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That's the biggest thing for me too. The game over sex scenes go on for way, way, to long. I think it would be best to just cut out any text done by a narrator and have Chiro say briefly what's happening. Two minutes of "Oh he's getting hard! He's fucking me so fast! Ah, I'm getting pumped full of cum!" would probably flow a lot better then ten minutes of being told she's a horny virgin who is scared and also aroused that the huge fuckpole is gonna plow her pussy.overall this game has a lot of good stuff about it, but the dialogue has three big issues imo:
1. there's like too much of it (it's kind of crazy to me how long some interactions go on for)
This image from the dev's Twitter really made me think of Lewd Leaf Land too. Similar artstyle, similar environments, both pixel art furry platformer games, and this reference to a deer. I'm starting to think it's the same dev lolI had the same thought - it resembles Lewd Leaf Land - Maple Tea Ecstasy by AheGames. Dunno if it's a coincidence. I wouldn't say it looks amazing just based on that though - Lewd Leaf Land was only okay.
3, actuallyLooks interesting... Imma wait for more content tho, from the looks of it there probably are about 2 H Scenes rn. (no idea, please confirm )
weirdly enough i actually also agree with you--like, the stuff that's "overly cringe" in a stereotypical way i wouldn't even call cringe in this context. it's more like, vibes for a lot of the other stuff???I will say tho, I kinda like the cringe dialog. Calling herself a girlboss, her mom saying she's a pogchamp, and getting told to touch grass by her dad, being as awkward and antisocial as Chiro is, this does just seem like what would be said around her.
hiii >~<Perfect. If you are a girl and that describes you, please go on a date with me.
fr tho considering what the main demographic that makes and plays games like this is, it is surprising (and very disappointing) that there aren't more games about neet degeneratesYou would think there would be a ton of games like this
I think there's something to be said for the consistency of it. I'm personally not a huge fan of the writing style, but because the game is so deliberate with it I've almost come out the other end a bit to where I don't mind it.weirdly enough i actually also agree with you--like, the stuff that's "overly cringe" in a stereotypical way i wouldn't even call cringe in this context. it's more like, vibes for a lot of the other stuff???
especially with the tribal wolfmen, their dialogue feels really stilted and awkward
Don't be thinking you the 1%99% of people who commented here a furry
Never even crossed my mindDon't be thinking you the 1%