That to me is one of the hardest things to get right for a female protagonist VN / game - the female perspective.
We have probably all played VN / games where the female protagonist seems to go from one sex scene to another in near endless cycle with minimal build up and little focus on her thoughts and feelings. Like most porn and to be honest I would rather watch porn than play those sort of VN/games. So I gravitate to those that spend time on the female protagonist's character and personality, what she is thinking and feeling.
Sometimes that comes from Dev or member of team being female. Other times from who can get such insight from wife/girlfriend/female friends.
That comment about makeup is a good indication of what myself and probably 90-99% of males would nt think of. I am sure that Yoon will learn that less can be more and that she will work out what little make up she can use to enhance her natural beauty rather than risk covering it by using too much makeup.
Hopefully you can improve the quality of your English translation. But otherwise look forward to seeing more of ongoing adventures of Yoon.
Okay, I think I can open out a bit of my previous professional and personal life, I was a new face idol who is gaining popularity on Tik Tok and Facebook. I had got some fans from my local and even some from neighboring countries like Thailand. But unfortunately, not only me also almost all the artist who is against the current military coup aren't okay to be public if we have done some leading protesters. And yes I was one of them so it's like I lost my job for not knowing how long it will be.
Let's get to the point then, as an Idol, I and my Asian celebrity friends almost always wear makeup for every shooting. It may sound a bit feminine to you but yes we really do that I am confident to tell. IMO, it's nothing wrong as a male to wear makeup. So as independent artists, I can hardly hire professional makeup artists for every single work except commercials. So, we gotta learn how to do makeup ourselves and almost all of us are good at that, believe it or not. We can also do some basic hair works if we need to, aha.
And another thing I want to mention again is this story is co-written with a female writer, Stella so some aspects came from her.
Sukkhon, in my story, is quite like the common ones we used to see on daily basic regular shooting-related cases. They really are that charming in reality. They always bring some happiness to shooting. You can never know if they were having bad days at home. I have to say Trans women here and in Thailand are quite confident and good at social skills even though it is a bit against our mother culture.
For English, I and Stella will never get close to native speakers I guess, so I have asked for good friends who are natives. I think they will do it quite fast for us. Let's just wait for it. And of course, I'll be trying to improve my English.