Eh, fair enough. I don't think I agree with the analogy but I get your point. I'm not sure you can compare things that exist in such different worlds/societies, but I get your point, really.
I think the main problem is more about the fact that yeah, before, it was done like that (in the world of litterature) and then it changed; now books are published as is which is arguably better for everyone. It should be the same with games (wether it's here or on Steam or wherever, adult-games or not) but the business model is still at the age of crowdfunding which is essentialy a modern version of serialization (although when it was done in newspapers and magazines, people bought them not ONLY for that story). So if Dickens (my example would have been Philip K. Dick but to each his own) did do that, people that were only interested in his stories would have stopped buying the magazine and the others would just have shrugged and either not care or just wait because it would be no big deal to them.
I think I'm getting side-tracked but... Yeah, well, fair enough. I still think the ultimate judge of what the story should tell is the author, although of course each person then sees what they want in any art piece.
Nowadays, at least where I'm from, authors (of books, I don't know for other artists) get an advance payment, so yeah they can write something, get back to it, tweak it, then release it. If that were the case for modern games (again, adult or not; how many non-adult games are early access nowadays? Which is a new-ish thing), we wouldn't have noticed the remake. But as this is the current business model, we have to "suffer" these kinds of things.
Honestly, even if I was paying NG on Patreon, I wouldn't mind because I just enjoy his process, writing etc. but that's obviously personnal taste.
ps : I feel like the comparison with Dickens saying "next week, Chapter 11" and then not delivering is not honest in this analogy because if I'm not mistaken, NG has been quite open about the process of the remake. He was late here and there but never said (I think) that it would just be "I'll do this and next update we're back on track". From what I've read and remember it was more like "The remake will take that long and I'll be doing this and that and then going back to Season 2" which, by the way, he has been working on WHILE doing the remake.
Anyway. Good talk!