Hello, Oliz82!
The title, samples and tags made me come. And the result is correct, though it feels rushed.
1. I released the second version a bit in a hurry.
2. I'm working on fixing bugs right now, so I've already found some of them, nevertheless some of them were quite tricky.
e.g.
Dolores shouldn't be in the garden at night.
Thank you for your detailed report.
3. I try to check the game better to find as many bugs as possible, however I'm sure with assistance of players, we can make this game better with time.
The worldbuilding is there but mostly placeholders.
The first version supposed to be the final one and all events should be happened in Dolores' house, however I made it bigger and changed the concept of the game because of players' requests.
The characters are few and different.
There'll be more of them later.
The plot is simple but the way to present it is original.
I didn't work on the plot before, it should have been simple, and it was. However, it will be changed in the next versions.
The photos/gifs are well chosen.
Thank you, I tried to do my best.
Since I like gardening myself, I was bound to try it. And it made me think of another game (The Handyman).
The MC is charged to help mowing the grass of an acquaintance, which leads to diverse opportunities with her and her husband but also in his daily life.
I've never heard about that game, so I might have a look at that.
The characters have good personalities and balance.
It's just the beginning.
"Ye shall know them by their fruit."
The events are well made but their flow is too fast paced.
It was supposed to be a little game with only with Mercedes Carrera.
Many locations are empty. Some actions in the house serve no purpose.
Firstly, the sex systems took a lot of time, and I worked on randomization of the text, however players seem to be not much interested in those activities.
For instance, dialogues with Dolores have to twelve (sic!) options for one single phrase. Abella Danger's fuck descriptions consists of two-three versions of the text and have 3 stages of progression.
Secondly, as I said before, I didn't think that any locations except the house would be in the game, so I had to create concept of the city, the characters and so on within one month.
Thirdly, locations will have more activities later.
The sex scenes are good. The girls aren't just sex dolls and that's really nice.
Thank you, because it took a lot of time and energy, though I'm sure their characters and stories will be improved.
Overall, the game is nice but too little things to do with the environment created.
I truly appreciate your feedback because I feel you would like to make this game better as I crave to. I value all bug comments or opinions how to make this game better.
One might try to devalue my game, but one should know I won't give up and I won't give in because I'm sure this game has potential and I admire by these people who spend their time not to speak ill, yet to assist.
Thank you very much for your time and feedback!
I hope there'll be more people like you are.
With soggy regards,
Deep Spirit