Ren'Py Four Elements Trainer [v1.1.3f] [Mity]

[BigRod91%]

Came for the faps stayed for the the story

 

[TrueJackal]

So that minigame of fighting Kuvira in the end turned out to be just a waste of time. What a bummer...
And that whole episode in the cell was just a useless waste of time to get some stupid fetishes added into the game. Please don't do that ever again! Find a proper way to add the fetishes into the story as it continues in a meaningful way and doesn't feel forced. Otherwise leave them out.
The story was fun until that BS with Sujin trying to assassinate Kuvira happened. And it became ridiculous when the girls dropped the pictures of Kuvira for no plausible reason.
I thought Jinora was meant to be the intelligent one. But she isn't even able to determine if throwing down those pictures is necessary or not. Make a decision. Either she is intelligent. Then she should act like that. Otherwise portray her differently...
Also, you add several incidents into the story plot where the MC tries to talk some sense into Kuvira but you add none of that for Sujin who adopted and then more or less outcasted her?! Really?! And no, just denying her to assassinate Kuvira by yourself by using the sky bison doesn't count as attempt to talk some sense into Sujin. First Sujin doesn't care about the Earth Kingdom falling apart and outcasts her adopted daughter for doing what she was supposed to do - especially as Toph's daughter - but then suddenly she mans up and wants to assassinate her own adopted daughter because she got out of control after being abandoned not only by her real parents but then also by her adoptive parents over a disagreement? Every other sane MC would have tried to talk some sense into Sujin, too. The plot literally begged for it to happen. But no, suddenly for some reason the story loses its sense.
After all the main purpose of the avatar - even the time travelling one in a parody - is still to mediate between opposing parties before using force if necessary.
Please for Gods sake, get the story back on track and stop adding senseless BS that ruins the whole plot!
And if you add minigames then don't render them useless afterwards. That is uncool!
Right now I'd really like to ask you to drop the whole imprisonment part of the story and to overhaul the story in the city of Zaofu including addressing those issues I've mentioned properly and to continue from there on.
Adding fetishes is nice but only if they fit into the plot of the story and make at least some sense.

I didn't know that I could disagree with a rant this much.

How is the Kuvira minigame a waste of time? You get to see her massive titties bounce and if you win you see her naked. My only complaint is that the buttons should have been bound to keyboard keys like the Book 4 Slave Route Probending minigame. Because that would make it way easier to perform.

I think the prison section was a great idea. We didn't get to spend enough time with Kuvira, and now we got a whole subsection of time dedicated to her. It also set up the mystery of who the MC was talking to that whole time, was it a spirit or just Kuvira, or someone else? I'm not saying it was perfectly implemented, at times it could have been more clear but it seems intentional that a prison sequence would feel like a mindless rut.

As for the fetishes, it was already set up in Zaofu that Kuvira was a Dominatrix, that she had pubes, and that she was developing a fixation on the MC since he's the only one who could beat her. Then you see her swimsuit pics and she specifically lets her pubes grow. She likes the bush. And after all that set up, when she finally gets you alone, she's shoving her bush in your face, and doing BDSM things like cock-slapping, orgasm denial, and threatening to peg you. It was all set up.

Jinora making a mistake doesn't make her stupid. Smart people make mistakes all the time. And if you beat the Kuvira minigame then her clothes explode and she's naked in front of her whole army. It's entirely reasonable that Jinora or anyone watching would make the mistake of thinking that Kuvira being naked WAS the signal that the MC refused to give her. It's the MC's fault for not making that clear. It's also possible that Kuvira set it up. She had someone deliberately knock all her pictures down from the sky bison because she's secretly gets off on either exhibition or humiliation and it gives her an excuse to attack Zaofu even if she loses her fight with the MC.

Also if you genuinely think MITY has the time or resources to REDO Zaofu and erase the Prison section, then you need to tell me what you're smoking, and where can I find a lower dose.

 

[F1forhalp]

I didn't know that I could disagree with a rant this much.

How is the Kuvira minigame a waste of time? You get to see her massive titties bounce and if you win you see her naked. My only complaint is that the buttons should have been bound to keyboard keys like the Book 4 Slave Route Probending minigame. Because that would make it way easier to perform.

I think the prison section was a great idea. We didn't get to spend enough time with Kuvira, and now we got a whole subsection of time dedicated to her. It also set up the mystery of who the MC was talking to that whole time, was it a spirit or just Kuvira, or someone else? I'm not saying it was perfectly implemented, at times it could have been more clear but it seems intentional that a prison sequence would feel like a mindless rut.

As for the fetishes, it was already set up in Zaofu that Kuvira was a Dominatrix, that she had pubes, and that she was developing a fixation on the MC since he's the only one who could beat her. Then you see her swimsuit pics and she specifically lets her pubes grow. She likes the bush. And after all that set up, when she finally gets you alone, she's shoving her bush in your face, and doing BDSM things like cock-slapping, orgasm denial, and threatening to peg you. It was all set up.

Jinora making a mistake doesn't make her stupid. Smart people make mistakes all the time. And if you beat the Kuvira minigame then her clothes explode and she's naked in front of her whole army. It's entirely reasonable that Jinora or anyone watching would make the mistake of thinking that Kuvira being naked WAS the signal that the MC refused to give her. It's the MC's fault for not making that clear. It's also possible that Kuvira set it up. She had someone deliberately knock all her pictures down from the sky bison because she's secretly gets off on either exhibition or humiliation and it gives her an excuse to attack Zaofu even if she loses her fight with the MC.

Also if you genuinely think MITY has the time or resources to REDO Zaofu and erase the Prison section, then you need to tell me what you're smoking, and where can I find a lower dose.

the mini game, welp all their mini games in this do have one flaw or the other. seems they want them and we will have them because of that, but they aren't that properly 'down to a dot' smooth.

Kuvira with her expression to seize the known world and to be interested in punishment, does make sense in a way. well, i'm talking this game, leave me alone with TV storyline, that's only rudimentary needed, if even, for a game plot. can do without, just grab the figures.

the pictures. it isn't even stated or hinted anywhere that Jinora threw them pictures. may as well have been Ikki, what with her being the more impulsive one, with a thing for, well ykno, let stuff come from above.

 

[Menacing_Nut_173]

idk, my only complaint (which is more of a nitpick than anything) about the latest update is that: yeah, it didnt really make sense how the papers suddenly dropped, but tbf Ikky was on board, so something was bound to go wrong

As for the prison section of the game, i did like how these supposedly "forced fetishes" accentuate how evil kuvira actually is, like, it's the game's way of telling you: she DONT give a shit ._. straight up. If they wanted me to hate her, then they did a GREAT job at it xD and i was legit 'boutta panic when korra and jinora came into the room dressed as soldiers that shit got me like: "Y'all gonna give a brother a heart attack! "

 

[walkerjonny]

I didn't know that I could disagree with a rant this much.

How is the Kuvira minigame a waste of time? You get to see her massive titties bounce and if you win you see her naked. My only complaint is that the buttons should have been bound to keyboard keys like the Book 4 Slave Route Probending minigame. Because that would make it way easier to perform.

I think the prison section was a great idea. We didn't get to spend enough time with Kuvira, and now we got a whole subsection of time dedicated to her. It also set up the mystery of who the MC was talking to that whole time, was it a spirit or just Kuvira, or someone else? I'm not saying it was perfectly implemented, at times it could have been more clear but it seems intentional that a prison sequence would feel like a mindless rut.

As for the fetishes, it was already set up in Zaofu that Kuvira was a Dominatrix, that she had pubes, and that she was developing a fixation on the MC since he's the only one who could beat her. Then you see her swimsuit pics and she specifically lets her pubes grow. She likes the bush. And after all that set up, when she finally gets you alone, she's shoving her bush in your face, and doing BDSM things like cock-slapping, orgasm denial, and threatening to peg you. It was all set up.

Jinora making a mistake doesn't make her stupid. Smart people make mistakes all the time. And if you beat the Kuvira minigame then her clothes explode and she's naked in front of her whole army. It's entirely reasonable that Jinora or anyone watching would make the mistake of thinking that Kuvira being naked WAS the signal that the MC refused to give her. It's the MC's fault for not making that clear. It's also possible that Kuvira set it up. She had someone deliberately knock all her pictures down from the sky bison because she's secretly gets off on either exhibition or humiliation and it gives her an excuse to attack Zaofu even if she loses her fight with the MC.

Also if you genuinely think MITY has the time or resources to REDO Zaofu and erase the Prison section, then you need to tell me what you're smoking, and where can I find a lower dose.

Well, everyone has their own view on those topics. That's just fine.

For me for example that ominous voice was just wasted because that "woman" told the MC that Kuvira was also imprisoning members of the other nations which would actually be a game changer. However, now the MC cannot be sure anymore that this might be really true because he has to assume that it was just his imagination. It wasn't him who heard that hiss from Nagina in the end. And even then he couldn't have been sure that Nagina was just playing a mind game with him.

And then there's still the in my opinion missing interaction between the MC and Sujin except for the sexual content. There isn't that much to add in Zaofu honestly. Just some addition of talking interactions with Sujin where he also tries to talk some sense into her. That is already enough to add way more sense to that part of the story. Maybe let Sujin act as stubborn as Kuvira when the MC hits a weak spot there in a way that at least somewhat explains why she was hell bent to assassinate her own adopted daughter.

If the goal was to portray Kuvira really being evil then MITY failed to accomplish that so far. She has some weird fetishes and seems to be obsessed with the MC. But that's it so far. Right now she more or less just overstepped the mark quite a bit. She isn't that different from Azula right now. And her main goal itself isn't that bad. She just wants to pacify the crime-riddled Earth Kingdom and unite it as it was once the case. Her methods however are very questionable and she didn't take the opinions of the people actually living in the territory of the Earth Kingdom into account.

Sure, Ikki does some stupid things. But both she and Inora witnessed the MC beating the clothes off of Kuvira if you won the minigames earlier on, too. So they both should have known that the MC wasn't loosing when it happened again. And Inora until now was able to watch Ikki more or less properly.
The only weak link there could have been Opal in my opinion. Maybe she couldn't bear to watch her mother being "abused" for bukkake anymore and released the pictures out of retaliation. But this wouldn't explain the wide spreading of the pictures throughout the whole army. That would have to be done by both Inora and Ikki using airbending. And that again doesn't make much sense. Also, if it was a mistake then Inora just could have airbended the falling pictures back onto the sky bison. In my understanding she was the one in charge there. Without an explanation the decision to drop and spread the pictures doesn't make sense at the moment. If MITY really wants to go along with that he should add a proper explanation of what happened in due time. Otherwise this part just feels way off to me right now.

Also, both the MC and the Kuvira just had come to an agreement and Kuvira's words show that she felt betrayed by the MC. Her way to handle things - like being willing to fight the MC 1 on 1 without a real need from a military perspective or not attacking Zaofu right from the beginning with military force - shows that she actually has a kind of honor. And so far she seemed to be a more straight forward and not a scheming person like Long Feng (book 3 villain). She in fact despises all those corrupt politicians/leading figures in the Earth Kingdom who didn't want to do the dirty work but then wanted to reap in the benefits. In my opinion your portrayal of Kuvira doesn't go that well along with what the plot revealed so far about her.

I'll admit that there are some parts in the prison part of the story that might be required for the later parts of the plot like that attendant trying to sabotage that "super" weapon and the revelation that spirit vines are required to charge it. But so far it isn't clear what Kuvira wants to do with it. She stated several times that she only wants to unite the Earth Kingdom around its original borders. Maybe MITY just needs to improve the execution of the plot at certain points of the story to add more sense to it and everything might work out just well in the end.

 

[walkerjonny]

What in my opinion also doesn't make sense that much so far is that the MC right now in book 4 doesn't seem to be able to water-, fire- or earthbend. Sure, he is now in the body of an airbender and not of the avatar itself. But he is able to contact the sprits in the spirit world. That's actually something only the avatar can do. Either he is the current avatar or not. Then it shouldn't matter that much what body he occupies at the moment. But not partially. That doesn't make much sense.
Maybe MITY should address that at some point in the story. What is interesting though is that Katara pointed the MC to ask Korra a lot of things about the abilities of the avatar like the avatar state for example. Maybe the MC just isn't aware that he actually CAN water-, fire- and earthbend because he assumes to be limited in his abilities due to the body he's occupying right now not being the the body of the avatar of that time.
Thinking back to book 2 when the MC occupied the body of Zuko he actually never even tried to waterbend because he focused that much on learning to firebend. So him assuming to be limited by the body he's occupying at the moment without actually really being limited could actually be an explanation. Maybe that could've been one of the reasons why Katara pointed him to ask Korra those questions: Maybe she's preparing him for the things to come. She and Toph to a certain degree both seem to know more than the MC himself and Katara told him once that he came back to her and told her some things...

 

[IdarksoulsI]

So that minigame of fighting Kuvira in the end turned out to be just a waste of time. What a bummer...
And that whole episode in the cell was just a useless waste of time to get some stupid fetishes added into the game. Please don't do that ever again! Find a proper way to add the fetishes into the story as it continues in a meaningful way and doesn't feel forced. Otherwise leave them out.
The story was fun until that BS with Sujin trying to assassinate Kuvira happened. And it became ridiculous when the girls dropped the pictures of Kuvira for no plausible reason.
I thought Jinora was meant to be the intelligent one. But she isn't even able to determine if throwing down those pictures is necessary or not. Make a decision. Either she is intelligent. Then she should act like that. Otherwise portray her differently...
Also, you add several incidents into the story plot where the MC tries to talk some sense into Kuvira but you add none of that for Sujin who adopted and then more or less outcasted her?! Really?! And no, just denying her to assassinate Kuvira by yourself by using the sky bison doesn't count as attempt to talk some sense into Sujin. First Sujin doesn't care about the Earth Kingdom falling apart and outcasts her adopted daughter for doing what she was supposed to do - especially as Toph's daughter - but then suddenly she mans up and wants to assassinate her own adopted daughter because she got out of control after being abandoned not only by her real parents but then also by her adoptive parents over a disagreement? Every other sane MC would have tried to talk some sense into Sujin, too. The plot literally begged for it to happen. But no, suddenly for some reason the story loses its sense.
After all the main purpose of the avatar - even the time travelling one in a parody - is still to mediate between opposing parties before using force if necessary.
Please for Gods sake, get the story back on track and stop adding senseless BS that ruins the whole plot!
And if you add minigames then don't render them useless afterwards. That is uncool!
Right now I'd really like to ask you to drop the whole imprisonment part of the story and to overhaul the story in the city of Zaofu including addressing those issues I've mentioned properly and to continue from there on.
Adding fetishes is nice but only if they fit into the plot of the story and make at least some sense.

so who wants to tell him

You mean that the developers don't read this thread?
Or that he should think less and wank more?

I'm honestly fine with people that think before writing. At least their post don't annoy me like the questions from people that don't want to use the search tool.

 

[Country roads]

You mean that the developers don't read this thread?
Or that he should think less and wank more?

I'm honestly fine with people that think before writing. At least their post don't annoy me like the questions from people that don't want to use the search tool.

I was going to say the first one but why not both

 

[joe nemo]

I wasn't into the whole prison thing, although I'm glad to see more Zhu Li. Kuvira has proven to be a complete cunt by turning her adopted mom into cum sponge. Kuvira is also sharp enough to know that the MC is special in some way. Beating Kuvira should have changed some of the scenes and dialog in prison. She should have been curious about how the MC won when he he was supposed to be a wimpy airbender.

 

[Hales_the_comet]

What in my opinion also doesn't make sense that much so far is that the MC right now in book 4 doesn't seem to be able to water-, fire- or earthbend. Sure, he is now in the body of an airbender and not of the avatar itself. But he is able to contact the sprits in the spirit world. That's actually something only the avatar can do. Either he is the current avatar or not. Then it shouldn't matter that much what body he occupies at the moment. But not partially. That doesn't make much sense.
Maybe MITY should address that at some point in the story. What is interesting though is that Katara pointed the MC to ask Korra a lot of things about the abilities of the avatar like the avatar state for example. Maybe the MC just isn't aware that he actually CAN water-, fire- and earthbend because he assumes to be limited in his abilities due to the body he's occupying right now not being the the body of the avatar of that time.
Thinking back to book 2 when the MC occupied the body of Zuko he actually never even tried to waterbend because he focused that much on learning to firebend. So him assuming to be limited by the body he's occupying at the moment without actually really being limited could actually be an explanation. Maybe that could've been one of the reasons why Katara pointed him to ask Korra those questions: Maybe she's preparing him for the things to come. She and Toph to a certain degree both seem to know more than the MC himself and Katara told him once that he came back to her and told her some things...

Even if the MC could potentially bend all 4 elements in book 4, it doesn't mean he should. You have to be aware of the fact that everyone in that world thinks that there is only one person who can bend all 4 elements (Avatar Korra). Everyone, excluding maybe Katara and Toph, thinks that the MC is some random airbender guy. Having him reveal that he is an Avatar from a different time and just bend all 4 elements willy nilly would be sure to cause a lot of problems and chaos and would make things a LOT more complicated for him than is necessary.

Of course I may be reading too much into this but it's still valid.

 

[F1forhalp]

Even if the MC could potentially bend all 4 elements in book 4, it doesn't mean he should. You have to be aware of the fact that everyone in that world thinks that there is only one person who can bend all 4 elements (Avatar Korra). Everyone, excluding maybe Katara and Toph, thinks that the MC is some random airbender guy. Having him reveal that he is an Avatar from a different time and just bend all 4 elements willy nilly would be sure to cause a lot of problems and chaos and would make things a LOT more complicated for him than is necessary.

Of course I may be reading too much into this but it's still valid.

agree, that truly wouldn't even fit and well, would end the developing storyline right there, at the moment he pops up this "yo i can do dem all bruv" because it's still about him having to learn the last one, while again being thrown into someone's body, who btw doesn't have all 4 abilities. the book would kind of lose the point.

 

[AnonySupreme]

Someone raised an interesting point here, albeit unintentionally, so I won't give them credit.

We actually have basically no context for how far in the future the Avatar is, do we? I don't remember any flavor text giving away how many years/decades/centuries/millenia/etc... have passed since ATLA or Korra, except some geographic/city details that confirm it's post Korra (which we already know).

I wonder if it's gonna turn out that the Avatar MC is actually only 1-2 generations removed from Korra, and because of her losing the spiritual connection to past Avatars, that's why current Avatar is a shitter who sits around his house playing games and fapping instead of solving world problem. Yeah, it's implied things aren't terrible in his time anyway, but still - what if losing the connection to the Avatars who put their lives on the line are why he is the way he is?

I'm guessing he just has a serious case of the shitter mentality at the beginning of the game (or Rance mentality through the entire Slave Route, which is even shitter), but still. Would be interesting if there's some explanation or timeline given. Technically if he's in the Republic City most nations have reps there, and the next Avatar should be from the Earth Kingdom, so he could theoretically be as soon as the next Avatar after Korra.

 

[Country roads]

Someone raised an interesting point here, albeit unintentionally, so I won't give them credit.

We actually have basically no context for how far in the future the Avatar is, do we? I don't remember any flavor text giving away how many years/decades/centuries/millenia/etc... have passed since ATLA or Korra, except some geographic/city details that confirm it's post Korra (which we already know).

I wonder if it's gonna turn out that the Avatar MC is actually only 1-2 generations removed from Korra, and because of her losing the spiritual connection to past Avatars, that's why current Avatar is a shitter who sits around his house playing games and fapping instead of solving world problem. Yeah, it's implied things aren't terrible in his time anyway, but still - what if losing the connection to the Avatars who put their lives on the line are why he is the way he is?

I'm guessing he just has a serious case of the shitter mentality at the beginning of the game (or Rance mentality through the entire Slave Route, which is even shitter), but still. Would be interesting if there's some explanation or timeline given. Technically if he's in the Republic City most nations have reps there, and the next Avatar should be from the Earth Kingdom, so he could theoretically be as soon as the next Avatar after Korra.

He should be the water bender avatar in the cycle but idrk since we learn fire before earth but that could've been a slip up on mitys part

 

[Semondemon]

Wait so is there more content with 9.5 passed the Jinorra date?
To be fair I was playing a build and thought I hit a wall, there's an interaction with kuvira and imprisonment?
unless the latter is slave route not love but I hit a point & nothing happened so I shrugged and figured I was out of new stuff. I started a new job and wasn't really able to confirm anything due to long hours.

 

[errte13]

Wait so is there more content with 9.5 passed the Jinorra date?
To be fair I was playing a build and thought I hit a wall, there's an interaction with kuvira and imprisonment?
unless the latter is slave route not love but I hit a point & nothing happened so I shrugged and figured I was out of new stuff. I started a new job and wasn't really able to confirm anything due to long hours.

Yes there's more content after Jinora's date.

 

[Semondemon]

Yes there's more content after Jinora's date.

how do you get it?

 

[joe nemo]

Someone raised an interesting point here, albeit unintentionally, so I won't give them credit.

We actually have basically no context for how far in the future the Avatar is, do we? I don't remember any flavor text giving away how many years/decades/centuries/millenia/etc... have passed since ATLA or Korra, except some geographic/city details that confirm it's post Korra (which we already know).

I wonder if it's gonna turn out that the Avatar MC is actually only 1-2 generations removed from Korra, and because of her losing the spiritual connection to past Avatars, that's why current Avatar is a shitter who sits around his house playing games and fapping instead of solving world problem. Yeah, it's implied things aren't terrible in his time anyway, but still - what if losing the connection to the Avatars who put their lives on the line are why he is the way he is?

I'm guessing he just has a serious case of the shitter mentality at the beginning of the game (or Rance mentality through the entire Slave Route, which is even shitter), but still. Would be interesting if there's some explanation or timeline given. Technically if he's in the Republic City most nations have reps there, and the next Avatar should be from the Earth Kingdom, so he could theoretically be as soon as the next Avatar after Korra.

There are hints and comments in the game that the MC is decades past Korra's time, not centuries or millenia. The book 4 slave route in particular implies that the MC is from the 2020s to Korra's 1920s. The MC comments on various places in Republic city as having changed a bit and remembers a lot of characters as if it was recent history.

I always thought the MC was just a horny slacker who gets dragged through the story by forces beyond his control. All he really wants is the have a harem of the girls he fucked throughout the story as permanent teenagers.

 

[errte13]

how do you get it?

I don't remember what happened lol. When you sleep, some knock at the door and it's Sujin going to assassinate Kuvira. MC was like "OK" and went back to sleep. Check out Sujin's home then other people, got to the pond to see an earth soldier.

Dunno if this is right after the date, or there's still content between, the date and what I'm talking about.

 

[Semondemon]

Odd I couldn't get anything to trigger when I tried last night that said I only went a single day and it was really quick.

 

[Kratos2131]

I also have neither lags nor any other problems with the kuvira fighting minigame, but tbh I guess its because many people who play porn games here have the shittiest potatoe PCs in existence of mankind.
Thats also why you always have people on this forum begging for Android versions or mobile ports in general

when is the next update