Elduriel

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I really hope that at least one girl will help Bad Guy. That rather than them all being good and noble, that at least one will be either twisted or just willing to throw other girls under the bus to gain advantage. Every Epstein needs a Maxwell, girls are far more likely to trust another woman than a man.
Raptus has your sister do things like that, but I don't like that game much
 

soprano31

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blackheart games (wich is banned here sadly) does it better
The most beautiful devilish brother and sister bond you can have,
If only Cassie and Guy would become the lighter version of them,
but with all the dark elements,
a perfect unbreakable devilish criminal combination !!
 
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I'm not that crazy about Nikki. Main reason is IMO she's the least attractive one of them all. The other reasons is MC keeps calling her "Dude" or "Man" I get she's a tomboy and all but she's still a female. It just throws me off every time he refers to her as Dude or Man.
 

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I'm not that crazy about Nikki. Main reason is IMO she's the least attractive one of them all. The other reasons is MC keeps calling her "Dude" or "Man" I get she's a tomboy and all but she's still a female. It just throws me off every time he refers to her as Dude or Man.
I like her, but I have to agree on your other point, not a big fan of all that "Dude" and "Man" talk, but I got over it somewhat, and it doesn't bother me too much.
 
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I like her but the -dude- -man- don't sound right to me either. I meant it can make sense when dealing with Mason and her special circumstances but not with Nikki.
 
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I'm not that crazy about Nikki. Main reason is IMO she's the least attractive one of them all. The other reasons is MC keeps calling her "Dude" or "Man" I get she's a tomboy and all but she's still a female. It just throws me off every time he refers to her as Dude or Man.
Dude has been gender neutral for 40 years, my dude.
 
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Dessolos

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I like her but the -dude- -man- don't sound right to me either. I meant it can make sense when dealing with Mason and her special circumstances but not with Nikki.
I disagree I think that is part of her personality / quirk. I think any well written character should have something that is unique to them and that is what is unique to her. I frankly like I think it's part of the charm of her character as her talking that way makes her feel more like a friend first then lover which is something I like to see.
 
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Dessolos

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Well, mostly. Not all women are dude - has to be the right kind of woman. Dude is fine for Nicki and Pepper- don’t think it works for Brittani or Ashe.
Honestly I think it really comes down to the character and how they feel about it not just if it matches their character.

For example I think it can be fine for Ashe and Brittani as well just not as good as a fit as it is for Pepper and Nicki. I think Ashe and Brittani may not prefer it I don't see them having a problem with it either. They both comes across as someone that can act like one of the boys and be fun and be girly at times like they can switch between Both.

Another I think it would be fitting for is Viola as well especially after seeing her gamer side I think she might be another that can switch between girly to one of the bros depending on the context and what she is doign.
 

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Honestly I think it really comes down to the character and how they feel about it not just if it matches their character.

For example I think it can be fine for Ashe and Brittani as well just not as good as a fit as it is for Pepper and Nicki. I think Ashe and Brittani may not prefer it I don't see them having a problem with it either. They both comes across as someone that can act like one of the boys and be fun and be girly at times like they can switch between Both.

Another I think it would be fitting for is Viola as well especially after seeing her gamer side I think she might be another that can switch between girly to one of the bros depending on the context and what she is doign.
I wouldn't try it on Viola until I knew her better, because English isn't her first language.
 

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Kewl. We finally found out how Nikki got past the concierge in her schoolgirl outfit (you know, assuming that it wasn't just that Risa took a smoke break).

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Great reimagining of the initial chapter, even though I only got the Patreon version.
 
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I really hope that at least one girl will help Bad Guy. That rather than them all being good and noble, that at least one will be either twisted or just willing to throw other girls under the bus to gain advantage. Every Epstein needs a Maxwell, girls are far more likely to trust another woman than a man.
Me too... sadly, I don't think that will be much of a focus here. Isabella (Brit's mom) or Tessa (bitch that works with Viola), moreso the former, would make the most sense so far in the story, but I think even they, especially Tessa, would have problems with just how far dark Guy can go... plus, they're not LIs, so.. unless we find something out about Cassie's personality or we really push Nicki into being a (reluctant) accomplice, I don't think it's gonna happen. :( Not even sure Neon wants to go in that direction, anyways.
 
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