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Yeah true, been trying to figure out what my style is forever. Trying to get that sexy slim with a bit of muscle definition for the futa. For the femboi trying also for slim with bubble but. Still working on my style but I admit that it is a bit rough, been working on this for 2-4 years to some degree or another.
Have you played Wayfared? I think that game has a similar look to what you're going for.
 

Footanari

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A very underused and uncommon theme somewhat let down by the brevity and awkward writing. The art, well, it takes all sorts to make a world I suppose.
I don't know why the description talks about "slowly corrupting" when it literally leaps directly into the action, but at least it's a game where you're sissifying someone else, so it gets a plus in my book.

Hope you continue working and improving, as this is quite promising.
Thanks for the solid critique!

Yeah this was about 2-4 years ago when I started this project. I know that this is a bit early in my drawing journey but I love VN and I want to make something that I love. One thing I wanted to do was have all the images made at the same time so at least they are consistent.

The speed that I also go at is a bit intentional since I feel that alot of VN beat around the bush and don't get to the meat of the matter. This is also a bit of a self project to see if I can even do something like this.

Again thank you for the critique.
 
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Footanari

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..I like futa.
I like feet.
Having them together seems like a dream.
But I don't think this is it.
Maybe one of your future projects.
Yeah that is fair lol. Thank for trying it out. Actual question was it just the style or was it that it was on the extreme side?
 

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Have you played Wayfared? I think that game has a similar look to what you're going for.
Hmmm, going have to check that out. Yeah a big thing that I really like and influence me is stuff like TiTs and most content from Blue Axolotl.
 

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I think this is the best thing on earth when a futa dominating you with her feet.. thanks for game my friend, i'm watching thread.
 
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Yeah that is fair lol. Thank for trying it out. Actual question was it just the style or was it that it was on the extreme side?
I'd say the artstyle is probably the biggest part of it. That and I dont really like sissification. Not that I have a problem with femboys or traps or w/e but being the initial instigator of process...not a fan. That shouldn't be forced. Same reason I don't like forced gender bending. But that's just me, I know some people get a kick out of that and I know the theme is corruption. Teasing at a previously existing desire is a bit different though. Like if the character was trying to hide it or something.
Also futa on male is a very specific gripe for me. some things are ok but not others. The other way around is fine though and traps get a pass too(futa on trap or futa too that is).. Anyway a lot of this is subjective and just my view so remember to create what you like. That will give you the best outcome.

Otherwise I really liked the content in the sense of what was happening, but not so much how it was happening. If that makes sense. Some of the dialog was hot. Like the solo scene and parts of the foot massage scene but its definitely still rough. At least IMO.
 
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Thanks for the solid critique!

Yeah this was about 2-4 years ago when I started this project. I know that this is a bit early in my drawing journey but I love VN and I want to make something that I love. One thing I wanted to do was have all the images made at the same time so at least they are consistent.

The speed that I also go at is a bit inten tional since I feel that alot of VN beat around the bush and don't get to the meat of the matter. This is also a bit of a self project to see if I can even do something like this.

Again thank you for the critique.
I just Saw this Game , and I am looking forward to playing it. I LOVE the Concept!! :love:

"A brother and sister are forced to spend the weekend together while mom and dad go on a cruise."
- where there IS such a thing as a 'weekend (2 day) cruise'; it would have been Better for a 2 week or longer cruise.

Then, Sis would not have to "limit" her scope to her 'mean, asshole brother'.
- Maybe add a school bully(male/female); your best friend (female); a cheating ex-boyfriend; a mean teacher;
or any boy/girl in school; that might have thought 'you were not "worthy" enough' to be their friends.
- The applications are endless to what you Could do.
You Have a New power, new sexy body; Have Fun with it!

Just curious, Now that You have 'some experience' have you considered doing a "Remastered" Game? or a Part 2?
where you Might make improvements to the story ("this would be better if I did ");
improve the "Art"/rendering; maybe add some animation in places. just asking.

Once I have played game, I will post my thoughts/critique here, or new a thread.
 
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Footanari

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is if the game is only a demo is dere a link to the full game?
Well it is a "prequel" To a bigger project that I will eventually work on, sooner if I become rich and famous lol. In the sequel it will evolve to her corrupting the rest of the family. Also mainly to demo what my skill level was and to see if I can even make the game.
 
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I just Saw this Game , and I am looking forward to playing it. I LOVE the Concept!! :love:

"A brother and sister are forced to spend the weekend together while mom and dad go on a cruise."
- where there IS such a thing as a 'weekend (2 day) cruise'; it would have been Better for a 2 week or longer cruise.

Then, Sis would not have to "limit" her scope to her 'mean, asshole brother'.
- Maybe add a school bully(male/female); your best friend (female); a cheating ex-boyfriend; a mean teacher;
or any boy/girl in school; that might have thought 'you were not "worthy" enough' to be their friends.
- The applications are endless to what you Could do.
You Have a New power, new sexy body; Have Fun with it!

Just curious, Now that You have 'some experience' have you considered doing a "Remastered" Game? or a Part 2?
where you Might make improvements to the story ("this would be better if I did ");
improve the "Art"/rendering; maybe add some animation in places. just asking.

Once I have played game, I will post my thoughts/critique here, or new a thread.
Originally I was thinking of doing a long form of the sister corrupting the family but then that was becoming a really big project. Even for this one limiting it to just two cut scenes a day was rough, wanted to have it out to like 3 per day but I felt that it was to much for my first time game creation would take too long to create.

If you enjoy corrupting a village and don't mind futanari with pubic hair and hairy armpits I would highly recommend village of nightmares. That is one of the games that inspired me to create this content.

Most likely not on a remaster, or at least not in the near future. If I were to make a remastered edition I would just rather take that time and make the sequel for this game where the sister corrupts the rest of the family. Right now I am changing it up a bit and working on some thing completely different. Still a porn game but something that is more normie friendly, may or may not have futanari.
 
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I'd say the artstyle is probably the biggest part of it. That and I dont really like sissification. Not that I have a problem with femboys or traps or w/e but being the initial instigator of process...not a fan. That shouldn't be forced. Same reason I don't like forced gender bending. But that's just me, I know some people get a kick out of that and I know the theme is corruption. Teasing at a previously existing desire is a bit different though. Like if the character was trying to hide it or something.
Also futa on male is a very specific gripe for me. some things are ok but not others. The other way around is fine though and traps get a pass too(futa on trap or futa too that is).. Anyway a lot of this is subjective and just my view so remember to create what you like. That will give you the best outcome.

Otherwise I really liked the content in the sense of what was happening, but not so much how it was happening. If that makes sense. Some of the dialog was hot. Like the solo scene and parts of the foot massage scene but its definitely still rough. At least IMO.
Thanks for the feedback! Yeah some of that will just be my own content, like the idea of corruption in hentai games. Totally understanding on the art, I am my own worst critic on it. Right now I think I have come a lot further from when I was first working on this. Glad that you were able to enjoy some of it at least :)
 

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Originally I was thinking of doing a long form of the sister corrupting the family but then that was becoming a really big project. Even for this one limiting it to just two cut scenes a day was rough, wanted to have it out to like 3 per day but I felt that it was to much for my first time game creation would take too long to create.

If you enjoy corrupting a village and don't mind futanari with pubic hair and hairy armpits I would highly recommend village of nightmares. That is one of the games that inspired me to create this content.

Most likely not on a remaster, or at least not in the near future. If I were to make a remastered edition I would just rather take that time and make the sequel for this game where the sister corrupts the rest of the family. Right now I am changing it up a bit and working on some thing completely different. Still a porn game but something that is more normie friendly, may or may not have futanari.
Do you have a link to this game, Villiage of Nightmares"? I just did a search and couldn't find it.
 

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Do you have a link to this game, Villiage of Nightmares"? I just did a search and couldn't find it.
Gotchu fam.

https://f95zone.to/threads/village-of-nightmare-v1-6-akuochichance.2013/

Interesting that it wasn't showing up in f95zone search engine. Was able to find the sequel, village of nightmare 2, but not the original. I searched for it on google and was able to find the link. A little warning you may want to use the guide, it can get a little bit obtuse and there are some minigames that do get frustrating but overall 8/10 if you want some good ole extreme ridiculous hentai.
 

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Virustotal show to be Trojan.Generic.gyxrm
That is interesting, don't know what is flagging it as trojan? Literally exported it from the Ren'py program. I see that the comment from that link is: " 1 security vendor and no sandboxes flagged this file as malicious" not seeing what file it is claiming to be malicious.

Actually looking more at that report It looks like it is saying the execute file is the issues? Looking under the detection tab it is only 1 site out of 60 that is flagging it. Among those are security vendors such as Microsoft, McAfee , Kaspersky and Malwarebytes saying that they don't detect anything. So I am thinking it is just that single vendor and that there isn't anything there. Up to you either way.
 
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I think the weirdest picture for me is the one where she's jerking off AND sniffing her own foot (2nd pic)...
 
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