Erochaser
I liked the game, but there's a few points you should probably work on.
First, you really should rephrase the overview to emphasize the fact that the antagonist
tries to enslave the bride-to-be, to alleviate possible concern about NTR. Some people won't even give this game a chance if you leave it as it is.
Another easy-to-fix problem, there are several occurrence of the use of "could care less" (which implies the character
do care somewhat) where it should have been "couldn't care less" (which mean doesn't care at all). It's a small thing but it can bug some people a tad (yes that includes me xD).
Concerning the game in itself, there's a real issue at the moment when you get to the sandbox part. You have literally nothing to do but sleep/rest for several days, until an event occurs. That's bad design. Honestly when I got to that part, I thought there wasn't anymore more content in the release, until I got back to this thread.
A hint system would be really welcome, but you need to add something to do to pass the time in the first few days other than sitting with a thumb up your butt in your bedroom xD.
Lastly, the lewd scene could use some polish. It should be the reward the player get, proportionate to the task he had to do to get to the point.
It's not easy to make good sex scene, and with a harem game such as this, it's easy to prioritise quantity over quality, and it's ok for some situations, but don't overlook the impact of a few well developed meaningful scenes.
Hope it will help you and best of luck with your game!
