VN Ren'Py Fractured Hearts [Ch.1] [Turbo Kinetic's]

[lucik93]

I'm a sucker for Izzy and her twintails GG dev

 

[ChadInStrapJacket]

cause I have seen a few people mention it in some way or another. Erika's character model belongs to me alone, her model itself isn't used in any other games. but yes, she does have an overused hair. i just like it for her personality. dont get used to her hair, no spoilers though.

its also not just hers. i used some base models for all 4 girls in the jackson family but swapped skins and used face and body sliders to make them my own. actually my first attempt as emilia came out so old looking she ended up becoming Susans model. #funfact
technically imran is a custom too i think but not on purpose haha

also im doing the lords work and shutting down the ntr cucks
View attachment 5507115

What no father growing up does to a mf, mashallah, they come and make demands, their pecker can't get hard without another man's cock presence in the screen, wallahi.

 

[Fap-Nation enjoyer]

nice coincidence. im writing an emilia scene right now haha

what fuckin cracked start, bravo sir

 

[Jnx]

not every game is going to be done by an English degree holder. I sleep 5 hours a day. mistakes will be made. i also don't have any beta testers or anyone to go behind me checking. i'd be curious about the pronouns i messed up. some of the other stuff is planned to get addressed.

The correct answer was "I'll try to do better." The issue was every single time those issues happened, not every once in a while. Every plural had apostrophes, Every past tense sentence had extra words tensed incorrectly, and "than" is a word that I don't think is in the game.

Now, you might be surprised to hear this, but outside of the default UI, the English and the cringe worthy Erika scene were my only two issues with the game. (Maybe the fact it's essentially an "MC returns home from the military after X years and everyone wants sex story for the 2409854230869th time doesn't help) But I thought it was fine. But the English got so egregious I couldn't handle it by the end.