Just started this, and it seems good so far but the Dev really needs to fix a lot of the grammar/dialogue.
Lots of past tense used for words that should be in present tense, etc. Really nice renders though. It's just a shame these VN's with such nice renders neglect the details of the writing aspects, which are just as important. I can't get as immersed personally when there are this many errors with the writing.
Will be keeping an eye on this though, seems very promising and I like the concept + beautiful renders. Fixing up the grammar will definitely make it great. Good luck to the Dev!