Ren'Py Garden of Venus [v0.5.1] [OnionCuttingNinja]

[Xtone]

Alrighty, cool. And hey thanks for letting me know, it's always great to have a clear idea of what kind of story is going to be playing out. Harem is definitely my thing, sharing is not, so I know now this one is for me.

Me and OCN gave a second look thru over the Isabella (Lollipop thot) and we do see where you are coming from, I was the one who wrote that scene and it was more of a "creative liberty proof of concept" than something made specifically for this game.

Because of this, I have already re-written the scene and it now much better fits the overarching narrative, honestly it is a good thing you bring this up cuz even isabella's 2nd event does not fit her 1st, so yes it is only natural it wouldnt fit with the rest of the game.

The guy in the Lyn scene

This is a fine balance, the idea we wanted to transmit with this guy was that the few guys that exist are all ugly, rude, unfuckable and completely and uterly undesirable, to the point that even a girl at her witts end like desperate Lyn would have a ton of doubts about going with a person like that. I dont really know how else we could have approached this as to make it any more appealing.

Regarding there even being other men in the world, while one could argue that if there are no other guys then the issue of NTR would stop existing, but IMO, if there are other men and women still chose the MC willingly, that only props up the MC further up as desirable, which at least in my mind is the opposite of what NTR would be.

 

[Sneak Monkey]

Me and OCN gave a second look thru over the Isabella (Lollipop thot) and we do see where you are coming from, I was the one who wrote that scene and it was more of a "creative liberty proof of concept" than something made specifically for this game.

Because of this, I have already re-written the scene and it now much better fits the overarching narrative, honestly it is a good thing you bring this up cuz even isabella's 2nd event does not fit her 1st, so yes it is only natural it wouldnt fit with the rest of the game.


This is a fine balance, the idea we wanted to transmit with this guy was that the few guys that exist are all ugly, rude, unfuckable and completely and uterly undesirable, to the point that even a girl at her witts end like desperate Lyn would have a ton of doubts about going with a person like that. I dont really know how else we could have approached this as to make it any more appealing.

Regarding there even being other men in the world, while one could argue that if there are no other guys then the issue of NTR would stop existing, but IMO, if there are other men and women still chose the MC willingly, that only props up the MC further up as desirable, which at least in my mind is the opposite of what NTR would be.

Aha well OK then. Yeah it really just seemed at odds with the rest. And honestly I probably wouldn't have even questioned it if it weren't for games I shall not name that just spontaneously drop random NTR scenes out of the blue totally changing the vibe and narrative. Got me paranoid thinking have I stumbled upon another sharing game...? Anyway good to know, glad it was helpful.

And yeah, the guy in the Lyn scene made sense, no issues there. I agree, no other men at all would be a very different vibe and open up a whole load of complications, now MC has to single dickedly repopulate the world.