VN Ren'Py Give Me a Sun [v7.0] [Namco15]

[Kitchentable]

So my 2d20 roll failed and instead of creating a haughty High Elf,
it turned out to be scantily clad a Slut Elf.

Sorry, I had to write something totally unreleated and stupid.
With that out of the way lets take a look at this VN/game.

Great visuals, the pixel ladies are looking goergeous.
Very high render qualitiy. Very crisp and clear.
Just awesome.

Me personally I am not a fan of correct or realistic lightning
as I rather see every detail on a render.

The story starts great but after Celeste's encounter with those other 2 elfs
the story got lost on me. Utterly and completely.

Could be a dream sequence. It was rather whacky.
Maybe future updates will shed light on it and it will make sense?

The english is okay-ish.

Some female looking characters are referred to as "he" and "him".
Dunno what to make of that. Maybe futa characters? Maybe it
will be explained in future updates. So far it just stuck out.

Again this is just me but I found the english to be less comprehensible
after the encounter mentioned before. Could relate to me being lost about
what was going on in that part.

I liked some of the references. Didn't like others. Maybe the VN could do
with less of those references? Dunno? Again we gotta see how the story
continues for a final verdict on that. Maybe they'll make sense? We will see.

I really like the fact that it's a VN with a female protagonist and it's not
one of those dumb cum slut types. Lesbian harem. Can't go wrong there.

To sum it up:

Stunning visuals, georgeous character models, interesting themed VN
with the female protagonist and the lesbian harem.
I am not yet decieded about the story, first part was interesting.
The 2nd part was confusing. A thing only future updates will tell.

Me personally I am looking forward to more updates.

 

[CurtimusPrime92]

is there lez twincest? *fingers crossed*

 

[Namco15]

Some criticism:
- The red font is not a good idea. At least give us the option to change it.
- Youtube links. I ain't clicking that in the middle of a playthrough.
- Flashbacks inside flashbacks

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in my mind when Celeste wakes up that is the present time... differences aside like in Breaking Bad

Maybe include this in the OP and at the start of the game to avoid misunderstandings

"he" and "him"

My fault... and that's the softest of the Horrors I've committed

 

[dayumson922]

Amazing game, keep it up

 

[CurtimusPrime92]

Spoiler: ingame update teaser

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so it's not going to get any updates for over 2 years?....according to the ingame teaser?

 

[Klony]

Thing you have to understand is we get this every . single . time.

There are very few lesbian only games, even fewer good ones, yet when one comes out we get comments like that.

We don;t go in their games saying "shame it's male MC, this needs all the lesbian content" because that would be ridiculous and dumb as fuck yet it's okay when people do it to our games and "you're just being sensitive".

Even worse when certain people on here (won't mention any names because he cries to mods and they seem to have his back which is very telling) come in saying how disgusting lesbians are.

After 4 years of that shit me, and others, have reached the stage where we just want to enjoy our games and not have to put up with dumb fuck comments for a change.

Honestly, I've seen so much support for the lesbian tag in this thread. And it needs more. People come into "lesbian-only" games and ask for dick because the tag is not exclusive. How many times have I been browsing the Latest Updates thread for a game where a girl licks a pussy, only to find a japanese harem game with A SINGLE LESBIAN SCENE SOMEWHERE IN THE MIDDLE?

You can refine your results with "female protagonist", but that doesn't exclude heterosexual interaction at all. I don't understand why we don't already clearly differentiate / have tags for the two ways of sex: Lesbian/gay, and hetero. You could separate gay and lesbian sex, but in short, if it has 1 of the three and no others, it's that, if it has multiple, it's the harem stuff. Easy.

I mean it's just a quality of life improvement that helps keep the people interest in thing A in threads that pertain thing A, nothing political or personal about it.

 

[Avaron1974]

Honestly, I've seen so much support for the lesbian tag in this thread. And it needs more. People come into "lesbian-only" games and ask for dick because the tag is not exclusive. How many times have I been browsing the Latest Updates thread for a game where a girl licks a pussy, only to find a japanese harem game with A SINGLE LESBIAN SCENE SOMEWHERE IN THE MIDDLE?

You can refine your results with "female protagonist", but that doesn't exclude heterosexual interaction at all. I don't understand why we don't already clearly differentiate / have tags for the two ways of sex: Lesbian/gay, and hetero. You could separate gay and lesbian sex, but in short, if it has 1 of the three and no others, it's that, if it has multiple, it's the harem stuff. Easy.

I mean it's just a quality of life improvement that helps keep the people interest in thing A in threads that pertain thing A, nothing political or personal about it.

The reason I made the point wasn't because of the lesbian tag alone.

I literally mean these idiots go into lesbian centric games and demand dick.

It happend in Dog Days of Summer, it happened in Mother Lovers Society, it happened so much in Naughty Lyanna that the dev eventually caved and added optional dick scenes which made no sense in a game full of lesbians but cest la vie.

Where was I .... oh, right...

It happened in every . single . lesbian Winged Cloud game.

There is one guy that constantly comments on how disgusting lesbians are and a shit load of other comments so much so that even I, the queen of shitposting, wonders how fucking lax are the mods that this twat hasn't even been warned nevermind banned.

Then another prick saying all women need cock to live so lesbian games shouldn't exist.

At first I thought he was tolling but oh, oh no, he not only doubled down but ramped it up.

So, yeah, some of us are a bit tired of finding a lesbian game and having certain pricks try and ruin it. By that I don't mean the ones that posted here, they were just comments and I don't see any issue with anything they said, I only mean those that take offense to lesbian games and demand cock.

And it happens far too fucking often.

It is only a small group of people but by fuck are they irritating cunts.

 

[Klony]

Thanks, everyone for the comments and support, and the NTR discussions amuse me a lot... the only thing I promise is that the next update is heavily focused on "Shadow", "the Princess" and Nashira, and the next one, of which I have nothing done, for now would be Alcyone and Isilynor. I am commenting on this because the story is already decided, the only thing is that I am going to let you decide Celeste's destiny... in the image of the menu, you can see that... if you take the hand or decide to follow another path... neither good nor bad, just a different way of living life.



Thank you as always!

thx!





NamNam!

Capusotto and Yayo are great inspirations for me.

Mas bien... Lokita!!


Thank you very much for your words, as for handling so many characters luckily in these couple of years I've been able to do threesomes, sex scenes I already know in which environments and which lights I should set to make them in a reasonable time and acceptable quality.

A bit of a joke and a bit serious about that the next update is going to have a lot of old renders... to explain it better this novel has renders that I made a lot ago mixed with some new ones... which means that the next update hopefully won't take that long but you're going to have some ugly

Hey man. That bit of work is amazing. I think the thing people want to warn you of is not becoming another "A Wife and Mother". That game updates once in a blue moon, and has like 20 minutes of gameplay - mostly because of the incredibly high quality renders, which have like 5 per minute of text / reading. Or more. Incredible amount of renders.

Your game is great. Yeah you could use some commas and semicolons here and there, especially when listing off things or making a break in a sentence, and some of the english words might not 100% express what you meant, but that doesn't matter. I did get most of the story. And shit I'm pressed to know more. Why did she

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What happened after

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What the hell is with her group of lovers, like... there's a first one and a new one and

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What I'm saying is, you have enough plot threads for another Game of Thrones. And you have enough references, too. Holy shit. Naruto, Game of Thrones, Vikings, Puerto Rican TV Commercials? I mean damn. Was there even some Marvel in there?
Just don't lose yourself in all of those, and tell your story. You seem like a capable writer, so I won't try to give you some stupid advice that means nothing to you, by publishing ANYTHING you already have more experience than I do. But I enjoyed your story a lot, and I really REALLY REALLY want to know how this story goes on, so please don't overload yourself. It would be a tragedy if this game wouldn't make it past 0.135 or something.

Also, thank you, for being for what feels like the only artist / game maker to upload a game with ACTUALLY NORMAL DAZ MODELS. Not some robot-looking DDD megabust androids with no waist at all that cross the uncanney valley so hard they crash into the other side of the canyon and burn to cinders. Celeste, Sidra and Eridani are absolutely gorgeous, and while unrealistically beautiful, they do look like proper elves, and not some bimbo dressup doll.
Thank you. I was starting to feel like I'm actually weird and an outlier for not enjoying blown up girls with weird proportions.

 

[GreenDark]

Some thoughts after reading it once.

Great visuals. I love the lighting and shadows. The character designs are sexy and recognizable despite having so many blonde elves.
There is potential for good character writing. I like many of the interactions between characters already because most of them have personalities that easily come through in the scenes. But not Celeste. She's sweet and romantic and playful and wise and strong and seductive and persuasive and who knows what else... depending on the scene, but I can't think of one trait that she consistently displays all the time. I also can't remember her having any flaws.

The plot has completely lost me. For 3 main reasons.
1) Bad English. This is only the first version but there is already an impressive amount of text. I really hope this VN can get someone to make it more coherent. I constantly had to stop and try to figure out wtf was being said. This issue makes the other two much worse.
3) Too much information that is hard to care about. The writer clearly has ambition but all this lore, worldbuilding and plot need to be more relevant to the character's lives and motivations for it not to feel like studying for a test to remember it.
2) Far too many mysteries, secrecy and unanswered questions. For the same reasons as problem number 2. Don't make me read a long conversation between 2 people referred to as "unknown" for secret reasons only to have one of them be killed by even more unknown people for mysterious reasons. And that's just one example. It gets exhausting to keep track of so many question marks when there's no emotional attachment to a great number of them.

This may seem harsh but I only bother criticizing when I think there's potential for something good in the end. And I see potential here.

Also, it can never be overstated that there just aren't enough good lesbian stories around. So a lesbian harem VN full of sexy elves automatically makes the world a slightly better place.

 

[Klony]

The reason I made the point wasn't because of the lesbian tag alone.

I literally mean these idiots go into lesbian centric games and demand dick.

It happend in Dog Days of Summer, it happened in Mother Lovers Society, it happened so much in Naughty Lyanna that the dev eventually caved and added optional dick scenes which made no sense in a game full of lesbians but cest la vie.

Where was I .... oh, right...

It happened in every . single . lesbian Winged Cloud game.

There is one guy that constantly comments on how disgusting lesbians are and a shit load of other comments so much so that even I, the queen of shitposting, wonders how fucking lax are the mods that this twat hasn't even been warned nevermind banned.

Then another prick saying all women need cock to live so lesbian games shouldn't exist.

At first I thought he was tolling but oh, oh no, he not only doubled down but ramped it up.

So, yeah, some of us are a bit tired of finding a lesbian game and having certain pricks try and ruin it. By that I don't mean the ones that posted here, they were just comments and I don't see any issue with anything they said, I only mean those that take offense to lesbian games and demand cock.

And it happens far too fucking often.

It is only a small group of people but by fuck are they irritating cunts.

Absolutely with you on that one. Not that I am a lesbian. I'm not even a woman. That's why I said it the way I said it. I focused on the issue that this website is horrible in categorizing sexual preferences. You can include beastiality and exclude vanilla sex, but you can't decide if you want to suck a dick or not as a female protagonist.

I think you can as a male, if you exclude gay sex. But you could still encounter a futa, right? I don't even know.

What I'm trying to say is, it is stupid to not have a "lesbian sex only" option. Even if you hate women, and only do it because I, a heterosexual man, don't want to swallow dick when I read a novel from a female perspective. It still makes sense to have that. But we don't have it.

Anyways, I'm sorry you have to deal with so much adversity. I can totally understand how that is annoying and might make you more aggressive / less tolerant in the long run. I can only advise to stay calm and respond respectfully, to keep the upper hand, not only in the eyes of the mods, but everyone who frequents this site. The commnt that started this chain (the joke about "sadly no dick" and the reply that went "fuck off if you want dick in lesbian games") wasn't exactly levelheaded.
Still, I do understand your position and that it is annoying as fuck, to the point where you get sensitive towards comments that even go in the same direction as the harassment you had to deal with.

I, for one, want an easier time to search for games where a female protagonist has sex with a woman, which would also allow mods to just ban people who didn't read the tags and behaved like an asshole because of it.

 

[-CookieMonster666-]

What can I say about this VN at this point?

Spoiler: Da women doh!

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Spoiler: Game style

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Spoiler: A couple of constructive criticisms

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Anyway, a very enjoyable game and story so far! Thanks for sharing with us, Namco15!

 

[judgenot93]

i really like the characters, but ngl, i have no idea what's going on in this game. a good translator would help a lot (exclamations are formulated as questions, her/him gets mixed up a lot), but i think it's also an issue of pacing. introducing too many characters and concepts in rapid succession and explaining things after they happen makes it very hard to understand what is happening while it's happening.

 

[Namco15]

so it's not going to get any updates for over 2 years?....according to the ingame teaser?

It was a joke! if the game does not have an update within 6 months it is marked as abandoned and I will be executed

"A Wife and Mother"

The difference with the game you mention is that in my novel I don't need to build a romance, two or three scenes per girl and that's all.

means nothing to you, by publishing ANYTHING you already have more experience than I do.

It means a lot, I'm a Noob who was encouraged to do this because I lost hope that anyone would do anything remotely similar... They left me no choice.

This may seem harsh but I only bother criticizing when I think there's potential for something good in the end. And I see potential here.

It's the best... it's the only way to improve... when I can I'll look for someone to help me with the English with the rest I'll wait until the next update to see how many realize what's going on in the story and thanks!

The panty cam is an interesting, humorous, and ofc arousing touch.

Happy that someone spotted it

"(Aladeen)" and "(Aladeen)"

Most will not understand but for now, I am willing to pay the price

 

[Namco15]

To celebrate the release of the thread...

Spoiler: Weekend beers my ass!!!

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[-CookieMonster666-]

To celebrate the release of the thread...

Spoiler: Weekend beers my ass!!!

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I'll be honest here: with the name you gave your spoiler, I expected a boofing image.

 

[Short Lemonade]

Good job. Excellent playing moment but i'm totally lost in the story

 

[jdw6]

Language: English

And Spanish, and German... or am I the only one who counts the text in the background of images as well? ‍♂ probably.

 

[Kreblin12]

Thanks a lot for this beautiful lesbian only game, much appreciated.

 

[Klony]

The difference with the game you mention is that in my novel I don't need to build a romance, two or three scenes per girl and that's all.

It means a lot, I'm a Noob who was encouraged to do this because I lost hope that anyone would do anything remotely similar... They left me no choice.

It's the best... it's the only way to improve... when I can I'll look for someone to help me with the English with the rest I'll wait until the next update to see how many realize what's going on in the story and thanks!

Happy that someone spotted it

Most will not understand but for now, I am willing to pay the price

Hey, if you need someone to help you, I have some spare time. I'm not a writer, and not a native, but I am confident that I can interpret what you mean if you take the time to chat with me about it. Might not be perfectly flowery but at least it will be coherent and in mostly correct grammar.

 

[Space Cat]

So what's the canon relation between MC and Sidra? Are they sisters?