Ren'Py Goddesses' Whim [v0.4.5b] [Ncrow]
SFXs were good.
Keiko's grind scene: the first stanza of the first set, does this rise up in itch and idk why that's weird for me but maybe you could bring it lower/ not as high. Everything else was good. Pussyrub was fine, but maybe make an increase of wetness sound as the scene progresses(?) the constant single set gives me dryrub flashbacks.
Skeet SFX: no complaints. Glad it doesnt sound like a Hydropump.
Yui's first SFX set does the same thing with the upward pitch. The second set for the boobjob does not seem as high and it makes sense to me. **Second listen, i realized its probably set on the same volume, but during the boobjob it does make sense, i just personally dont think it should be in the hj bit (probably I just never had a sloppy hj before, so this is just personal).
Hana's SFX for the bj was good.
(patiently waiting for SFX added to all scenes and when you are able to apply voice samples. Really appreciating your work and your details in the scenes)
Keiko's grind scene: the first stanza of the first set, does this rise up in itch and idk why that's weird for me but maybe you could bring it lower/ not as high. Everything else was good. Pussyrub was fine, but maybe make an increase of wetness sound as the scene progresses(?) the constant single set gives me dryrub flashbacks.
Skeet SFX: no complaints. Glad it doesnt sound like a Hydropump.
Yui's first SFX set does the same thing with the upward pitch. The second set for the boobjob does not seem as high and it makes sense to me. **Second listen, i realized its probably set on the same volume, but during the boobjob it does make sense, i just personally dont think it should be in the hj bit (probably I just never had a sloppy hj before, so this is just personal).
Hana's SFX for the bj was good.
(patiently waiting for SFX added to all scenes and when you are able to apply voice samples. Really appreciating your work and your details in the scenes)
Mahko
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- Jul 19, 2021
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A save? There should be one in the last page of saves from Ncrow if i remember correctly or take mine.