Samsul Hidayat
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- May 16, 2019
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I honestly don't see how MC giving her money without demands would somehow change her "career" path from MC straight up abusing her.What I might change is the option to give Nicki money, and how that affects her life over that three-month gap. It'll likely be something like: MC gives Nicki the money, and she still winds up in a financial hole due to Brent, but she never gets involved with the local photographer, never ends up at the surprise porn shoot, and never arrives at MC's place tear-streaked and wearing a schoolgirl costume. Instead she just shows up having completed her 'work' in Florida, wanting to reconnect with MC and repay him the money he loaned her. I think it'd give some extra weight to the first big choice of the game, and it wouldn't require a ton of writing around it.
But hey, you're the dev, so you definitely have planned this out. Wish you all the best, man.