Pros
Writing:
This games writing is excellent.
Every character has unique personalities, with unique quirks and their own way of speaking. How one writer can write so many distinct personalities is beyond me.
This game has managed to make me care for every single character regardless of whether I find them attractive. The writing is simply equal to any other great and greater than almost all of it's peers.
Writing part 2, the MC:
Even the MC has great writing. He gets upset with LI's when it's natural to do so. How to react further is up to the player, but he reacts in a normal way. He doesn't suck up at all times afraid to lose goodie points. He's charming, nerdy, dorky. His dialogue tells you so, not someone calling him those things.
Choices:
The choices are really well implemented, the fact you can treat one character one way, and another character a different way without being railroaded into your character acting the same way in every situation is a breath of fresh air.
Cons
The writing being so good kind of carries the game though. That's good as being an excellent writer is a great starting point. However, there are some elements that definetly could be improved.
Lack of audio:
For one the game has absolutely no music or sfx.
Good music and sfx usage in games are very underrated. It can not be understated how big of a difference it can make for a game. It doesn't have to be a big chunk of the development time, but decent sfx and music can elevate a good game to a great game. Some well chosen music could elevate some of these moments to new heights.
Also moaning sfx during sex-scenes to me elevates them a million times over. But that's subjective I guess.
Naming savefiles:
Another small fix that would be incredibly helpful is the ability to name the save files. This game branches a lot, which is amazing. But that makes me desire this feature.
Visuals/Graphics:
Finally, the last con is as mentioned by a few the visual quality. This to me is less of a con than audio, as it takes longer to master great renders and animations. Which means I feel more inclined to lower my expectations.
The graphics are serviceable. Thanks to the great writing they can be both spicy and appealing. However, it's still a decent step away from the best out there. The animations are very short, and there aren't that many of them. However, the visuals seem to be getting better with time. I root for the developer to improve.
Other positives on the visuals, I really like a lot of the character designs, the variety and some renders are worth admiring.
Final Thoughts
Best wishes for the game:
My hope for the game is that audio gets implemented and save file naming and animations and renders keep improving over time. And of course that the game gets finished. With audio in a future update I will bump rating to 5 stars.
Best wishes for the developer:
My hope for the developer is that their next game uses the skills they have aquired, making this one to make an even better game than this one. They have the potential to be one of the best devs out there.
TLDR
Amazing character writing, with improving graphics weighs up for lack of audio and makes the game a reading experience (with plenty of meaningful choices) truly worth experiencing.