VN Ren'Py Completed Free Pass [S1 v1.56] [After Choices]

3.60 star(s) 85 Votes
Discussion Reviews (85)
gregers

gregers

Forum Fanatic
Dec 9, 2018
5,059
6,554
After Choices said:
Thank you so much for playing.
You don't have permission to view the spoiler content. Log in or register now.
Click to expand...
That doesn't really address the vibrator part at all.

Marine1952 said:
I have played through several times and I am not able to get the scenes in the spoiler.
You don't have permission to view the spoiler content. Log in or register now.
Click to expand...
At the party, have her pick truth during the second round of Truth or Dare and say yes to all the different kinds of porn, then get drunk (six or seven drinks I think).
 
  • Like
Reactions: Marine1952 and After Choices
After Choices

After Choices

Engaged Member
Game Developer
Mar 21, 2021
2,707
14,223
M4P2 said:
Personally, Jasmine's character is very reminiscent of Patricia from AWAM.
The closest person to the main character, playful personality, passion for adventures, moves the plot, and so on.
I adore Patricia, perhaps even more than Ellie.
Among other things, due to the fact that, despite her playful nature, she knows when to stop, she knows her boundaries and she can always keep an eye on and protect Sofia.

Honestly, I would like to see something similar here.
I don't want Jasmine's character to be a banal archetype of a local whore who sleeps with a new man every night.

Naturally, everyone has their own tastes, and you need a choice tied to the character's points.

For example, several routes.
"Adventure partners", where Yoon and Jasmine go from party to party and have fun with no brakes.
And something softer and more romantic.
Click to expand...
Patricia is rich and has no obvious weakness, Jas on the other hand has financial problems. Actually, if we take a deep look at some scenes, Jas may have some mental illness, too. She's a bit broken. And yes I want soft things between those two best friends but you guys know me... I love to put some drama, too.
 
  • Like
Reactions: Deleted member 3702447, Poser_Voyeur, damnedfrog and 4 others
After Choices

After Choices

Engaged Member
Game Developer
Mar 21, 2021
2,707
14,223
gregers said:
That doesn't really address the vibrator part at all.



At the party, have her pick truth during the second round of Truth or Dare and say yes to all the different kinds of porn, then get drunk (six or seven drinks I think).
Click to expand...
I feel bad to bad mouth about Daniel. Pathetic Daniel is never good at keeping a healthy relationship. He is lucky because he has got Yoon. If not Yoon, he might have ended with a third/ fourth marriage already. What I want to say is Daniel may come up with a worse idea than bringing home a vibrator. As we already knew that even Adam and Richard are able to draw him to the Free Pass thing with some talk.
 
m4pII

m4pII

Well-Known Member
Jun 22, 2019
1,194
3,149
After Choices said:
Patricia is rich and has no obvious weakness, Jas on the other hand has financial problems. Actually, if we take a deep look at some scenes, Jas may have some mental illness, too. She's a bit broken.
Click to expand...
Yes, you're right, it makes sense.

But then another question. If Jasmine is faced with a choice - money or Yооn. What will she choose?
I know what Patricia would choose, but I'm not sure about Jasmine.

It just looks like she doesn't know what a brake pedal is yet.
At the very least, I wish Yoon could be such a limiter and common sense for her.
 
  • Like
  • Thinking Face
  • Heart
Reactions: Deleted member 2339068, Poser_Voyeur, Deleted member 2613945 and 1 other person
After Choices

After Choices

Engaged Member
Game Developer
Mar 21, 2021
2,707
14,223
M4P2 said:
Yes, you're right, it makes sense.

But then another question. If Jasmine is faced with a choice - money or Yооn. What will she choose?
I know what Patricia would choose, but I'm not sure about Jasmine.

It just looks like she doesn't know what a brake pedal is yet.
At the very least, I wish Yoon could be such a limiter and common sense for her.
Click to expand...
I am also a big fan of this show called "
You must be registered to see the links
". In that series, characters are the 30s but they are nowhere near maturity. They make mistakes, they learn from them. That's the way I like it. Jas made the mistake she has to be the big girl in a duet but she was not. She has to learn from it. I don't like to tell the readers through the narrator saying back story with quotes. I did a bit at the start of this story and you can see people here hate the most parts of it. So, it would be a spoiler if I give you the direct information. Don't want to make you have less experience with future updates. All I can tell now is... if Jas makes the mistake, she has to learn and be a grownup. The players need to see this as a back story for the future.

There is a new movie called "
You must be registered to see the links
". I like the most part of that movie but personally don't like the intro. The exposition part of the three-act story structure is really important. That's why Korean drama series got some popularity on Netflix. In that movie, almost all interesting part we want to watch becomes back story that is told by the narrator at the intro. I feel like I have no real connection and feeling for the main character. No matter what bad happened to her, I don't care that much because I can't feel close to her with just 15 minutes back story.
 
  • Like
  • Heart
Reactions: Deleted member 2339068, Deleted member 2613945 and m4pII
Deleted member 2613945

Deleted member 2613945

Well-Known Member
Jul 17, 2020
1,465
2,476
After Choices said:
Personally, I would consider the love between a woman and kathoey, "Lesbian Romance". Because... "Trans women are women".

But Sukkhon may have some hormone, mental problems.

You don't have permission to view the spoiler content. Log in or register now.
Click to expand...
Ok, i think i know what You mean
You don't have permission to view the spoiler content. Log in or register now.

That is my opinion - to give player a choice, if You don't like it just do it in Your way
I'm ok with Your decisons about Sukkhon ;)
 
  • Heart
  • Like
Reactions: Deleted member 2339068, spitfire335 and After Choices
m4pII

m4pII

Well-Known Member
Jun 22, 2019
1,194
3,149
After Choices said:
I am also a big fan of this show called "
You must be registered to see the links
". In that series, characters are the 30s but they are nowhere near maturity. They make mistakes, they learn from them. That's the way I like it. Jas made the mistake she has to be the big girl in a duet but she was not. She has to learn from it. I don't like to tell the readers through the narrator saying back story with quotes. I did a bit at the start of this story and you can see people here hate the most parts of it. So, it would be a spoiler if I give you the direct information. Don't want to make you have less experience with future updates. All I can tell now is... if Jas makes the mistake, she has to learn and be a grownup. The players need to see this as a back story for the future.

There is a new movie called "
You must be registered to see the links
". I like the most part of that movie but personally don't like the intro. The exposition part of the three-act story structure is really important. That's why Korean drama series got some popularity on Netflix. In that movie, almost all interesting part we want to watch becomes back story that is told by the narrator at the intro. I feel like I have no real connection and feeling for the main character. No matter what bad happened to her, I don't care that much because I can't feel close to her with just 15 minutes back story.
Click to expand...
Thanks for the answer. I understood your idea)

This is just personal preference. I don't like stories like this, where a girl turns into an outspoken whore.
That is, for me the stories of corruption is not the transformation of a girl into a slut, but the expansion of boundaries and active search of oneself in personal and sexual terms.

Thanks again) I will wait for the development of the plot)
 
  • Heart
  • Like
Reactions: Deleted member 2339068, Poser_Voyeur, BUCCO and 1 other person
After Choices

After Choices

Engaged Member
Game Developer
Mar 21, 2021
2,707
14,223
M4P2 said:
Thanks for the answer. I understood your idea)

This is just personal preference. I don't like stories like this, where a girl turns into an outspoken whore.
That is, for me the stories of corruption is not the transformation of a girl into a slut, but the expansion of boundaries and active search of oneself in personal and sexual terms.

Thanks again) I will wait for the development of the plot)
Click to expand...
Yes, that is why I like New Girl. She explores sexuality in a good manner a lot but finally ends up with a good man. People say Emily in the Paris and New Girl are similar. But I haven't watched Emily in Paris yet. New girl is a sitcom/ comedy but Emily is not.
 
  • Thinking Face
Reactions: Deleted member 2613945
After Choices

After Choices

Engaged Member
Game Developer
Mar 21, 2021
2,707
14,223
Yoon Ni Ko said:
Don't forget to post this art and those one with Sophia and Yoon to "show us your daz skill"
Maybe someone came to play game after seeing Your skills:whistle:
Click to expand...
I have posted but they ask me for Richard Art. I think I will do the NUDE ART. Sorry mate I'll stop kidding from now :D

Yeah! I have posted. Thank you :love:
 
  • Haha
  • Like
Reactions: Deleted member 3702447, Deleted member 2339068, BUCCO and 1 other person
Deleted member 2613945

Deleted member 2613945

Well-Known Member
Jul 17, 2020
1,465
2,476
After Choices said:
I have posted but they ask me for Richard Art. I think I will do the NUDE ART. Sorry mate I'll stop kidding from now :D

Yeah! I have posted. Thank you :love:
Click to expand...
Dunno how and why but f95 shows me notifications after few hours after someone post comment, after writing comment i saw Your arts in daz thread also on awam art thread
Thank You for that art :oops:
 
  • Heart
Reactions: After Choices
After Choices

After Choices

Engaged Member
Game Developer
Mar 21, 2021
2,707
14,223
yonephyu said:
Hello, I have a silly question but is the creator of this game Burmese? I am a Burmese myself and I am really glad to see where this game will lead! Please keep up the good work <3
Click to expand...
Hello mate, I and Stella are not 100% Myanmarese but I was born in Myanmar. Nice to meet you and thank you for the interest.
 
  • Like
Reactions: yonephyu
You must log in or register to reply here.
Top Bottom
3.60 star(s) 85 Votes