VN Ren'Py Game of Inches [vC1.E3.1] [Remveer]

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cooldevo

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one word Jessica but joking aside I still need to play the update and my memory feels like it's shit besides Jessica when it comes to this game. I want to try to get to this update soon but I keep pushing it back for one reason or another.

If I recall there was a heart to heart / wholesome moment when the MC was talking to his sister I forget the context I think she was feeling jealous or something and the MC bought her a car to make her feel better or something. So in general id say the interactions with the girls so far are great especially the more wholesome moments.
I'm not sure 'jealous' is quite the right word.... I get the feeling it's a bit more complex than just her not having money.

If I recall correctly, she was entirely neglected by their Dad and just about all the inheritance money from Dad went to the Son and was released if he meets specific football metrics, and she was left with very little. She was also down because she feels the pressure of living is his limelight, and worried that she'll hurt his reputation professionally. So she's tried to change herself to better fit into what might be expected of her. You can see that in the conversation she has with herself about the different cars and the following conversation with the MC.

You are right, MC takes some of the money he gets and buys her a car. And then after telling her to stop looking at cars to protect MC's image/reputation, but to pick a car *she* wants and be herself.

It was pretty deep conversations between the two of them by that point.
 
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Dessolos

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I'm not sure 'jealous' is quite the right word.... I get the feeling it's a bit more complex than just her not having money.

If I recall correctly, she was entirely neglected by their Dad and just about all the inheritance money from Dad went to the Son and was released if he meets specific football metrics, and she was left with very little. She was also down because she feels the pressure of living is his limelight, and worried that she'll hurt his reputation professionally. So she's tried to change herself to better fit into what might be expected of her. You can see that in the conversation she has with herself about the different cars and the following conversation with the MC.

You are right, MC takes some of the money he gets and buys her a car. And then after telling her to stop looking at cars to protect MC's image/reputation, but to pick a car *she* wants and be herself.

It was pretty deep conversations between the two of them by that point.
haha will goes to show how much ive forgotten about the game yeah wasn't even sure if jealously was right to be honest. I just figure it was close enough or roughly in the same ballpark.
 
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Hey, not sure if you're aware but in the scene when MC is freshly out the shower and goes to knock over the water bottles in Sephora's room, he's missing his beard.
You have no idea the rabbit hole this comment opened up for me. I ran through all of my renders making sure there wasn't another area where I forgot to add the beard. During this I noticed that Montez has not had his beard since the very first workout session where we first met Jessica. So I've been slowly going back and re-rendering every render that had Montez as a part of it. The problem... I could not find the beard I used for Montez for the life of me. Or any of the scenes that he was using it in. It's like both just vanished into thin air. I spent way too long looking for it in my files and then searching the internet because it was no where to be found. To top it all off Montez is my mortal enemy when it comes to poke-through in renders.. It seems like almost any outfit I chose for him will have poke through galore. So not only did I have to re-render the images but I had to go through and touch them all up again. I just finished up the last bit of "reworking" today.

Please be less observant next time and let me live in ignorant bliss! :KEK: (That was a joke please feel free to point out any future inconsistencies)
 

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You have no idea the rabbit hole this comment opened up for me. I ran through all of my renders making sure there wasn't another area where I forgot to add the beard. During this I noticed that Montez has not had his beard since the very first workout session where we first met Jessica. So I've been slowly going back and re-rendering every render that had Montez as a part of it. The problem... I could not find the beard I used for Montez for the life of me. Or any of the scenes that he was using it in. It's like both just vanished into thin air. I spent way too long looking for it in my files and then searching the internet because it was no where to be found. To top it all off Montez is my mortal enemy when it comes to poke-through in renders.. It seems like almost any outfit I chose for him will have poke through galore. So not only did I have to re-render the images but I had to go through and touch them all up again. I just finished up the last bit of "reworking" today.

Please be less observant next time and let me live in ignorant bliss! :KEK: (That was a joke please feel free to point out any future inconsistencies)
I tend not to notice the little details of the male characters as much, especially if they aren’t the main character, so long as they aren’t glaringly obvious like if a character changes ethnicity. And I’d probably have saved some work if Montez really doesn’t have the beard after the work out and just add a couple lines of dialogue about him having shaved and moved on from him, :p
 

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I tend not to notice the little details of the male characters as much, especially if they aren’t the main character, so long as they aren’t glaringly obvious like if a character changes ethnicity. And I’d probably have saved some work if Montez really doesn’t have the beard after the work out and just add a couple lines of dialogue about him having shaved and moved on from him, :p
See I would have but he specifically made a big deal about having one. So it would be a case of him saying one thing and then doing the complete opposite which isn't the precedent I want to set with his character :ROFLMAO:. It was honestly one of those things I think most people wouldn't have noticed (Myself included clearly), but once I did notice it bugged the fuck out of me to know I made the same mistake over 100 times so I had to change it for my own sanity.
 
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See I would have but he specifically made a big deal about having one. So it would be a case of him saying one thing and then doing the complete opposite which isn't the precedent I want to set with his character :ROFLMAO:. It was honestly one of those things I think most people wouldn't have noticed (Myself included clearly), but once I did notice it bugged the fuck out of me to know I made the same mistake over 100 times so I had to change it for my own sanity.
I didn't remember that dialogue, :ROFLMAO:

But even if I had, I'd probably have just assumed that he "changed his mind" because of the girl he meet, I've know a few guys who've done stuff like that.

I've finally been doing some practicing with Daz and trying out making some random renders just to get a feel for posing and lighting and everything, and it seems like after every render I notices some mistakes. Some little, some bigger. Lucky for me for now though is that I'm not making anything specifically for any of the stories I want to make into AVNs. After each one I say to myself, "Okay, from now on, check for this," or, "Next time, remember that..."
 
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Game Of Inches Dev
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I've finally been doing some practicing with Daz and trying out making some random renders just to get a feel for posing and lighting and everything, and it seems like after every render I notices some mistakes. Some little, some bigger. Lucky for me for now though is that I'm not making anything specifically for any of the stories I want to make into AVNs. After each one I say to myself, "Okay, from no own, check for this," or, "Next time, remember that..."
No no, your doing it wrong your supposed to make the same mistake 100 times and then go back and fix it. You're using too much logic.

Daz is fun and there is a lot to learn. I'm constantly learning new things.

I didn't remember that dialogue, :ROFLMAO:

But even if I had, I'd probably have just assumed that he "changed his mind" because of the girl he meet, I've know a few guys who've done stuff like that.
It's something I may have him do in future. I'm not sure, but I'm tired of thinking about that damn man and his cursed beard so I'll be focusing on doing scenes like this one with the attractive females of my game for a bit to cleanse my palate :WeSmart:
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JoeTheMC84

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No no, your doing it wrong your supposed to make the same mistake 100 times and then go back and fix it. You're using too much logic.

Daz is fun and there is a lot to learn. I'm constantly learning new things.
While reading my own post you quoted I noticed a typo, :rolleyes:

My brain gets a head of my hands sometimes and I do the same thing with Daz. Like, I'll notice two things I need to fix, fix one of them, and then move on as if I fixed them both.

Example, yesterday I made this:
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I had to fix both of the guy's hand positions, but after fixing his right hand I totally forgot to adjust his left hand so it was on his knee where it is supposed to be. Same thing with the minor poke through on his chest, I fixed the really bad clipping on his left side but missed the little bit on his right. :oops:

It's something I may have him do in future. I'm not sure, but I'm tired of thinking about that damn man and his cursed beard so I'll be focusing on doing scenes like this one with the attractive females of my game for a bit to cleanse my palate :WeSmart:
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Yes, more of this, :love:
 

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While reading my own post you quoted I noticed a typo, :rolleyes:

My brain gets a head of my hands sometimes and I do the same thing with Daz. Like, I'll notice two things I need to fix, fix one of them, and then move on as if I fixed them both.

Example, yesterday I made this:
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I had to fix both of the guy's hand positions, but after fixing his right hand I totally forgot to adjust his left hand so it was on his knee where it is supposed to be. Same thing with the minor poke through on his chest, I fixed the really bad clipping on his left side but missed the little bit on his right. :oops:


Yes, more of this, :love:
poke through can be a big pain in the ass sometimes it doesn't show up until you actually hit render. I can't tell you how many times I've made adjustments and re-rendered some scene that had really bad poke through only for it to persist over and over. Also poke through can be very pose specific. For example that render of Seph earlier has a tiny bit of poke through on her right breast. I've done at least 10 other renders in that same scene with that exact same outfit just different poses and that's the only one with any poke through :ROFLMAO:. Thankfully unless the poke through is absolutely atrocious photoshop or another similar software can easily handle small fixes
 
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dunrms

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You have no idea the rabbit hole this comment opened up for me. I ran through all of my renders making sure there wasn't another area where I forgot to add the beard. During this I noticed that Montez has not had his beard since the very first workout session where we first met Jessica. So I've been slowly going back and re-rendering every render that had Montez as a part of it. The problem... I could not find the beard I used for Montez for the life of me. Or any of the scenes that he was using it in. It's like both just vanished into thin air. I spent way too long looking for it in my files and then searching the internet because it was no where to be found. To top it all off Montez is my mortal enemy when it comes to poke-through in renders.. It seems like almost any outfit I chose for him will have poke through galore. So not only did I have to re-render the images but I had to go through and touch them all up again. I just finished up the last bit of "reworking" today.

Please be less observant next time and let me live in ignorant bliss! :KEK: (That was a joke please feel free to point out any future inconsistencies)
That's crazy, did you end up finding them or using new beards? I tend to notice small details like that often enough in games, like with grammar, but I know its not always someone's first language so I just leave it be. I only pointed out the beard because you mentioned it was important to the story.

Looking forward to next release! I'll keep an eye out for the beards lmao
 

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That's crazy, did you end up finding them or using new beards? I tend to notice small details like that often enough in games, like with grammar, but I know its not always someone's first language so I just leave it be. I only pointed out the beard because you mentioned it was important to the story.

Looking forward to next release! I'll keep an eye out for the beards lmao
I did end up finding it! Took far too long but I was on a mission. If you notice any grammar or especially spelling mistakes I'll take those as well. English is my first language but lets be honest its overly complicated even if you are a native speaker :ROFLMAO: I haven't put my English lesson to use since HS so I'm a bit rusty I must admit
 

dunrms

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I did end up finding it! Took far too long but I was on a mission. If you notice any grammar or especially spelling mistakes I'll take those as well. English is my first language but lets be honest its overly complicated even if you are a native speaker :ROFLMAO: I haven't put my English lesson to use since HS so I'm a bit rusty I must admit
If you want, I can run over the game again and send you the script file if I find any grammar issues. They'd just be suggestions of course.

Just launched the game just to see a bit of the dialogue and saw that on the disclaimer when you first start a new game you left out an and "n" in "intended", an "a" in "characters" and an "r" in "portrayed". Along with an extra "t" in "coincidental".

Just let me know if you'd be ok with a script file because sending you all the changes bit by bit is tedious, and I'll check it over on my free time. I'd find a way to highlight any changes I've made, most likely just highlighting in wordpad.
 

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If you want, I can run over the game again and send you the script file if I find any grammar issues. They'd just be suggestions of course.

Just launched the game just to see a bit of the dialogue and saw that on the disclaimer when you first start a new game you left out an and "n" in "intended", an "a" in "characters" and an "r" in "portrayed". Along with an extra "t" in "coincidental".

Just let me know if you'd be ok with a script file because sending you all the changes bit by bit is tedious, and I'll check it over on my free time. I'd find a way to highlight any changes I've made, most likely just highlighting in wordpad.
That would be more than fine. Don't feel like you have to go out of your way though! I promise the rest of the game isn't as bad as the disclaimer though! :LOL: I threw that together last minute in photoshop because It seems like every game has them now a days. Wasn't sure if it was a requirement, but decided to err on the side of caution. I did no spell check or proof reading just threw it together and tossed it in just before launch.
 

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Just launched the game just to see a bit of the dialogue and saw that on the disclaimer
You may be the only Player who has actually read the disclaimer now :KEK:. Once you've seen one you've seen em all I'm sure most people just skip on by
 
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