rout and the slave rout were closer together in the time line of the game.
To be quite honest, with how much more and more risque Mity has been getting with this sort of content, I wouldn't be surprised if we see younger Ikki in the future, either through a youth potion in the love route's post game, or the slave route's post game, which MITY said they were considering doing.
 

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To be quite honest, with how much more and more risque Mity has been getting with this sort of content, I wouldn't be surprised if we see younger Ikki in the future, either through a youth potion in the love route's post game, or the slave route's post game, which MITY said they were considering doing.
I am not against this , and I mean no offense but I don't get super excited with lolis but there have been instances in the past where certain styles(art) have been very appealing. So I don't mind it when people like lolita because I have liked it at times as well. Thanks for the info on the time lines it makes more sense now why it was done in the game that way. Have an eartly morning Ta Ta :)
 

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i fucking knew it :FacePalm:my brain running out of memory space, no wonder the thought of her in a porn love was so vivid in my mind
 

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I'm going to have to scrap this anal pose. The way the asset layers work in this one is conflicting with the hair in some technical ways. There's other anal poses with Toph to work with anyhow.
 

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From here on I'm going to focus on doing the head stuff first and worry about shopping out the accessories later, when I'm sure everything else is good to go. That way I don't have a repeat of the first pose I tried where all of that time I spent shopping those out will go to waste because I ran into problems. Below is just a test. I haven't done her expression or finished posing her hair yet. Original Toph asset is included for comparison. zbody_2.png
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Since a lot of the assets are going to revolve around lolis, I've also decided to touch up some of Mity's loli assets that I felt look kind of off, like Ikki's. The main thing being the nipples. I feel like the nipples are a little too big for lolis.
smol Jinora / Jorina from both routes could really use those touch ups as well. Atleast they did it correctly with youth-potion Kuvira.
 
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