Overall the concept is really good, the MC is not the typical insta-slut a lot of these kinds of games turn into.
In particular I am enjoying the stories with Zoe, Jasmine, Michelle and Sukkhon.
Most of the male characters are pretty forgettable. but the quality of the female ones makes up for it.
Personally I am playing this from the perspective of Yoon being complacent in her marriage but not happy and learning she has feelings for women and the pacing on it has been very good so far. She didnt just flip a switch and is suddenly having massive lesbian orgies. shes confused and curious and taking it slow.
Loving the mother daughter discovery path, them becoming closer and repairing their relationship which seems a bit strained at the start.
I am especially curious to see how the writer handles the Dom/sub points and if there will be a legit D/s relationship between Jasmin and Yoon with Jasmin taking charge of Yoon's life after getting tired of seeing her friend unhappy and finally deciding to give in to her feelings for Yoon, or if its just a prelude for kinky BDSM sex which will be disappointing.
The missing star is for the translation, in its current form, the game would benefit from proofreading by an experienced proofreader who can take the intentions of the writer and better translate them into English. Because games like this make me wish I could speak/read the writers native language because even though the translation is very rough, there is enough there to really draw me in and I feel like being able to read the story the way the writer is most comfortable writing would enhance it tremendously.
Post .4 update
Literally as I finished the review .4 dropped complete with proofreading and I was not wrong, I havent checked to see if its retroactive but from .4 (at least as far as ive gotten) its greatly improved to the point where I retract the negative star for it.
the intro to .4 threw a lot of stuff at the player out of the gate which may or may not pay off or lead to some confusion in the story. I know the bulk of it is a bit of showing the player what happened between the last day you can influence the game in the last update and the current version's time jump.
Some of it is a bit fast edit bam bam bam and feels a bit hard to follow at first as a lot of info is thrown in real quick. but once you retake control of Joon the storytelling is back on form.
In particular I am enjoying the stories with Zoe, Jasmine, Michelle and Sukkhon.
Most of the male characters are pretty forgettable. but the quality of the female ones makes up for it.
Personally I am playing this from the perspective of Yoon being complacent in her marriage but not happy and learning she has feelings for women and the pacing on it has been very good so far. She didnt just flip a switch and is suddenly having massive lesbian orgies. shes confused and curious and taking it slow.
Loving the mother daughter discovery path, them becoming closer and repairing their relationship which seems a bit strained at the start.
I am especially curious to see how the writer handles the Dom/sub points and if there will be a legit D/s relationship between Jasmin and Yoon with Jasmin taking charge of Yoon's life after getting tired of seeing her friend unhappy and finally deciding to give in to her feelings for Yoon, or if its just a prelude for kinky BDSM sex which will be disappointing.
The missing star is for the translation, in its current form, the game would benefit from proofreading by an experienced proofreader who can take the intentions of the writer and better translate them into English. Because games like this make me wish I could speak/read the writers native language because even though the translation is very rough, there is enough there to really draw me in and I feel like being able to read the story the way the writer is most comfortable writing would enhance it tremendously.
Post .4 update
Literally as I finished the review .4 dropped complete with proofreading and I was not wrong, I havent checked to see if its retroactive but from .4 (at least as far as ive gotten) its greatly improved to the point where I retract the negative star for it.
the intro to .4 threw a lot of stuff at the player out of the gate which may or may not pay off or lead to some confusion in the story. I know the bulk of it is a bit of showing the player what happened between the last day you can influence the game in the last update and the current version's time jump.
Some of it is a bit fast edit bam bam bam and feels a bit hard to follow at first as a lot of info is thrown in real quick. but once you retake control of Joon the storytelling is back on form.