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- Apr 9, 2018
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Glad to see another female protag game, I just hope it isn't going down the blackmail route(or at least she can tell the blackmailer to gtfo), with the way the first release ended. It also needs some serious polishing, wrong images showing at times, missing selfie image in text and some bad Engrish, especially pronoun issues.
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Damn, main character is hot as fuck. It's a pleasure to play a girl as beautifull as her.
Hope writing will not be shit cause it would be a waist.
waiting for some foot fetish content too
Hope writing will not be shit cause it would be a waist.
waiting for some foot fetish content too
Kinda common issue wrt english/russian languages. Horrible RUS-201 memories. lol
Am I the only one that was perplexed by the heavy math on the coffee shop's menu board in that 4th preview pic (haven't had chance to play, so maybe it's explained in-game). Brought back yet more icky college memories from Calc 3 or 4.
LOLthought the same thing hahaha, a porn site is the last place i thought i would see the limit definition of derivatives and such hahaKinda common issue wrt english/russian languages. Horrible RUS-201 memories. lol
Am I the only one that was perplexed by the heavy math on the coffee shop's menu board in that 4th preview pic (haven't had chance to play, so maybe it's explained in-game). Brought back yet more icky college memories from Calc 3 or 4.
HELIO CESAR Best guess: they needed a chalkboard & that asset fit the space & was either free or cheap enough.
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Girl Life can be played this way, especially if you go down the succubus route.
So, after running thru it, some thoughts:
As others mentioned, yep, there's issues with an incorrectly named selfie image file, and, yes, there's a bit of incorrect variable usage [lisa's] instead of [lisa]'s, and yes there's a few (as expected) grammar issues here-and-there.
The way this initial version ends caught me by surprise. Really thought I'd accidentally hit cancel or something. Hopefully the dev will do better in future releases at actually bringing a story point to a close (think chapters in a book, they don't end mid-sentence or mid-paragraph, and that's really what happened here).
Some of the poses (for example, Denis at dinner) seem unnatural or out of proportion. But it's a helluva lot better 'n I could do.
The flow of the SMS messages seemed "off" at times. As if the message was styled incorrectly for how it's sounding. Oh, and that missing selfie image, it really seemed from the text that she was asking him for a selfie, and that image file is of her.
There really needs to be a few additional images added to almost every conversation. An example: dinner is still untouched on the plates when the text is indicating that they've finished eating. The images not reflecting the progression of the text made the story harder to follow.
And, the jealous bf punching a guy who then throws a temper tantrum like a 12-year old before running out... um... really?!? That whole scene needs to be thrown out and completely rewritten.
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All that said, there's still quite a bit I liked, and it'll be interesting to see if the dev continues and how they're going to make the story progress. Personally, I'd rather see Archie written out completely.
And I was kinda disappointed that there wasn't any (would fit best day 2) going over (or calling) "Denis" (nit-pick: should be Dennis, at least from my part of the world) to see what other job he might have, especially given how much Kate seemed to loathe the job.
As others mentioned, yep, there's issues with an incorrectly named selfie image file, and, yes, there's a bit of incorrect variable usage [lisa's] instead of [lisa]'s, and yes there's a few (as expected) grammar issues here-and-there.
The way this initial version ends caught me by surprise. Really thought I'd accidentally hit cancel or something. Hopefully the dev will do better in future releases at actually bringing a story point to a close (think chapters in a book, they don't end mid-sentence or mid-paragraph, and that's really what happened here).
Some of the poses (for example, Denis at dinner) seem unnatural or out of proportion. But it's a helluva lot better 'n I could do.
The flow of the SMS messages seemed "off" at times. As if the message was styled incorrectly for how it's sounding. Oh, and that missing selfie image, it really seemed from the text that she was asking him for a selfie, and that image file is of her.
There really needs to be a few additional images added to almost every conversation. An example: dinner is still untouched on the plates when the text is indicating that they've finished eating. The images not reflecting the progression of the text made the story harder to follow.
And, the jealous bf punching a guy who then throws a temper tantrum like a 12-year old before running out... um... really?!? That whole scene needs to be thrown out and completely rewritten.
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All that said, there's still quite a bit I liked, and it'll be interesting to see if the dev continues and how they're going to make the story progress. Personally, I'd rather see Archie written out completely.
And I was kinda disappointed that there wasn't any (would fit best day 2) going over (or calling) "Denis" (nit-pick: should be Dennis, at least from my part of the world) to see what other job he might have, especially given how much Kate seemed to loathe the job.
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Hi all. I got a taste for it and made more renders than I planned. Actively working on the version now.
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It has the links for Mac, PC and android.
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It has the links for Mac, PC and android.
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id be happy to help with translations, is the creator on F95 or Patreon only? x
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