Ok, so i think this has the potential to be the best femdom fame out there if you're keep going, on the level of tot but without koda. Wonderful writing, great art.
The art style for the environement was beautiful before the engine change, and from what i've seen it now seems a bit more generic. Which would be sad, because the previous artstyle was really good, like artful indie game level of good (made me think a bit of hades to be honest).
Other than that it feels like you are a great artist (btw might i ask what your background is) but not the best at the technical aspects of game dev, i don't have expertise in any of those domains so take what i say with a grain of salt, but you might beneficiate from working with a programmer or something?
Anyway, i hope you'll keep going, you have a winner on your hand if you do.