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Delusion007

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I'm having a hard time with this game's writing so far, though it hasn't put me completely off just yet. For one, the immediate exposition of why the MC is at the Academy isn't necessary. You could easily cut out the whole explanation and instead use the initial introduction as a hook to pull the reader in, use curiosity to keep the readers invested. The fact that after that exposition is in fact more exposition about a completely new topic, from what is basically a narrator in the form of a "radio" is incredibly jarring and confusing - now we're not even sure what to be paying attention to, and not in a way that seems planned at all. Finally, I am wholly confused by the logic that the MC is the "perfect cover" in this scenario. It's completely contradictory - being the only student who can't use magic in a school of magic wouldn't be a cover, it would be the cause of so much attention that it would make you stick out like a sore thumb. It just feels like a bridge between the undercover agent thread and the lack of magical talent needed to be made but nothing else was brainstormed. I recognize these are useless gripes, but I think the story is just my style normally and I feel it could definitely shine with more polish such as what I mentioned. =
 

evilution382

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Why in the fuck am I suddenly having sex with Kai during Harem choice? He's not been a part of any of the other "harem" choices, I've shown absolutely zero sexual interest in him?
 
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Febui

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This really comes out of the gate with some mystery. "This is a school for magic. I can't use magic and shouldn't be here, but have no choice or the government will kill my family." fucking what mate. "Infiltrate it" fucking why. Get a magician to infiltrate it, why a non-mage?
Girl: "A newbie and you had the bravery to stand up to him."
MC: "................"
Girl: "Don't get too excited."
Comedy. I'm here to infiltrate, so obviously I'm both a non-mage and also incredibly antisocial. You could not pick a worse spy.
The non-mage in mage school makes me think of some really bad ecchi anime from a bygone era. I forget what it was called, but in that world people have a set number of spells they can cast in their life, and in this school the people with huge potential spell pools go, but the protag had a spell count of exactly 1. He can cast one spell in his whole life. Why he was there, I have no idea. Probably wasn't an infiltration plot though, so doubt it inspired this.
"Your lack of ability in a school where you need magic ability to get in will make sure nobody suspects you."
Your tax dollars at work. We sent in the wheelchair-bound parapalegic with no spy training to infiltrate the country's top track and field school. Even though they could never possibly pass an entrance exam, we pulled some strings to get them there. Nobody will suspect that a powerful outside organization is getting this guy in even though he doesn't qualify. This is perfect for going undetected.
it would be the cause of so much attention that it would make you stick out like a sore thumb.
Maybe it's a filter to get anyone that thinks about the plot to tune out.
I recognize these are useless gripes
It's a VN, the plot is kind of important, not useless.
 

SuckylittleD

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Nov 17, 2021
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Why u only give warning dev? You should separate kai sex scene. Fuck im almost gag to see that when i play last update. And why tf i want another men in my harem?
Have you played the latest update? In this version, it’s not just a warning, you can actually choose. If you're interested in Kai's scene, you can select it. If not, the game will stick to the girls' routes. Kai's route only happens if you pick it.
If for some reason it didn’t work or there’s a bug (though I tested it myself and it should be fine), just let me know and I’ll fix it right away.
 

Bobber Tail

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I may be a little behind here, but in the battle with Ella I got 2 missing images, bj12 and bj18. Scene isn't over, will edit is more show up.
 
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Damien112

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Have you played the latest update? In this version, it’s not just a warning, you can actually choose. If you're interested in Kai's scene, you can select it. If not, the game will stick to the girls' routes. Kai's route only happens if you pick it.
If for some reason it didn’t work or there’s a bug (though I tested it myself and it should be fine), just let me know and I’ll fix it right away.
Is there any other scene other than the seraphina one in this update? there is a missing gallery image right before that and I can't for the life of me figure it out.
 

SuckylittleD

Yap Massacre
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Is there any other scene other than the seraphina one in this update? there is a missing gallery image right before that and I can't for the life of me figure it out.
Yes, there is. I assume you're on Seraphina's story path right now, which is why you're missing the other one. If you choose to reject helping Seraphina, you'll unlock another scene with the new character.
 

Bobber Tail

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I don't want to turn this thread into a Windows 10 support thread. What I can say here is that it's certainly not the game that's the problem but some other issue on your end. The log file doesn't say much. You'll have to dig into event log on Windows to pinpoint the issue to see if it's drivers/graphic card issues or not. But like you pointed out, other renpy games are crashing as well so it's a Windows issue and not the game. I've tested it under Windows 11 and Linux and it runs just fine on my end.
If a reinstall happened it would've eliminated the internal saves of all games under appdata. I have forgotten to move them when I move my games to a new computer.

EDIT" Several "ends" in save land were not ENDS. Sloppy work. Just blasted through a couple/few error endings.
 
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dudley77

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What is wrong with Buzzheavier? Won't download and eventually gives the message "
This site can’t be reached".
 

Bobber Tail

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What is wrong with Buzzheavier? Won't download and eventually gives the message "
This site can’t be reached".
I just started 3 Win DL's with it, no more pop up tab. One did require a second attempt. They were on 3 other games, though.
 

dudley77

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That message shows up on every win game download. Worked fine a few weeks ago, but it almost looks like my computer is banned. Paranoia?
 

TheHardBulletin

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The non-mage in mage school makes me think of some really bad ecchi anime from a bygone era. I forget what it was called, but in that world people have a set number of spells they can cast in their life, and in this school the people with huge potential spell pools go, but the protag had a spell count of exactly 1. He can cast one spell in his whole life. Why he was there, I have no idea. Probably wasn't an infiltration plot though, so doubt it inspired this.
I believe that's Maburaho. The protag has a limited spell count, but his spells are overwhelmingly powerful. His power is inheritable, which is why all the women want him.
 
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