VN Ren'Py Fresh Story [Season 2 v1.0.4 Steam] [WetMelonPlay]

[TeamEquipe]

Am I wrong or did the writing (and the visuals) suddenly got a lot better in this update?
Almost seems like someone else took over this game.
But I like it. It's good!

Well that went downhill fast.
I had the same feeling that there was a different writer - it got extremely wordy - but the political stuff was bullshit and has no place in a VN game imo.
I agree with KoGa that there were scenes missing from this english language version as there were obvious gaps in the story that I found confusing, so much so that I kept scrolling back to see if I'd skipped some renders.
Overall, quite disappointed at how the story has become bogged down with this release.

 

[Boobman4424]

wheres the mega link at.

 

[FookU2]

"He's got me wrapped around his finger" doesn't mean "I'm being blackmailed and have no other choice."
It means "I love him" or "I can't get enough of him."

"What's on your mind?" This would be used to ask what a person is thinking, in the context that you would just be interested in knowing their thoughts. "What's wrong with your mind" would be better fit for the context of "what is wrong with you?"

I know this is translated from Russian, but sometimes these little things matter.

 

[biniweti]

We need shota content not boyfriend (

 

[EnterYourNameHere]

We need shota content not boyfriend (

Impossible in that game.

 

[Kukipett]

Well it could have been a good story but there is Archie !!! And my god Kate is so stupid sometimes.
The writing is good but the story is badly handeled, you are given choices but then later you get a scene that contradict your choices.
To be honest i got pissed during all this update with Kate being all over her Archie, then suddently towards the end she seems to want to get rid of him when she speaks with Lisa but right at the end she spends the week end with him and fucks with him like nothing ever happened, even if i agreed to spend the week end with Lisa!
Two major mistake in that VN.
First never give your girl MC a boyfriend, the player will feel jalous and will hate him, especially if the MC is stupid like Kate.
Second don't give the player choices if you don't intend to follow the consequences, it's infuriating!

The way this VN is going makes me feel that i wont go any further. Playing a stupid girl in love with her cheating boyfriend is a big no no especially if the story ignores my choices.

 

[Daniele69]

This is the Italian translation of :
Kate [v0.7.1]

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This translation is "unofficial" and "made by a fan"
extract the .rar file and move "game" to the game where the .exe file resides overwrite if required
DOWNLOAD ITALIAN​

 

[whf]

This game follows the example of The Office's past update(s) - new version has fucked up writing. I have no fucking clue what the hell Kate's talking about half the time in 0.7 update. I assume they changed the writer or translator? Well, kick him out, he can do shit. Hopefully they will get back on track with normal, understandable writing, like The Office did, eventually.

 

[whf]

First never give your girl MC a boyfriend, the player will feel jalous and will hate him, especially if the MC is stupid like Kate.

What? You get jealous over MC's boyfriend? The fuck? Without boyfriend (and without the cheating in the game) game would be robbed of most of the excitement. That's what happened to Anna's Exciting Affection and what is happening to Lily of the Valley (pushing husband away, making Fred Lily's new "husband" figure).

I personally don't understand at all why Kate resents her boyfriend in 0.7 update. What happened that made her like that out of the blue? She's talking about some message of something that I have no damn idea what it is.

 

[Purple Lagoon]

This game follows the example of The Office's past update(s) - new version has fucked up writing. I have no fucking clue what the hell Kate's talking about half the time in 0.7 update. I assume they changed the writer or translator? Well, kick him out, he can do shit. Hopefully they will get back on track with normal, understandable writing, like The Office did, eventually.

I think the writing got better. Just my opinion.
Before I found the writing rather plain and uninspired. Now it's deeper (although a bit more difficult to follow).

 

[JorellMartis]

I love this game

 

[m3nic]

Kate will not cheat to her boyfriend Archie and always be faithful girlfriend until developer say YES
So wait them for a couple of years maybe next it will happen to Kate
In my opinion, I think it would be more realible if the protagonist is handed over to Archie not Kate.

 

[adsl2009]

very nice

 

[lemaro]

nice gonna follow

 

[ayay0o]

more ture slut pathhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

 

[linus.quotes]

Great game, can't wait for more

 

[SteelyDan14]

After struggling through the god awful writing, I found myself liking this game until the 15yr old boy showed up. I mean, seriously... aren't there plenty of other ideas out there without her fucking around with a child? Why is this even an option? Seriously, there is a disclaimer at the start of the game asking if you are 18 or not, yet the dev throws in a 15 yr old? What's the point? Why the disclaimer if you are going to have children in the game?

I was even getting ready to do a gallery mod for this game, but fuck that.

 

[Kazanovaromeo]

After struggling through the god awful writing, I found myself liking this game until the 15yr old boy showed up. I mean, seriously... aren't there plenty of other ideas out there without her fucking around with a child? Why is this even an option? Seriously, there is a disclaimer at the start of the game asking if you are 18 or not, yet the dev throws in a 15 yr old? What's the point? Why the disclaimer if you are going to have children in the game?

I was even getting ready to do a gallery mod for this game, but fuck that.

and ALL Characters depicted in the game are 18 years old or older


NO COMMENT.

 

[Balbaar]

Am I missing something or is this game just incredibly boring.?

It feels like they're trying way too hard to be a slow burn, yet fail to deliver any kind of decent story and writing to justify said slow burn.. I've played through everything (I guess?) and it just feels hollow. I think this dev should seriously consider hiring a writer because this is just a waste of a good looking MC...

 

[Darkblaze23]

Can anyone share the news about the update