- Sep 19, 2022
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Just finished this update. Julia is my current top LI from any game, hands down. I'm so interested to know her and the MC's history. It sounds like, if not responsible for it, she feels guilty for not being able to previously save him which lead to his death. So, while the vessel may be new, the MC was previously alive and with her. Seems like she is with the MC's father for the purpose of getting the MC back, since she said once the MC is up to strength her deal with the dad is over. I need to go back and make other selections with her to see if those lead to any more information.
There are a few issues with this chapter, though; a few animations that shouldn't be looped that were, and the music in that last scene with Meredith didn't really fit. I ended up muting it because it was killing the vibe of the scene. Also, I can't tell if the dev/writing is English speaking or not. Some of the sentences are very well constructed, and others have common ESL mistakes. Could use a once-over for the misuse of words and spelling mistakes, but they really didn't get too much in the way of the flow of reading.
There are a few issues with this chapter, though; a few animations that shouldn't be looped that were, and the music in that last scene with Meredith didn't really fit. I ended up muting it because it was killing the vibe of the scene. Also, I can't tell if the dev/writing is English speaking or not. Some of the sentences are very well constructed, and others have common ESL mistakes. Could use a once-over for the misuse of words and spelling mistakes, but they really didn't get too much in the way of the flow of reading.