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Daryle1

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I mean Nadya and milly and the pink hair girl
Okay yeah that's totally agreeable lol. I hear it too.

But Nadya IS black though right? And both Nadya and Erika are obviously heavily influenced by gyaru culture so I think they were intentionally made that way to fit their vain and stylish slut personalities. But I guess if that doesn't work for you that's also fine bro
 

NeoEros

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Maybe it's because I haven't played the netori since before the last update that was just an intro, but holy shit the yap just goes on and on and on. It's been more than an hour and they're still just talking. I mean I appreciate how well written the dialogue is, but shit can you yap less?
perfectly sums up my experience lol. It just felt so stretched out for no reason, I was clicking my mouse like crazy because the yapping just went on and on.
 
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Rexermus

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Finally played the update. Man those scenes were fantastic. The development with Elysia, Erika and Amelie was so worth the wait. And I KNEW it I knew Nadya was showing who the owner of Erika's condom supply was, granted she refused to give names, but seeing Erika's preconceived notions come crashing down was so glorious
 

Azadude

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Okay yeah that's totally agreeable lol. I hear it too.

But Nadya IS black though right? And both Nadya and Erika are obviously heavily influenced by gyaru culture so I think they were intentionally made that way to fit their vain and stylish slut personalities. But I guess if that doesn't work for you that's also fine bro
Nadya isn't black, she's just a gyaru.
 

MaturePro3

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There are works that seek to impress, and others that simply breathe. This visual novel belongs to the latter. It lingers — luxuriates, even — in its words, perhaps too fond of their music. The dialogue stretches on, looping like a half-forgotten melody, yet within that excess there’s a rhythm, a pulse that quietly draws you in.

Visually, it is a triumph. Every line, every shade, seems to glow with intent. The art doesn’t merely depict beauty — it understands it. There’s a sensual intelligence at play, a patience that turns the curve of a smile or the brush of a hand into something almost sacred.

Its moments of intimacy, though abundant, are less about suggestion than exposure — more conflagration than candlelight. They repeat, yes, but like verses of a familiar song, each with its own subtle inflection. The protagonist’s encounters are crude conquests, but also quiet explorations of desire, rendered with a sincerity that disarms and sometimes provokes.

Dialogue is too long, too indulgent, and far too fond of its own poetry — and yet, when the final image fades, one is left not with exhaustion, but a kind of wishful gratitude.

For beneath its ornament and excess, it has a soul — and that, in this genre, is a rarity indeed.
I only read your essay cause I saw your pfp. I will say it is worthy of such a pfp. Good job.
 

Krinkelz

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There are works that seek to impress, and others that simply breathe. This visual novel belongs to the latter. It lingers — luxuriates, even — in its words, perhaps too fond of their music. The dialogue stretches on, looping like a half-forgotten melody, yet within that excess there’s a rhythm, a pulse that quietly draws you in.

Visually, it is a triumph. Every line, every shade, seems to glow with intent. The art doesn’t merely depict beauty — it understands it. There’s a sensual intelligence at play, a patience that turns the curve of a smile or the brush of a hand into something almost sacred.

Its moments of intimacy, though abundant, are less about suggestion than exposure — more conflagration than candlelight. They repeat, yes, but like verses of a familiar song, each with its own subtle inflection. The protagonist’s encounters are crude conquests, but also quiet explorations of desire, rendered with a sincerity that disarms and sometimes provokes.

Dialogue is too long, too indulgent, and far too fond of its own poetry — and yet, when the final image fades, one is left not with exhaustion, but a kind of wishful gratitude.

For beneath its ornament and excess, it has a soul — and that, in this genre, is a rarity indeed.
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Bingoogus

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Yeah add me to the "lot of talking without saying anything, but the rest is good" crowd. Sex scenes are great but whilst i want story to stitch sex scenes together, this story is treading water... so much blah blah blah... you could swap half of it out for movie reviews and lose nothing of value... sure, it might be realistic, life isn't a tight script, but god it makes for boring viewing...
 
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NeoEros

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There are works that seek to impress, and others that simply breathe. This visual novel belongs to the latter. It lingers — luxuriates, even — in its words, perhaps too fond of their music. The dialogue stretches on, looping like a half-forgotten melody, yet within that excess there’s a rhythm, a pulse that quietly draws you in.

Visually, it is a triumph. Every line, every shade, seems to glow with intent. The art doesn’t merely depict beauty — it understands it. There’s a sensual intelligence at play, a patience that turns the curve of a smile or the brush of a hand into something almost sacred.

Its moments of intimacy, though abundant, are less about suggestion than exposure — more conflagration than candlelight. They repeat, yes, but like verses of a familiar song, each with its own subtle inflection. The protagonist’s encounters are crude conquests, but also quiet explorations of desire, rendered with a sincerity that disarms and sometimes provokes.

Dialogue is too long, too indulgent, and far too fond of its own poetry — and yet, when the final image fades, one is left not with exhaustion, but a kind of wishful gratitude.

For beneath its ornament and excess, it has a soul — and that, in this genre, is a rarity indeed.
for a moment I sincerely thought this was sarcasm... well, at least your pfp checks out.
 
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RedBrak

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Yeah, there is a "dom"-route inside fxf, but you still cant avoid getting cucked, fucked and manipulated.
When I first heard of this route, I had high hopes, but was quickly disappointed.
That's just the beginning, if you go Dom it clearly ends with the MC winning (and that implies she'll stay dom and winning in future patches), and it's not cucking? Nadya isn't your girl in this route at all, you literally reject her yourself before it even starts, so it doesn't even remotely qualify as cucking.
 

Vye Agra

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Yeah add me to the "lot of talking without saying anything, but the rest is good" crowd. Sex scenes are great but whilst i want story to stitch sex scenes together, this story is treading water... so much blah blah blah... you could swap half of it out for movie reviews and lose nothing of value... sure, it might be realistic, life isn't a tight script, but god it makes for boring viewing...
I agree but there are def some funny moments. I feel like the writing itself is low key annoying during the sex scenes too Esp with the MC. She says like one thing but 9 different ways. I agreed with sophie when she mentions that the mc talks too much.
 
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Vooch_

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Use the save before day 4... I suggest you load the end of night 3 save, that works for me... if you're trying to use the saved from the morning update, that simply doesn't work, so you have to load even before the morning update to actually start a bit further...
I dont have that save... guess ill have to start over. Thanks though.
 

Meaning

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Liked the overall update, while overly on the dialog part, it moved the plot forward quite a bit. Curious as to what Caroline is cooking with that phone call. Hopefully there won't be any funny business with the boyfriend (not because the situation per se, but because I dislike characters like him the most), would absolutely suck if so, especially if it's with our precious Amelia.

Eagerly looking forward to the next NTR update, having those 3 girls taking the spotlight will make for a great time.
 
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