Hm. Something I'm not a fan of is the pump and dump direction it seems to be going. I wanna be able to keep some bitches too.
Not asking for all the characters to have it but to have some sense of "This is my bitch now." Would be hot. Right now it feels too....just fucking but no claiming. Like there's not enough connection to the characters. I dont know the right word to describe it, maybe saying it feels more hollow is the right word. kind of kills my connection to what's going on, in my opinion. That's me, though.