VN Others Abandoned Gap Year [Ch. 1] [Captive Martian]

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Maggie lost her home, money and scholarship.
Now she only has twelve months to pay for college!​


Updated: 14-01-2018
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Version: Chapter 1
OS: Windows
Language: English
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Silveri

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Quite interesting art style. I kind of like it. Ch1 is short, more like just intro. Dialogues are too slow for my taste (you can't change textspeed). I will keep looking for this if he continue it soon...
 

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Tyranno lolololololol.
 

Dole

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Do you know something I havent read as I make the topic in req or why you have put the Game onhold?
 

Alexander Krisnov

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Maggie lost her home, money and scholarship.
Now she only has twelve months to pay for college!​
Now maggie has to do sex stuff cause this is a renpny game and thats what basically happens.........this is some vague ass intro to a game
 

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Maybe it is a VN about her adventures as a part time retail worker you ever thought of that huh?
 
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Do you know something I havent read as I make the topic in req or why you have put the Game onhold?
Look at his Patreon, the dev paused the campaign till april, but when he is releasing a update the onhold will be deleted from this thread.
 

hopeless

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Why always refering to "Romanian"? Wtf is this for a crazy fetish? i don't like the redhead too..
 

Dole

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Look at his Patreon, the dev paused the campaign till april, but when he is releasing a update the onhold will be deleted from this thread.
I looked the third time and I see nothing.
 

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Marcus looks like he's already planning to pimp Maggie out.

The model itself isn't bad, it's just her clothes look heavily cel-shaded. And her arms. And the little bit of waistline on display.
 

Joe Steel

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Not enough here to be worth downloading, IMO. This is a long introduction with one choice, and the sex scene is just meh. It could be good at some point, but this isn't that point.
 
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Lesee, the MC looks like she's fresh out of a Racoon Corp experiment, the friend looks like a blown-up barbie doll, the father looks like a pedophile priest and the boyfriend looks like the douchebag in a zombie flick whom everyone wants to bite the dust, yet keeps surviving for some inane reason.
Can't wait to hate it!
 
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Lesee, the MC looks like she's fresh out of a Racoon Corp experiment, the friend looks like a blown-up barbie doll, the father looks like a pedophile priest and the boyfriend looks like the douchebag in a zombie flick whom everyone wants to bite the dust, yet keeps surviving for some inane reason.
Can't wait to hate it!
Dude - you spelled "love" wrong.
 
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Look at his Patreon, the dev paused the campaign till april, but when he is releasing a update the onhold will be deleted from this thread.
Well, payments for the Patreon campaign are paused until 1 April 2018, but that doesn't necessarily mean the author has stopped development... Who really knows...

But in any case, I think this visual novel/game shows a lot of potential... It is visually creative and unique, with a mix of traditional visual novel and comic book style... I hope it eventually continues production and we get to see where it goes from there... I went ahead and reviewed it, even if it's on hold...
 
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