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Hold on! If Gabriella is a millennial, and she's soon off to college - That would mean the story is in the late 90's early 2000's?! 
I got the impression its this day an age
I got the impression its this day an age
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Shiiiiit. You're right.Hold on! If Gabriella is a millennial, and she's soon off to college - That would mean the story is in the late 90's early 2000's?!
I got the impression its this day an age
In my old man brain it's still the 2000s. I've corrected that in the script to 'zoomer' for future releases.
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I was starting a new game and skimming through the narratives xD Looking for clues and whatnot, hehe.
Im an '85'er myself so i remember those days (_and_ attitude) well
Glad i got that sorted out! And thanks for such a fast reply, man
Im an '85'er myself so i remember those days (_and_ attitude) well
Glad i got that sorted out! And thanks for such a fast reply, man
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If you're playing any route other than being a nice guy to Nikki especially if you did the bathroom scene, I'm not really sure she upgraded her situation from what the other rich guy was offering.
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In fairness to her, she lost everything she owned while fleeing a gang-bang, including the phone she used to contact Vaughn. But, that’s not to say he may not come looking for her at some point.
This is working up to be a pretty great game. I really like the characterizations of the characters a lot - the vulnerability of all the characters really works for both approaches. Not all of the characters really do much for me (Viola bounces off me, personally), but even then I have to praise the design and how you are making it easy to skip (some) parts of the game without feeling like you are missing anything. I really can't praise the design and writing enough.
The pacing is also great --- I'm enjoying the evolving story and looking forward to the next introductions as well as whatever mysteries are being worked up in the background (aka the bathroom clues). I'm also really impressed with how different the various routes feel even though they share a lot of dialog.
Also, while some of the facial expressions of the MC are a little exaggerated, I think it's mostly okay-- there is value in making the MC's affect extra legible. I wouldn't mind a little more subtlety in the eyes, but I also understand that's really tricky to get just right.
The pacing is also great --- I'm enjoying the evolving story and looking forward to the next introductions as well as whatever mysteries are being worked up in the background (aka the bathroom clues). I'm also really impressed with how different the various routes feel even though they share a lot of dialog.
Also, while some of the facial expressions of the MC are a little exaggerated, I think it's mostly okay-- there is value in making the MC's affect extra legible. I wouldn't mind a little more subtlety in the eyes, but I also understand that's really tricky to get just right.
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True enough. Checked the evil route and that version of Guy deserves a bad ending, like getting beaten and raped in a prison shower for the rest of his life...
Damn to be worse than the evil version of Guy this Vaughn must be also a killer who in his spare time kicks children and dogs in the street.
Really like the game and the different approaches/ways you can play it.
Waiting for the next update
Waiting for the next update
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Last version i've played before was 0.22, i've expected something bad happen to Nicki but i've expected something worse. She end up like most onlyfans "models" who have not any skills to promote their account and ends up as slimy bastards personal toys Still it could end up worse...
Things like this one happens and it shows how Developer wants to keep this game close to reality.
I've enjoyed time spended with Nicki, mc can repay what he done to Nicki or corrupt her even more
Gabby was so sweet like candy and hot.
I've not expected scene with Viola could lead straight to rape, rape is like normal thing to mc - it's social experiment, how many players let Viola go?(i know i'm reapeating myself).
I was not able to finish update cause game is crashing on Joiplay.
Thanks for sharing!
Still it could end up worse...Things like this one happens and it shows how Developer wants to keep this game close to reality.
I've enjoyed time spended with Nicki, mc can repay what he done to Nicki or corrupt her even more
Gabby was so sweet like candy and hot.
I've not expected scene with Viola could lead straight to rape, rape is like normal thing to mc - it's social experiment, how many players let Viola go?(i know i'm reapeating myself).
I was not able to finish update cause game is crashing on Joiplay.
Thanks for sharing!
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Personally, I think A & B fit her most regarding both 'texture' and colors. If we ignore colors, I think D and F are great as well (G is a big maybe), in that order, but I have to admit: I'm really not a fan at all of crazy rainbow colors or anything too outlandish like her current ingame hair and the D here, even though it may fit her personality I guess. In fact, if it weren't for the coloring, I think I'd probably prefer D over everything else; I bet D with A's colors would look extremely good. I guess I'm a sucker for natural kinky/coily hair
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Good, good, the game needs more Ashe
Have you made any pols about characters popularity?I pick the modeling part (no nude) and later gave her the FiN card for future updates. The nude scene makes sense if you are playing a lust driven MC but the Rape one is rushed imo. The MC can rape other girls if you go full Patrick Bateman, but this time is like "hello there, I was looking for some clothe-Surprise bitch! No brakes on the rape train!
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I've replayed chapter 3 to see the changes in version 3.2, and I realized something I missed. What are the antihistamines you take in the bathroom for? As far as I've seen, you can't use them on anything. I thought you would use them to put Gabby's mom to sleep, but I haven't seen a way to use it.
Another thing, I have seen that at the end of the chapter you have added what some of the girls feel for you. I think that would look better if it were a GUI screen. And also, I think you should add fear and dependency (or something similar). That is to say, that girls can love you, not like you very much, or hate you; but they could also be afraid of you or dependent on you.
Another thing, I have seen that at the end of the chapter you have added what some of the girls feel for you. I think that would look better if it were a GUI screen. And also, I think you should add fear and dependency (or something similar). That is to say, that girls can love you, not like you very much, or hate you; but they could also be afraid of you or dependent on you.
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Hey! Originally, that was the plan for the allergy pills. You were going to be able to slip them into Madison's drink, to help her get some sleep. But, the chapter was already getting kind of huge, and it would've advanced her plotline just a little too quickly.. So now you'll just have them for a future event I have planned.
I actually mentioned on my Patreon that the text at the end was just a placeholder.
I coded it in really quickly at the end of the chapter, after I'd finished plugging in the phone event. Someone had requested it, and it only took me a few minutes to do the text version, so I figured - why not?My plan is to take this next dev cycle and work on a lot of back-end stuff, like cleaning up code, adding much-requested features (character profile images, more attractive name text, outlined text..), and music/animations. That'll include an end-of-chapter update for each character, telling you which path you're on with them.
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Gotta say once again, I am really enjoying this. I am especially enjoying Nicki's route (the "romantic" one) seen people saying they don't like her but I personally love the complexity of her character and her dynamic with the MC. Love how with this MC you can be a total piece of shit sleaze or a real romantic, the decisions actually matter. Keep up the great work Neon You got a real winner going on here. Can't wait for more.
You got a real winner going on here. Can't wait for more.
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No, but I keep thinking about it. I’m worried it might prejudice me towards creating content geared more towards one character or another, rather than follow my plot outline. But, I keep joking that with the number of queries I get about Brittani, she could probably support her own spin-off game.Good, good, the game needs more Ashe
Thank you! Glad you’re enjoying it.Gotta say once again, I am really enjoying this. I am especially enjoying Nicki's route (the "romantic" one) seen people saying they don't like her but I personally love the complexity of her character and her dynamic with the MC. Love how with this MC you can be a total piece of shit sleaze or a real romantic, the decisions actually matter. Keep up the great work Neon
I always suspected that Nicki’s story would be a little challenging for some players (though I’ll admit to being surprised at the intensity of the push-back..) but I’m glad she’s connecting with others. I think her story will only continue to get more interesting, moving forward.
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I think their initial night together will always come across as exploitative, no matter which path you choose. She's using the MC to stave off her debt and (in some cases) then using that as an excuse to cheat on her boyfriend, while the MC is obviously exploiting her desperate situation for sex (to a lesser or much greater extent, depending on the path). The way she turns up at his place, dressed up from how he usually sees her, and spends the whole evening letting him ogle her before getting to the point makes her come across (to me anyway) as at least trying to be manipulative.
Salvaging an equal, romantic relationship from that starting point would always be tricky (but to be fair, I'm not even trying).
(On a side note, glancing at the script for 3.2, I thought it interesting that as far as I can tell, the three possible paths for her initial event don't map entirely on to her paths going forward, but the 'humiliation' and 'rape' paths from the first event are largely treated as identical, both possibly leading to either her 'friendship' or 'submission' paths.)
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That makes perfect sense. Her second appearence after also a long dissapearence
is almost identical: she needs help and she asks MC for forgiveness. She either gets it or not. She is still tied to her BF, she has gone and done a lot worse than
whatever she had done with MC, but now she brings the added: SHE IS A HUMAN MEAT SLEEVE WHO HAS RUN AWAY FROM HER HUMAN TRAFFICKERS. SHE OWES THEM.
So MC is now in a hell of a dangerous position as Brent COULD ALWAYS TELL HIS LAWN
SHARKS WHERE MC LIVES SO THEY COULD COME IN AND TAKE EVRYTHING/KILL EVERYONE.
is almost identical: she needs help and she asks MC for forgiveness. She either gets it or not. She is still tied to her BF, she has gone and done a lot worse than
whatever she had done with MC, but now she brings the added: SHE IS A HUMAN MEAT SLEEVE WHO HAS RUN AWAY FROM HER HUMAN TRAFFICKERS. SHE OWES THEM.
So MC is now in a hell of a dangerous position as Brent COULD ALWAYS TELL HIS LAWN
SHARKS WHERE MC LIVES SO THEY COULD COME IN AND TAKE EVRYTHING/KILL EVERYONE.
MC is in a pickle so he is already living dangerously just by being near her.
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Orrrrrrrr..... Brent is just a loser that works at a convenience store, never lost any money, and almost everything that Nikki has told as a sob story is bullshit. That in reality she just spent the last three months blowing through 20 grand's worth of spray tans and tattoos while hitting the dance club every night. That too is a possibility.