But what is it?
She IS funny and cute when pouting.
But in the process you made 2 characters "a piece of shit". There are other ways to flash out a character.
Love between the couple <=> Lust on the side.
The stronger the love - the stronger lust we'll feel. Because you indulge in lust
despite this love.
It's a basic principle of 'contrast'.
True and real.
Every femboy needs to be protected and "taken care of". At all cost.
I didn't see it. Maybe later? I did play only the beginning.
Would be nice.
I agree. I liked how the dialogues were flowing, and the sex scenes were hot.
100% agree. There needs to be struggle and back'n'forth for the plot to be interesting for more than 10 min.
But there's difference between "LI doesn't like MC" and "LI and MC are behaving like 'a piece of shit' towards each other" - as you yourself described them.
Yeah - but that's why you have villains and antagonists in such stories. You need someone to create drama - so you have a villain to create you drama and the struggle.
You can even have MC be a true villain.
But if everyone acts like a villain - everyone is "a piece of shit".
"Accord" and "Trouble in the Arena" did exactly the things you described - but their characters are not presented as "a piece of shit". It can be done.