Dessolos

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I didn't even look at the tags for this game, I just downloaded it because it had a lot of reviews and it looked interesting... I was shocked by the rape scenes, I think this is the darkest VN I've ever played on this site.
I didnt even know those scenes were in the game my first time I played which was a week or so ago. Since I didnt download the patch.
 

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it has a nice guy path too. sounds like you played dark cause that is what you would do yourself..bad boy.
i always played the nice guy myself, since that's me.
i tried the evil path and gave up after mc started treating my Nicki badly.
evil path=bad
Same tho I did play the evil path after I discovered it was in the game after my fist playthrough as I didn't have the patch at the time but after watching / reading the assault option for Niki I kinda skipped past any others that were similar I just wanted to see the content or if there was any consequences for the mc.
 

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Those are the main choices/scenes I can think of off the top of my head, but there may be others that could be shored up a little. For example, perhaps combine the OnlyFans & orc tv choices into one, since I fail to see the point in the orc choice remaining by itself, especially from a player's perspective; why skip opportunities with the girls for some monster girl scenes on TV? I'm of course completely open to the idea that the payoff of all these splits will more than make up for it, so maybe you can ignore this criticism. But from a player's perspective, it was honestly quite overwhelming.

Other than that, I think you forgot to branch the pill scene properly; if you give her pills, you have to calm her down in order for her to conk out and begin that scene. If you're instead mean to her, she acts as if you never gave the pills and it's impossible to start that sequence. And there's a few scenes here and there that are missing images, but I'm sure others have already bug reported them.

Anyways, thanks again for all your incredible hard work! I can't put into words how appreciative these milked gonads are, homie. I think I'm going to continue my good playthrough today; I look forward to reflecting on my thoughts about it here at a later time :)
To your points about the wild branching in this one: totally agreed, I just went a little nuts with it. Part of the problem is that I didn't have all the content written or roadmapped before I began rendering it, so I was kind of driving the train while I was laying the tracks. Not the best way to do it, and for the next chapter I've written a pretty thorough roadmap for the update, with clearly defined possibilities.

As far as the choices for stuff like tv show vs the cam show, I actually floated an idea on Discord that people seemed kind of interested in. That being that each activity that the player does that night (sleeping with Ashe, watching TV, watching the cam show, playing with Risa..) would add an exhaustion point, and once an arbitrary number was reached, MC would basically fall asleep wherever he was.

So, he might have sex with Ashe (+1), watch TV (+1), watch the cam show (+1), and play with Risa (+1) -- then there'd be a check at the end of each scene, like "if exhaustion >= 4: MC automatically falls asleep," whether it's with Risa, Ashe, or on the couch. That way the player could get a few scenes, but not necessarily all of them. I dunno, I'd like to return to that, while also streamlining some things. For instance, I wanted to make it so that going to visit Nicki automatically triggered the Risa scene, too. Since you have to pass through the lobby and all. And the scene where Ashe is drugged should really have extra options to leave and see Risa, or watch TV. Etc.

The pill scene is actually intended to function that way, since Ashe doesn't get a chance to finish her wine if you berate her and force her to eat off the floor. And let me know which scenes are missing images actually, because I don't know if anyone else has reported them. :'D The other problem with having so many paths is that it's really easy to miss things like that, even with a legion of kind folks playtesting the builds.

As always, thanks for your thoughts, Phil! Glad you enjoyed the update, warts and all. :D
 

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For instance, I wanted to make it so that going to visit Nicki automatically triggered the Risa scene, too. Since you have to pass through the lobby and all.
Speaking of which, how polyamorous can we be still getting a good ending in the end? Since it's not, at least judging by the tags, an harem game, will we be able to fuck ourselves dickles untill committing near the end or will there be conseguences if we don't go pretty much monogamous?
I ask because like Gaby and Ashe, and i think Nicki too speaks about being MC's GF, which presume it's not compatible to sleep with them all.
What are your plans?
 

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Just guessing. Considering Nikki's reaction when that woman (forgot her name) was installing Guy's open bath i would say she won't accept any poly route. Same for Gabby. :p
Meanwhike i get the feeling Viola, Mason and Britanny could be convinced to accept something like that. :unsure:
 

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Just guessing. Considering Nikki's reaction when that woman (forgot her name) was installing Guy's open bath i would say she won't accept any poly route. Same for Gabby. :p
Meanwhike i get the feeling Viola, Mason and Britanny could be convinced to accept something like that. :unsure:
I can see Pepper maybe accepting it as well hard to say till we get to know her better but why I think she might accept it is because
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Speaking of which, how polyamorous can we be still getting a good ending in the end? Since it's not, at least judging by the tags, an harem game, will we be able to fuck ourselves dickles untill committing near the end or will there be conseguences if we don't go pretty much monogamous?
I ask because like Gaby and Ashe, and i think Nicki too speaks about being MC's GF, which presume it's not compatible to sleep with them all.
What are your plans?
I do wish we could find this out sooner rather than later, so I can just pick my LIs for my one canon play through and just be friendly to the rest. Best option of course would be a loving harem, *wink* *wink* *nudge* *nudge*, but I understand that may not be in NeonGhosts plans.

In the meantime I'm just lurking the forums until we get to the point that we start knowing some of the lock outs.
 
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I didn't even look at the tags for this game, I just downloaded it because it had a lot of reviews and it looked interesting... I was shocked by the rape scenes, I think this is the darkest VN I've ever played on this site.
1 - it was your choice to pick those rape options, no need for surprised pikachu face after you intentionally go down that path
2 - on dark scale it's like 6/10 at best, there are way way darker games here
 

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To your points about the wild branching in this one: totally agreed, I just went a little nuts with it. Part of the problem is that I didn't have all the content written or roadmapped before I began rendering it, so I was kind of driving the train while I was laying the tracks. Not the best way to do it, and for the next chapter I've written a pretty thorough roadmap for the update, with clearly defined possibilities.
Glad to hear :D Well, may not be the best method, but it still worked you madman! :cool:

As far as the choices for stuff like tv show vs the cam show, I actually floated an idea on Discord that people seemed kind of interested in. That being that each activity that the player does that night (sleeping with Ashe, watching TV, watching the cam show, playing with Risa..) would add an exhaustion point, and once an arbitrary number was reached, MC would basically fall asleep wherever he was.

So, he might have sex with Ashe (+1), watch TV (+1), watch the cam show (+1), and play with Risa (+1) -- then there'd be a check at the end of each scene, like "if exhaustion >= 4: MC automatically falls asleep," whether it's with Risa, Ashe, or on the couch. That way the player could get a few scenes, but not necessarily all of them. I dunno, I'd like to return to that, while also streamlining some things. For instance, I wanted to make it so that going to visit Nicki automatically triggered the Risa scene, too. Since you have to pass through the lobby and all. And the scene where Ashe is drugged should really have extra options to leave and see Risa, or watch TV. Etc.
You know, that actually might be kinda brilliant. It sounds like a really interesting way of giving choice and variety to players without necessarily locking players out of too many things or giving them frustration from missing out on said things. On top of that, it gives lots more mileage to your efforts in executing each option since, normally, if you give players, say, 4 options but they can only choose 1, they will never encounter those other 3 scenes/sequences and may never experience them ever if they don't start other games; but, if you instead give them 4 options and they can choose 3, any given player will only miss 1 scene/sequence. That's a much better tradeoff imo, from both of our perspectives. If my vote matters at all, I think you should pursue that :)

The pill scene is actually intended to function that way, since Ashe doesn't get a chance to finish her wine if you berate her and force her to eat off the floor.
Oh, shit... did I miss that? How'd I miss that lmfao. Hm, ok, that does make perfect sense. Makes for an interesting 'cause -> effect' + 'action -> consequence' dynamic of course, as always. Just something to think about, then: I think it can be a little confusing and frustrating for a player who chooses 'give her pills', maybe gets that tinge of dark excitement (I'm not a horrible psychopath in rl, I swear) or at least dark expectation only to then be denied the expected payoff because of something they couldn't reasonably predict (she doesn't finish her wine if you're mean to her). It makes perfect sense from the outside, but from the inside while playing, I'm not sure it's good 'gameplay', so to speak. Think could've found a way through character interaction or narrative or etc. to get her to down the wine on the 'mean' branch, especially since you got her to eat off the floor (oh, Ashe.. I can't wait until I treat you right on my good playthrough :cry:). But, I may just have a different 'philosophy' preference or w/e on how my games go, though. Not trying to discourage your artistic vision or anything :D

And let me know which scenes are missing images actually, because I don't know if anyone else has reported them. :'D The other problem with having so many paths is that it's really easy to miss things like that, even with a legion of kind folks playtesting the builds.
I think it's just one, for me at least: it's the 'sleep sex' route; dialogue slide that says 'And put all this shit away' right after 'Guess I should clean you up..'. Says 'image 4o362a' not found.' Guess you tapped 'o' instead of '0' while typing that out? :p

Cheers buddy :giggle:(y)
 

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I can see Pepper maybe accepting it as well hard to say till we get to know her better but why I think she might accept it is because
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Well, that's assuming her camming represents her true desires. If she feels desperate, which shouldn't be surprising in a game like this :p, or is in any way being 'pushed' in that direction, say by a certain father that may or may not be abusing her... then, completely changes that dynamic. :(
 

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1 - it was your choice to pick those rape options, no need for surprised pikachu face after you intentionally go down that path
2 - on dark scale it's like 6/10 at best, there are way way darker games here
I didn't even look at the tags for this game, I just downloaded it because it had a lot of reviews and it looked interesting... I was shocked by the rape scenes, I think this is the darkest VN I've ever played on this site.
plus you have to download the patch for them to even show up. My first time I played I didnt know those were in the game since I didnt download said patch
 

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plus you have to download the patch for them to even show up. My first time I played I didnt know those were in the game since I didnt download said patch
Almost all games are censored because of Patreon, downloading a patch is 'automatic' and it's the first thing I look at in any game.

1 - it was your choice to pick those rape options, no need for surprised pikachu face after you intentionally go down that path
It's the first time I've seen a game have options like "assault her" etc, it's obvious that I'm going to choose the worst possible choices just to see what happens and be shocked.
Your logic is very flawed, if I click for example on a gore video then I can't be surprised because I made the choice to watch the video? LOL
 

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It's the first time I've seen a game have options like "assault her" etc, it's obvious that I'm going to choose the worst possible choices just to see what happens and be shocked.
Your logic is very flawed, if I click for example on a gore video then I can't be surprised because I made the choice to watch the video? LOL
em, yes? and what do you expect to see when you pick "assault her"? assault her with hugs and kisses? puppies instead of gore in gore video?
yeah, it's my logic is flawed...
 

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2 - on dark scale it's like 6/10 at best, there are way way darker games here
So as not to go OT, would you mind popping me a message with said games in case I've missed/overlooked some?
 

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em, yes? and what do you expect to see when you pick "assault her"? assault her with hugs and kisses? puppies instead of gore in gore video?
yeah, it's my logic is flawed...
It seems that for you there is no such thing as "human curiosity", but don't worry, someday you will leave your room and see how people behave.

"Famous person died", but according to "Danv" you can't be shocked if you're curious to see the body on some gore site lol
 

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The pill scene is actually intended to function that way, since Ashe doesn't get a chance to finish her wine if you berate her and force her to eat off the floor.
If that's the logic behind it, it needs some work; we can see that her glass is already empty when he dumps her food on the floor. Would probably be a good idea to warn the player too, that picking that choice will stop her from finishing it.


Just guessing. Considering Nikki's reaction when that woman (forgot her name) was installing Guy's open bath i would say she won't accept any poly route. Same for Gabby. :p
Meanwhike i get the feeling Viola, Mason and Britanny could be convinced to accept something like that. :unsure:
That's rather jumping to conclusions. Nicki doesn't like one girl. She also actively encourages him to ask Carolina out, teases him about Pepper, etc... It seems like it's just Alex that she doesn't like, not other girls in general. I see no reason she wouldn't get along with the rest of the girls, and even with Alex, first impressions are a poor way to judge how they'd get on in the long term.
Same with Gabby and Brittani; it's clear that it's Jamie that Gabby is actually angry with, she's just taking it out on Brittani when we first meet her. There's no reason that they won't get along later on.
 
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