Ren'Py Go!Go!PizzaBoy! [v0.1.0] [PozzGames]

[DeeluxeOwnu]

Thank you so much for the review
I agree with all the points you mentioned.
Unfortunately, I’m developing the game alone in my spare time, and I’m mainly a technical developer.
I handle both the art and the story, but I recognize that they are not my strongest areas, though I’m gradually improving in both.
In fact, I’m currently reworking the prologue, as I’ve made a lot of progress since I first published it in May.
The fourth wall break will also be revamped in the prologue to make it more interactive and less "plastic," as you rightly pointed out.
So thanks again for the feedback!
It’s always helpful and motivates me to keep improving.
I really hope to surprise you with the next updates!

Hi i think of testing the game and i saw that you are actually reworking the prologue so before i start when will the prologue be reworked? Because if it's the next update or something around i'll maybe wait. And good luck for your project.

 

[tankerNTR]

please give me the code

 

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[PozzGames]

Hi i think of testing the game and i saw that you are actually reworking the prologue so before i start when will the prologue be reworked? Because if it's the next update or something around i'll maybe wait. And good luck for your project.

Actually, this update (version 0.0.9) already includes the new prologue.

I’d like to add that it’s designed not to feel "heavy" for those who have already played, as it takes into account the money earned, and every item is converted into cash.
The album cards remain intact, and there are some "references" to the old prologue for those who played it before.

If you want to give it a try, you’re more than welcome! As you’ve probably noticed, I’m super open to constructive criticism.

 

[DeeluxeOwnu]

Actually, this update (version 0.0.9) already includes the new prologue.

I’d like to add that it’s designed not to feel "heavy" for those who have already played, as it takes into account the money earned, and every item is converted into cash.
The album cards remain intact, and there are some "references" to the old prologue for those who played it before.

If you want to give it a try, you’re more than welcome! As you’ve probably noticed, I’m super open to constructive criticism.

Thx for your answer i'll test it out.

 

[Wolf_Z]

Keep up the good work, PozzGames! I love the scenes and characters!

 

[PozzGames]

Thx for your answer i'll test it out.

Let me know if u will like it :3

 

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[YouShallNotLol]

Let me know if u will like it :3

Can't believe nobody caught this little bug right in the prologue. I think this line is supposed to be said by the protagonist.

Edit: Ok, I caught a few more of those small bugs/typos. I'll compile them all into one post later.

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[PozzGames]

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Can't believe nobody caught this little bug right in the prologue. I think this line is supposed to be said by the protagonist.

Edit: Ok, I caught a few more of those small bugs/typos. I'll compile them all into one post later.

Uh tnks i'll insta fix it

 

[MineBorn]

How did kety guess my name im freaking out

 

[YouShallNotLol]

How did kety guess my name im freaking out

I am too powerful for her whicked magics.

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[YouShallNotLol]

I have a critique. Madame's event chain where you're trying to figure out how to make Fracola work.
There's too many of them, and none lead to anything (except the very last one). And each of them requires passing a day. It would have been better if they were combined into one or two larger events.
It's just annoying. Especially when other characters like Shiva, or even Speranza, got barely any events of their own.

 

[roeuzinho]

how can i repeat a scene with a carachter? for example , i canot have boobjob 2 x times with speranza? only in the event? i canot talk to her again to repeat the scene?

 

[YouShallNotLol]

I think I finished all the events there were. I hope I did. I'll definitely be coming back for new updates.
Salma is my favourite.

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Also, I've compiled all the typos I managed to notice in that post.

 

[Femboys and Futas]

The Mac and Android Mega links are switched with each other.

 

[PozzGames]

I have a critique. Madame's event chain where you're trying to figure out how to make Fracola work.
There's too many of them, and none lead to anything (except the very last one). And each of them requires passing a day. It would have been better if they were combined into one or two larger events.
It's just annoying. Especially when other characters like Shiva, or even Speranza, got barely any events of their own.

First of all, thank you very much for correcting the post. Despite the fact that I double-check the dialogues, I often miss something, so I’m really grateful to you.
(The part in Spanish is correct as it is.)


As for Madame’s events being all one after the other, the thing is, I’d actually like to have more events like that.
I know that some characters have more NSFW scenes compared to “story” scenes like Madame’s.
I’d prefer a middle ground—I’d like to fill the sandbox with more mini-events rather than “big” ones all at once.
That said, you’re right that there were maybe too many of Madame’s scenes in a row. I could have grouped some of them together.

but I’m happy to see you enjoy it at end

 

[YouShallNotLol]

As for Madame’s events being all one after the other, the thing is, I’d actually like to have more events like that.
I know that some characters have more NSFW scenes compared to “story” scenes like Madame’s.
I’d prefer a middle ground—I’d like to fill the sandbox with more mini-events rather than “big” ones all at once.
That said, you’re right that there were maybe too many of Madame’s scenes in a row. I could have grouped some of them together.

Can it be changed so that tips update immediately, instead of telling you to go sleep each time after an event?
Or a way to trigger those mini-events more than once per day?
Maybe replace clock button with a bed button at night, instead of having it disappear.

 

[PozzGames]

The Mac and Android Mega links are switched with each other.

fixed and tnks <3