Thank you so much for the review
I agree with all the points you mentioned.
Unfortunately, I’m developing the game alone in my spare time, and I’m mainly a technical developer.
I handle both the art and the story, but I recognize that they are not my strongest areas, though I’m gradually improving in both.
In fact, I’m currently reworking the prologue, as I’ve made a lot of progress since I first published it in May.
The fourth wall break will also be revamped in the prologue to make it more interactive and less "plastic," as you rightly pointed out.
So thanks again for the feedback!
It’s always helpful and motivates me to keep improving.
I really hope to surprise you with the next updates!