VN Ren'Py Girlfriend [v2.8] [Erotic Drop]

[BulgariAMARA]

The classic: why are you here if you don't like the game.

Classic moronic answer.
This forum is not just for worshipers zealot that cannot see reality and facts, this forum has been made even for criticism to the dev, with the hope that dev might learn from the feedbacks.

It is not really difficult to understand if you think about.

I appreciate you might not have good taste in art and adult game, but objectively the sex scenes are very much low quality, made by few images without a proper set up.
The dev seems to prefer to overflow the audience with a lot of sex scenes badly represented.

Now you can disagree with the reality of it but don't annoy the audience with the childish "if you don't like don't criticise just go away" it is really poor quality statement , learn how to cope with those who think differently

You are a classic infantile asshole, and you are also a boor. Being rude to a woman is very low in itself, but you are rude to the author of the game, who asks you an absolutely fair question.
I ask the moderators to remove the rude from the discussion thread.

 

[Chaoticjustice]

One thing I would like to see is the FMC and Sophia together preferably with the consent of the MC with him watching/joining .... But this also sparked another thought in my head around a story with the FMC and Sophia hooking up it sparks an inner conflict in them both as essentially they look the same thanks to Brian , and they both wonder is it right is it wrong as we'd essentially be fucking ourselves... In the end they give in and start hooking up now this is where the story hook comes in the FMC has been curious to try new things and who better to mentor you than "an older version of yourself" but Sophia has more sinister ideas she see's this as a way to punish her younger self for the mistakes she made which have lead to her life becoming what it is ..... But that's all I have for now, personally I think it's a solid story it would just need beefed out and put together properly

 

[vandal.h]

I have always appreciated criticism, even if constructive, because it certainly increases cultural knowledge.
You are certainly not contributing to any of this, but only to nastiness. Judging by the posts you leave in this forum.

I don't have any constructive criticism regarding the sex scenes but if you are looking for unsolicited advice, I would suggest moving the side story content to a link from main menu and not in the middle of the game. It breaks your narrative to have that stuff in the main game itself. Also why do you have Monique POVs as non optional? Besides MC and FMC POVs everything should be able to be skipped.

 

[-FibaG-]

I don't have any constructive criticism regarding the sex scenes but if you are looking for unsolicited advice, I would suggest moving the side story content to a link from main menu and not in the middle of the game. It breaks your narrative to have that stuff in the main game itself. Also why do you have Monique POVs as non optional? Besides MC and FMC POVs everything should be able to be skipped.

I have, skipping mother and daughter sex scene in hotel it should consider crime...
I think most of us waiting for that moment to happen and when the time was right he just skip after that drunk mustapha in the bar.
The MC side was a nice surprise with that 2 milfs...It can create oportunity of another mother and daughter melisa with zaira in the future if that would not skipping.

also another complain is this game don't have a proper sharing...the mc feel to pasive atleast in mark path...for me netorase is sharing, netorare is cuckolding...but on netorase path it feel like netorare...

 

[Lucrezia&Augusto]

I don't have any constructive criticism regarding the sex scenes but if you are looking for unsolicited advice, I would suggest moving the side story content to a link from main menu and not in the middle of the game. It breaks your narrative to have that stuff in the main game itself. Also why do you have Monique POVs as non optional? Besides MC and FMC POVs everything should be able to be skipped.

The subplot has its own skip button, so just don't follow it and everything will run smoothly. Personally, I find it an interesting story in that it develops around the sin, embarrassment and mixed feelings of a woman. (The story is about a woman who, from being innocent, lets herself go to sin. ) I also need this story to detach some themes from day to day and from one situation to another.
As for Monique, we wanted you to become attached to the couple, but in the second season we will mainly focus on MC and FMC when they meet the characters, so you won't follow Monique and Michael's private lives anymore.
Thank you for your advice and if you have any other questions we'll be happy to answer them.

 

[djsverige]

windows save folder users/username/appdata/roaming/renpy/Fidanzatainglese

i am doing this to help while it should be the dev to give this info from start its not a secret.

 

[vandal.h]

The subplot has its own skip button, so just don't follow it and everything will run smoothly. Personally, I find it an interesting story in that it develops around the sin, embarrassment and mixed feelings of a woman. (The story is about a woman who, from being innocent, lets herself go to sin. ) I also need this story to detach some themes from day to day and from one situation to another.
As for Monique, we wanted you to become attached to the couple, but in the second season we will mainly focus on MC and FMC when they meet the characters, so you won't follow Monique and Michael's private lives anymore.
Thank you for your advice and if you have any other questions we'll be happy to answer them.

Yes I'm sure the content is interesting and of course you have a skip button but my point was that it's bad game design. As a player, I shouldn't have to skip. It wouldn't be so bad if you skipped once and never saw the content again but you have skip again and again.

 

[-FibaG-]

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Sry to ask you but where do you see they fuck?
In my game after that drunk mustapha in the bar is just skip in the morning bed without any sex or action between them kiss or not didn't happen anything in that hotel...maybe they are just sleeping together without doing anything. or my game have a bug and don't appear the MOST IMPORTANT THING.

 

[Eleanorduval]

The classic: why are you here if you don't like the game.

Classic moronic answer.
This forum is not just for worshipers zealot that cannot see reality and facts, this forum has been made even for criticism to the dev, with the hope that dev might learn from the feedbacks.

It is not really difficult to understand if you think about.

I appreciate you might not have good taste in art and adult game, but objectively the sex scenes are very much low quality, made by few images without a proper set up.
The dev seems to prefer to overflow the audience with a lot of sex scenes badly represented.

Now you can disagree with the reality of it but don't annoy the audience with the childish "if you don't like don't criticise just go away" it is really poor quality statement , learn how to cope with those who think differently

u cleary don t know the forum rule,excessif debate about the game is sanctioned! u don t dictate dev how to work.No one put a gun on your head and force to play it.

 

[Eleanorduval]

The subplot has its own skip button, so just don't follow it and everything will run smoothly. Personally, I find it an interesting story in that it develops around the sin, embarrassment and mixed feelings of a woman. (The story is about a woman who, from being innocent, lets herself go to sin. ) I also need this story to detach some themes from day to day and from one situation to another.
As for Monique, we wanted you to become attached to the couple, but in the second season we will mainly focus on MC and FMC when they meet the characters, so you won't follow Monique and Michael's private lives anymore.
Thank you for your advice and if you have any other questions we'll be happy to answer them.

u give us solide choice and chance to make some character combo interaction.

for example there is chance for

• mc + fmc + sophia or mc + fmc + zaira.
• maybe mc + melissa + zaira.

Hope even if mc open the studio,zaira will join him.

• my only problem is the femdom route,why force FMC cheating with johnny? i

 

[Alea iacta est]

u cleary don t know the forum rule,excessif debate about the game is sanctioned! u don t dictate dev how to work.No one put a gun on your head and force to play it.

You have problem to read and comprehend clearly.

Plus a person that kind of enjoy rules and sanctions on an adult game forum is a clear representation of a weak look like.
I might disagree with you but I will never invoke rules and sanctions...

But again we are two different person

 

[Alea iacta est]

You are a classic infantile asshole, and you are also a boor. Being rude to a woman is very low in itself, but you are rude to the author of the game, who asks you an absolutely fair question.
I ask the moderators to remove the rude from the discussion thread.

The inability to withstand any criticism, coupled with the tendency to invoke censorship or rely on a higher authority to restore peace in your fragile view of reality, is a clear sign of a particular generation—one born weak and incapable of handling even the simplest confrontation or critique.

Out in the real world, there are no moderators to shield you.

 

[LWtbo]

Again not a complaint just a observation but it do's seem like the Story.
Actually want's FMC to cheat even if Player has the option for the MC not to want her too.
For instance and i have only played upto two updates ago but even then.
For both events that involve FMC and another Female in order for it to happen.
They require her to cheat on MC with the Female's male partner.
Some will say it's just the one instance that happends thats the Femdom one.
But come on a single Hotel Room with a large double Bed.

The male haveing a afair with one and haveing had an afair or fling with FMC in the past.
A male thats not used to NO and is unlikly to give up on what he wants.
And normaly charms or connives his way into getting what he's after.

As the were out for a posh meal its possible libral amout of alcohol was consumed.
Maybe champagne?.

The female and FMC having had relations in the past also.
Plus the FMC didn't end the relationship the man did.
And she has unresolved feelings about it because she wasn't happy about it ending.

Then the next moring you have the go to his room option thats grayed out bcause you didn't kiss him.
But the other option is Jump now bearing in mind all other options of jump before that.
Were for something happens you just don't have to watch it.

Not saying they did not saying they didn't.
That all three not quite drunk Adults shared a Big bed all night and nothing happend.
It's possible but highly unlikely and that is probably why it was writen that way.
since most would prosume something happend but have no proof it did.

But honestly if the FMC really didn't have any possible intention's that night.
She seems the type that would asked they have seperate rooms.
Or at the least a room with two single's.
Because I honestly don't see him offering to sleep on the couch.

Almost forgot to mention that for atleast the male if not the other Female involved'
The night started with the expectation of it ending in a threesome.

Again not a complaint just a observation anyone that want's to believe it was a platonic sleep over.
Good on you.
Just Sayin.

 

[BulgariAMARA]

The inability to withstand any criticism, coupled with the tendency to invoke censorship or rely on a higher authority to restore peace in your fragile view of reality, is a clear sign of a particular generation—one born weak and incapable of handling even the simplest confrontation or critique.

Out in the real world, there are no moderators to shield you.

If the criticism does not contain rudeness, the authors accept it without any problems. There are 108 pages in this thread, and you can find a huge number of posts with various suggestions and criticism. In real life, for such an appeal to a woman, which you allow yourself, they hit you in the face, and do not turn to the moderators.

 

[Eleanorduval]

If the criticism does not contain rudeness, the authors accept it without any problems. There are 108 pages in this thread, and you can find a huge number of posts with various suggestions and criticism. In real life, for such an appeal to a woman, which you allow yourself, they hit you in the face, and do not turn to the moderators.

yeah agree there is certain way to give his opinions

 

[fuckmywife]

Android?

 

[Deleted member 6873541]

u cleary don t know the forum rule,excessif debate about the game is sanctioned! u don t dictate dev how to work.No one put a gun on your head and force to play it.

It's better to be real than right.

 

[Deleted member 6873541]

to add insult to injury, in the same scene we have a half incest, mother and daughter, this is a triple betrayal, betrayal on Mc, it is the two sluts betray FMC's father. perhaps one of the lowest points of the plot, is the dev tells us that he wants a loving path where they know what happens, if this is not ridiculous.

All anyone cares about is looks and body. The soul has become unnecessary garbage.

 

[verdun01]

The subplot has its own skip button, so just don't follow it and everything will run smoothly. Personally, I find it an interesting story in that it develops around the sin, embarrassment and mixed feelings of a woman. (The story is about a woman who, from being innocent, lets herself go to sin. ) I also need this story to detach some themes from day to day and from one situation to another.
As for Monique, we wanted you to become attached to the couple, but in the second season we will mainly focus on MC and FMC when they meet the characters, so you won't follow Monique and Michael's private lives anymore.
Thank you for your advice and if you have any other questions we'll be happy to answer them.

Regarding the subplot do you plan anymore content for the FMC to continue with her student Kyle.

 

[Lucrezia&Augusto]

Regarding the subplot do you plan anymore content for the FMC to continue with her student Kyle.

In the true story, the protagonist will have a relationship with the student and other students.
But to see it you have to wait for the day to arrive (Monday).