A few pieces of criticism here:
1.) How does it make sense that the MC literally meets this new family on the first night, and then after literally not even 24 hours in the game's passage of time (i.e. after the MC gets dressed after dealing with the pizza guy) the narration and interaction with Marnie make it seem like the MC has been at this location for weeks, if not longer?
2.) (This is a purely speculative piece of criticism here, because I could be completely wrong in my assessment of the thread and these plot points were in the original version of the game or something.) Judging from what I've read in this thread there seems to be potentially important key details to the plot that the player can miss out on if said player chooses not to engage in the sexy times with Marnie. (I'm not talking about the potential dialogue options that are unavailable, I'm talking about literal plot points.) I personally am extremely unattracted to Marnie and even doing subsequent playthroughs to engage her in the sexy times is unappealing to me. It would at least be preferred to have these plot points come up through dialogue with a different character (i.e. Jennifer) or at a different moment with Marnie.
3.) I'm personally not a fan of older women/MILFs and would like to see content with the younger ladies. I'm not trying to tell the Dev how to make their game, just hoping for a more varied development cycle.
1.) How does it make sense that the MC literally meets this new family on the first night, and then after literally not even 24 hours in the game's passage of time (i.e. after the MC gets dressed after dealing with the pizza guy) the narration and interaction with Marnie make it seem like the MC has been at this location for weeks, if not longer?
2.) (This is a purely speculative piece of criticism here, because I could be completely wrong in my assessment of the thread and these plot points were in the original version of the game or something.) Judging from what I've read in this thread there seems to be potentially important key details to the plot that the player can miss out on if said player chooses not to engage in the sexy times with Marnie. (I'm not talking about the potential dialogue options that are unavailable, I'm talking about literal plot points.) I personally am extremely unattracted to Marnie and even doing subsequent playthroughs to engage her in the sexy times is unappealing to me. It would at least be preferred to have these plot points come up through dialogue with a different character (i.e. Jennifer) or at a different moment with Marnie.
3.) I'm personally not a fan of older women/MILFs and would like to see content with the younger ladies. I'm not trying to tell the Dev how to make their game, just hoping for a more varied development cycle.
